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Won't be actively playing until I'm out of my burn-out. Good luck and happy roleplaying to everyone.
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Reached my 1 year roleplaying milestone. I really couldn't have done it without you! Thank you all so much. <3
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I'll try to have a post up for everyone else later today. I focused on @StormHeart first because I'd forgotten about her in the earlier round. :3

Was it a fun read?


Yes, it was very inspiring to read these..(>:P) intricacies on the way magic is woven into the world.

Also, I'll keep my eyes & ears open in anticipation. ^^
Well, the wow-factor and average words per post just went up by a million. xD
@Thinslayer

Sooo,.. do you still feel like you're in need of a helping hand in writing the setup for this great story? O.o

@Thinslayer

Ravadon couldn't help but notice how little time it took to actually take down some of these golems. It was quite hard to find the glory in overcoming such simple obstacles.

Though very few people that needed rescuing, he did get a chance to help out some... interesting individuals. Giving them his name, he was certain to meet them again one day.
Though in his hurry, he forgot to ask what their names were. And maybe he was just a little bit distracted by the feminine beauty of a few these.

The moment he and the reaper arrived at the castle, Ravadon began looking for Edward.
That didn't really last long as the bulky Draco-man was hard to miss, sitting down at the kings table with a mug in his hand, a grimace on his face and one foot on the table.
But considering the circumstances, dining ethics were not the highest of priorities.

A short sigh later, the king began talking to the reaper.
The reaper displayed some very impressive verbal nippletwisting boldness. And it even seemed to pay off.
"Just what kind of power did this reaper posses? He can cast a strange fireball that scorches your hand... But mages have put on masks and dark robes before, right? Maybe the guy knows some dirty secrets of the king? Hhmmm..."

"Daughters of the king? Well, well, well. I bet these would look really pretty when I save them from harms way." Ravadon thought to himself. Ravadon put his hand in his pocket. "Too bad I missed out on that tipped over market stand." He remained silent for a few seconds. "Well, if the magician could get away with such a bold move, I could probably get something out of this too."

The thinking ended. Without words, he wasn't going to still the growling in his stomach.

"My liege, we know there to be very little that can locate dragons, let alone harm them. If we are going to return your daughters here, we can't hope to make it back without any form of support. I'm certain your men will be needed here to defend against all those that lure in the woods, hoping to get in." He paused for a moment as it seemed people were starting to look his way. Ravadon was getting louder again. "As we know, you are a good king. One that places no price on the safety of others, whether these are foreigners in service of you or your very own blood. As such, I'm certain and fully confident that will spare no expense in providing us with the support we need to bring back your daughters. And I know it pains you every second to be without your daughters, so I will keep this succinct. What we and your daughters require from you right now are 3 things..."

Ravadon made an attempt at a dramatic pause, as he walked over to Edwards table to take one bit out of an apple and then turn towards the king again. Ravadon began moving away from the table with a step for every word, buying him a bit of time to think. And widening his arms in circular motion every sentence to make it seem like he knew what he was talking about.

"Firstly, a sum of coins. One that is sufficient to get the specialized transport, weaponry and magical ingredients to take down the great red dragon and open the way for your daughters to return.
Secondly, a representative of the crown. A person that might follow up on us and allow for safe passage in name of you, the king.
And thirdly, a specific subset of partners to help us overcome any other obstacle along the way."

He took out a piece of paper and jotted down a contract for the king.
By random chance, Ravadon wrote down the first thing that came to mind for a party:
- The bard, Ravadon of Xyllodan
- The Reaper, the reaper
- The halfdragon, Edward (@Darkwatck01)
- Any representative of the kingdom
- An elven cleric (@StormHeart)
- An intelligent ranger (@AtomicNut)
- A paladin in disguise (@Avali)

Being all out of inspiration for the day, Ravadon handed the king the letter and asked for it to be signed and stamped by the kings signature ring. At least this way, Ravadon had some time to think up a strategy and ask around if anyone had any bright ideas.

It seemed Edward, the reaper and he himself were already on board, so finding a bit of help wouldn't be bad. And with double the manpower, we should certainly be able to find a way to steal back the girls, be real heroes and maybe, just maybe distract the dragon for 50 years or something.

Who knows what kind of rewards awaited them once they were done.

A ray was let down through the wool above the mountains. It brought silver to the marble cracks and a warm embrace to the waving leaves. Laying his vision across the great city that had just stopped griefing, Ravadon clutched his left hand once more. The ocean of the sun now filled with white birds and green sprites. Resting the wall against his right hand, the sweet smell of rosary crowns lifted itself above his shoulders with the burden he had placed on them now.
If there was ever any moment Xyllodan would be brought to his mind, this was it.
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1-Create a fruit seller. With really big and juicy melons. Alternatively, make Ravadon choose between "looking cool" and "safety", as in, put him in a position where he cannot run away without losing face.
2-Infighting can also help. Or just strike them where they cannot do anything. Not all threats are dealt with swords, and not all solutions can be be magical. For example, human shields against Reaper.
3-Stranded-in-a-island-scenario?
4-Maybe the mark of the Hero reacts to some kind of fast travel method. And whose ultimate culprit is either Reaper or Sykes.
5-Pity? Or maybe the prospects of fame and fortune. Also he has a country's worth of an army, plus magicians at his side.
6-Sykes needs no reason to crack down on an a*****e who is wantomly destroying Empire property. Ravadon might be convinced with munneh. As for Edward we can probably question his courage and call him on a dare.
7-It's bloody obvious. Since a direct assault failed the first time, they're trying subversive methods instead of a direct fight. Maybe they have sleeper agents in the kingdoms already.


Considering all that... Maybe we could start by tying things together (by random chance...)
As in, mentioning events that do not necesarily have to do with the story this very moment or being very blunt about it. (Please bare with me as I demonstrate... >.< )

Also, @Thinslayer I took the liberty of assuming the reaper wants to be in the party. In the silent hopes that he will be there to help out on things we're probably too nooby to understand yet.

Well reading between the lines has always been my thing. After all I am the one who rants "Devils in the Details." Then again, I suppose you have many points by which some need answers others where/are meant to come out as the story progresses.

Answering in no real order but going to over some insight as best I can here.



Well, that clears up the things. Thank you for your in depth response. ^-^

@Thinslayer, I will try to have a post up within 24 hours.
Scaling of power is fine. With "a city leveling dragon" being the very top of power you could hope to reach.
The reaper should be around, certainly, but said reaper shouldn't steal the spotlight. Hence, he can be used for supplies, directions,...



We can all have reason to see the salamander again several times. We could even make our quest about finding him.
"Excuse me, sir. We brought a clerk and are looking for a Big Red dragon that can destroy cities and randomly knows peoples names and marks their hands with a mark just like this. ... No, we don't know what's in your pit of doom but we could take a look for some gold and a bed to sleep in?"

"Excuse me, sir. We are looking for an ancient dragon that might know of old technological burial grounds?"

"Excuse me, sir. We're lookin for a Dragon of about..... This..... big. I need to talk to him about his emotions. Have you seen him? ... sir, no I'm not here to claim your soul. Sir, why are you running? ... sir... *defeated sigh*"

To give some helpful insight, Ravadon has some questions:
"Why mark me when I cower away from the honor/glory/pride of fighting?"
"Why put me through something hurtful like the mark?"
"Why attack a city and steal their pretty princess?"
"How did you know my name? I didn't even say it yet that loudly."
"Why do you seem to know Edward?"
"What's your side of the story in relation to the reaper as this is something I'm planning on asking the the reaper first."
1. You're fine.
2. By letting him do what makes him heroic: Questing
3. By taking away power and or making even more powerfull villains that remain hidden and send menacing henchmen towards the two (menace while they quest/reasons for quests)
4. Training montage! => (A couple months pass, in this time, please state how your characters have spent their time, but talk it over with the GM first.)
5. Ehh.. well.. The flow of time is not something that always mixes and matches everything together nicely... O.o But then again, a second and or third problem/distraction can give other plotpoints time to develop.
6. Weak king. Compared to what? Weak financially? Weak emotionally? Does he not have a list of "close friends that owe him a favor or 42" or is he physically weakened? O.o
7. They don't know that actually. I'm certain it won't take another bodyscorching to convince ravadon the dragon did something bad to him. A prophecy, a doomsayer, a magazine(with the dragons dirty laundry in it) in the hands of the right person...
8. Planning. The void does what to cause all these events to happen? Does it burn down powerstructures? Does it hold the dragon captive? Does it seek to summon an ancient evil that would take over the void and doom the world? O.o

*Raises helpful hand*
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You mean 1 post every 3 days or 1 post every week?

I've often contemplated using posting rate requirements, but it always leaves a bad taste in my mouth, eepecially considering how the original The Faraway Land ended. I'm not convinced yet that it's necessary.


Well, I was thinking about it. But I guess I can't really blame others when they can't make it. I'm certain everyone here is devoted and trying.
That being said, maybe we should put a rate on there, even if it is just to remind us all that we could post.
Poll: Who gets annoyed if I only post responses to one or two people? I'd like to keep things moving if possible.


I don't mind.
Question: How about we take this on a post by 3 days/week basis or something instead?
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