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2 yrs ago
Current Look at that, looks like I'm back!
5 yrs ago
In the middle of exams. Apologies to all RPs for the silence. Responses will come soon tho!
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5 yrs ago
Wildest thing I learned was that the Mistborn series is loosely tied with the Stormlight Archive in this incredible novel universe Sanderson is making.
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5 yrs ago
I think The Long Night was amazing. The Battle of Helm's Deep for GoT, and it pulled it off wonderfully.
5 yrs ago
This is a bit late, but 2019 has officially been blessed by Tom Brady. Thank you for coming to my TED Talk.

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Yo! I'm Torack, you can call me Jay!

I've been RPing for a long, long time. I blame it on my overactive imagination, but it's a wonderful medium to put all these creative ideas into some sorta use. My favourite genre is fantasy. Straight up fantasy. It can be high fantasy, low fantasy, dark, modern. I love fantasy, grew up with it. I also like sci-fi, dystopian settings, etc.. Characterization and character driven stories are my favourite type of RPs, I like seeing them grow and change and the way characters react to completely shit and horrible situations. It's always a fun time.

Personally, my hobbies include reading, although recently the only types of reading I've been doing is from text books ffs. I like sports, any type of sport really, except soccer. My legs are way too clumsy for that sport. Music is something I love, R&B mostly, although I'll listen to mostly anything.

I also love pie. Pie is life, especially pecan pie. It's damn near traumatizing knowing that I haven't eaten any in like five years. Sad times.

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Lucivar DeLuxor

Dene Nehel




He watched in horror as the blade jammed into the Queen's neck even as he was choking the assassin, trying to give him every chance to not do what he had come here to do. And yet, there it was, the killing blow. He watched, his eyes widening and jaw hanging open as he saw the blood pouring down her neck and onto the dress, saw her eyes fill with shock and pain before collapsing onto the floor, chocking and gurgling on her own blood.

Lucivar's entire world began to collapse on itself. He had not at all expected this. An assassination, out of no where. He should have been prepared, should have caught the scent but he was far too busy doing... he didn't even know. Politics and all of its bullshit had blindsided him. And now that the Queen was killed, murdered before his eyes, the citizens in this territory were going to go under the fist of that bitch of a queen he'd been so desperate to keep out.

He suddenly felt a shove from Tristan pushing him back a step and he responded.

His hand lashed out, the craft blooming outwards in a sudden wave in an attempt to engulf the Prince and lift him from the floor, binding his hands to his body. "What have you done," he asked turning to him, his eyes filled with shocked rage, "you damned fool! What have you done?" Without waiting for an answer, he flung the Prince across the room, sending waves upon waves of Craft to pummel and slam to his body, causing the surrounding walls to crack and chip from the onslaught in an attempt to crush the Prince, his waves increasing in ferocity as he drew closer to the Prince until his nose was mere inches from Tristan's.

"Consider this your penance," he said with bared teeth, "for bringing ruin upon the innocents who lived here. They do not deserve what they're about to get, and may their souls tear you to pieces in hell!"
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Dorenas Nil


23|male


Appearance:
Dorenas is of average height for a man with broad shoulders and an incredibly wide back, one arm almost noticeably larger than the other, his hair black mixed in with some darker and lighter shades of brown flows down beyond his shoulders when he lets it loose, but often he keeps it in a sort of messy bun to keep the strands out of his stark blue eyes, and surrounding his face is a thick and somewhat short beard that he keeps well groomed and shaped.

And although there are no visible scars on him, he does have a rather nasty claw-mark scar on his abdomen where a bear had nearly killed him in his early years, leaving the muscles there deformed and misshaped, and something that he's deeply insecure about. He also has several burn marks on his back along several other scars that came long with his relatively dangerous life. Despite it all though, he always has something of a small smile on his face, his eyes always glinting with mirth despite all that he's been through.

Flare:
Dorenas can control the number of matter around him. That is to say, he can multiply an object multiple times, making multiple copies, the number of which depend greatly on the size of the original object. Often, he does this to keep his quiver filled with arrows. Then, there's also the fact that he can make an object larger than it originally was, or smaller however this doesn't come as easily to him as multiplying simple things.

The number of items he creates from a single object is what determines how much Adamant he uses, and he found he can make far more items of a simple and small nature without burning too much Adamant, just enough so that he could use his Secondary Flare to have a boost over the average man. Whereas using his Primary Flare on larger objects, the larger it is the more Adamant he has to burn, leaving him little for the Secondary Flare if any. Making items larger and smaller, he found interestingly enough, burns through his Adamant almost completely on small objects and for this reason it's a feature of his power he rarely ever calls up.

History:
His past isn't something that Dorenas likes to talk much about, always skirting away from it or giving vague answers when someone asks him about it. Born to a rich and wealthy family, Dorenas was brought up pampered; everything he wanted was given to him and since his family resided in Barclaybend, everything he ever wanted was within reach. Moreso because his family was one of the largest merchanting families within the island, owning copious amounts of land, caravans, and ships that travelled throughout the islands, but most of their money came not only from trade, but from sponsoring smaller merchant families, thus giving them a large amount of stake on most of the goods being traded if not outright owning some of them.

From a young age, despite being pampered, he was made to realize that he would eventually inherit the wealth and responsibility that his father held and so his studies in commerce, politics, philosophy, and history were extraordinarily extensive. By the age of fourteen, he was schooled and knew much of his father's business to the point where he was running a portion of his father's well oiled machine himself, although there was much aid in the form of his uncle who was at the time training him. Several years passed, and at the age of sixteen he was sent to Hatkadedyet to a particular merchant family that hadn't paid his family in several years. However, before he got to the city the caravan he was travelling with were attacked by members of a guild waiting for them on the road. The caravan guards, although skilled with Adamant, were no match for the assailants and were quickly slaughtered. Fearing for his life, Dorenas ran into the nearby copses and ended up running into a small pack of bear cubs, and before he realized it the mother bear was on top of him, her claws tearing into his abdomen and biting down on his chest.

It was all he remembered of that, his memories jumping to waking up in a small cabin, his body filled with aches and pain, his left arm bound in red, postulating gauze and his hand deformed into a meaty mess. The cabin belonged to a hunter by the name of Eleren, a woman who decided she'd had enough of society and lived out in the woods away from it all. She nursed the young Dorenas back to health, doing her best to heal his left hand, but try as she might his ring and pinkie finger were permanently bent down, unmoving and without feeling. It was then that she'd given him his fist taste of Adamant and he instantly Flared. Over the next several years, she helped him hone and figure out his skills.

At the age of twenty he went back home where he discovered that his family thought him long dead, that his mother had died of grief, and that his father had fallen ill because of her death. After spending some time with his father and visiting his mother's grave he began almost obsessively trying to find out the guild that had attacked him so many years ago, then leaving the responsibility of becoming Head of the Family to his younger brother, Dorenas left his home and travelled to Dilei to become a guild member.
I'll have my character sheet up hopefully by tomorrow!
I've been waiting for the third book in the Stormlight Archive for ages! But yeah, I agree, Misborn series is up there!
This is very reminiscent of the Misborn series, so I'm definitely jumping up on this one! Count me as interested!
Alright, I think I'm finally done with my character
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