Someone delete this
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Bonus: She might be able to piece together that they're headed after Ana if she heard their conversation. Marco just told Lucca he was headed for "the girl that was just on TV"
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Ah, awesome. Just so you know I edited it so Marco is now making off with Lucca's bike. In case you want to edit.
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Awesome! Would you be offended if I said Lucca left his keys in it? I'll prolly go and edit it, then.
And would he really do that to his long-lost little brother? :)
@Styxx Acheron Haha, nah no one else has mentioned it yet.
Yea I'm looking forward to seeing how you explain it to the other guys.
@Dark Light @Styxx Acheron [@Ashevelender]
I've got it! So my main issue is that Marco wouldn't be willing to just stick around if it seems like his only ticket off the planet is going to get killed by mercenaries. How about the car he just stole belongs to one of your characters?
"Just gimme my clothes back!" she loudly demands in a shaky voice. Pointing to the suitcase with her good arm. Suddenly having lost all the confidence and attitude from earlier.
"Look, I'm leaving. I, I just want to go now. Keep your money, you can't just throw women around. You dislocated my arm!"
Anya was good, tears even began to roll down from her eyes. Her voice wavered with distress. Sure this was a rough neighbourhood but there was still always someone ready and willing to jump to a pretty girls aid and usually at least one other who was drunk or violent enough just waiting for any excuse to fight someone.