Wildman13

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@6slyboy6 Well we do have the men all we need are the ships. XD

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@Wildman13

small point.. if you just used the cannons to fire thin darts with the same thrust you could easily wound a capital ship. a cannon to fire a small house into space, or near space could send a dart (think telephone pole) into space and do really terrible things to the ships. while i thinks its a facinating concept i find it difficult to believe. Personally i would say your best bet would be to capture EOM orbital defense and use it against them.

not trying to make your life harder i swear, just adhering to plausibility.

@Sophrus

I know but I prefer them being used as a boarding method for my race cause it fits them better.

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I vote 2 too cause I desperatly need more ships for my race.

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@Wildman13 "just 2 and a half stories tall."

I feel like they are massive still, but please tell me what exactly is their purpose, if not to shoot down ships in the sky.

@6slyboy6

Their real purposed is that they are a form of troop transport for the Rarians like the escape method that the Rarians used to escape.

They are oversize cannons designed to launch sky piercer rounds(basically rounds made for boarding ships). though they don't have enough power to hit anything out beyond the stratosphere.

But basically this shells when they hit the ships it will latch onto the ships, giving the Rarians inside enough time to get inside the ships.

As the exact size of the cannons there are three types of this from the portable ones designed to launch an individual to a certain distance, there are the massive ones that can hit something in the stratosphere.

for the Rounds they would be the size of a small house just enough to house a giant and a few animal morphs inside.

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[@Wildman] "Soon the experimental Sky Piercer cannons were finished and were hauled into the underground tunnels placing them in key strategic locations underground and with their crew with them, they are tasked to produce or procure weapons for the time until they were needed again, soon these monstrosities of iron and metal were hauled into the tunnels fading into the darkness by dragged by equally monstrosities the Rarians where able to conjure in their time of isolation."

I have multiple problems with this. For one, you never mentioned such massive guns before, in fact, you barely got into producing your own small arms. Understandably, I don't see how this convenient equipment happened to be convenienty finished on the day of the EOM assault. Second, and this is less of a GM and more of a reader advice, the following sentence is almost 4 lines long, and yet it is a single sentence. Sometimes I struggle to understand what you are writing, because you connect so many and words to make these monsters of a sentence. I am not the best writer either, but I think you should make many small sentences instead of a few of this enormous ones.

Back to then guns, I definetly don't like this ideal turn of events, and guessing by the name and description, you intend them to be capital busters. That is a big no-no. On the other hand, I can see you guys stealing the smaller EOM space guns, and perhaps making similar replicas, but definetly some big ass OP guns. Perhaps if the siege gets prolonged you could make ONE, but not multiple sites spread across the planet.

@6slyboy6

The skypiercer cannon was describe as massive because such a gun was never conceive of before but in reality the guns is still just 2 and a half stories tall.

These guns were never design to take on capital ships they have another purpose.

And I will take your advise and I appologize for such enormous sentences, and I have no excuse I will glady take on smaller sentences as of now.

EDIT: hosnestly the post should have been longer than it is now as I will have to write more of the progress of my race but I have clicked the post buton rather than the preview button resulting to an unfinish post.

But if you like I could finish the post later or we could put it up to a vote?

Or if its better for you we could keep it as it i.

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The beginning or the end

The Rarians were waiting for a day like this, a battle that will go down in history, A fight that will never be forgotten and most of all A good day to die, the Rarians prepare for the battle as joy and excitement echo from their hearts as the time to bear arms gets closer as an results all production increases as they blissfully hammer away at their makeshift vehicles anticipating the fight of their life.

Soon the experimental Sky Piercer cannons were finished and were hauled into the underground tunnels placing them in key strategic locations underground and with their crew with them, they are tasked to produce or procure weapons for the time until they were needed again, soon these monstrosities of iron and metal were hauled into the tunnels fading into the darkness by dragged by equally monstrosities the Rarians where able to conjure in their time of isolation.

As the research complex inside the mountains finally gets done the next batch of the tools for the war were handed to the populations, from the experimental Rail Cannons designs for the giants and the thunder gun made from the tamed stunners of their past opponents.

Soon the halls gets filled with oversize spider like tanks and other giant beast that they were able to tamed in the surrounding swamps massive reptilian beast that looks like the Komodo dragon that we have and a weird serpentine beast that has the ability to breath a corrosive cloud of poison lethal even to the Rarians near it but now that its mouth is sealed the beast gets locked in place as various Minotaurs struggles with it as they they to harvest its poison coating their bullets with it.

After they harvested all that they needed they pinned the massive beast as they hurried to put massive iron slabs on its body functioning as armor in their body, after they equipped it with numerous guns emplacements making it into a giant war train transporting supplies and pain into the frontlines.

While the serpents functioned as a train the komodo dragon's mouth was forcefully opened spewing green smoke out of his mouth covering that area in a green cloud making it near impossible to see anything, but after a few minutes of confusion the cloud dissipates, now the bunny morphs grabbed a nearby touch and urge everyone to make room for an simple experiment as they moved to the sides and place the torch infront of the beast and urged the Minotaur to open its mouth again.

As it did before it spewed green smoke but as it touches the flames of the torch the smoke ignites, creating a line of fire making the nearby Rarians to cheer out "DRAGON!,DRAGON!" numerous times before stopping and returning back to their work, the fire experiment spark numerous ideas to the bunny morphs as they begin to work on the beast jaws on a system that gives the rider the opinion of immediately opening their mouths as they charge into battle.

Many more machines and contractions comes alive inside the mountain too many in fact that space has become scarce forcing the other inventors to move into the larger tunnels to continue building their machines.

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The entrance of the buried city

Ren and her expedition has finally reached the bridge that leads to the once mighty and impenetrable fortress cities of the Bunny morphs, the bridges were still standing unyielding like the ones that built them, the damage they sustain were indeed severe as most of the bridge is now missing now resting the underground rivers below.

Carefully they make their way up to the gates or what's left of it, as all that remains of it are the fallen gate doors that once sealed the entrance to the city leaving only several scorch marks and scattered remains of the mighty gate house and the charred remains of its the defenders.

It was nothing short of a massacre, the defenders didn't stand a chance despite their greatest efforts everything fell the gates, the city and the citadel all of it fell and reduced to rubble and It pained Ren's heart as she sees the immortalized suffering of her clan and the fall of their glory.

The EOM spared no one as they lit the city into ablaze as the charred remains of buildings and Rarians littered the city from the entrance to the center, all of them still gripping their weapons despite their deaths they didn't die without fighting a fact that made Ren a little happier.


"You can now rest my brethren." She whispers as she pulls out the sword from their hands. "THIS CITY IS NOW OURS." She shouts out with pride as she raises the sword upward, hiding her face as tears fall from her eyes, no one cheered there was only respectful silence for the dead "DON'T YOU FEEL BAD THEY DIED HAPPY!" She yells out breaking the silence "THEY DIED RARIANS!" She follows as she stabs the swords to the ground still crying.

"NOW ITS OUR TIME TO DIE LIKE RARIANS!" She quickly follows making the others cheer in respect of their leader, quickly they secure the other four sealed surface entrances of the city, erecting makeshift fortifications in there place, as the young leader sits down on one of the charred remains of what was once the most important building in the city the citadel, Diy and Shiya accompanies her.

"Its not easy seeing the past right?" Diy asks with his usually serious tone but the rabbit doesn't answer. "I see." He says due to her response "Ok then." He says as he rubs the rabbits head with his iron hand "Stop." She weakly answers before something falls infront of her.

"I know you like this." Diy says before leaving, giving Ren a small stuffed bunny morph toy though half of it was gone and the remaining parts were black as charcoal, Ren finally smiles due to the giant’s gift.

Soon fortifications were erected, though rushed and made with burned materials they were good enough to hold the area for some time, but before they could rest a large explosion shook the city alerting every Rarians in the area as they rush to where the sound originated and with guns in hand they aim at the cloud of dust that emerged from a new entrance to the city.

Soon A bunny morph emerged from the breach, "A Rarian?" one of them ask making the others lower their weapons but as multiply different shadows appears the Rarians raise their weapons again, and once the dust cloud and the sounds of deep coughs disappears they can finally see the others with her.


There were Rarians in the group but they were other races mixed in with them equally confused the groups aim their weapons at one another, "I am Nene, dragon of the hidden dagger." the same bunny morph introduces herself "So you're the ones the EOM wants." A red haired human says with disbelief seeing that there were other Rarians other than the crazy rabbit morph calling herself a dragon.

"I am Ren the fast, dragon of the sudden spears." She greets as she takes out her Naginata. "I am Diy the crafty of the Iron hands." He introduces himself as he shows his iron hand. "I am Shiya the silent of the calm waters." Shiya says her name and title.

Hearing three dragons and three clans in front of her answers most of her questions on why the EOM is here, A Rarian empire has formed under a powerful leader and with the number of weapons and gear they had, they were obviously busy with their own battles but for the humans in the group were utterly confused.

Nothing made sense for them as they sit down and finally had some rest they were all digging nonstop for so many days so instead of trying to argue they quickly collapse to the ground falling asleep.

"Who are the others?" Ren asks as she sees the other Humans and Zenos with them "They’re under my clan." She answers immediately "But no time to explain send a message to you emperor." She hastily said as Ren calls for a bat morph "I Nene Dragon of the hidden dagger serve under you." She says to the bat morph.

"Tell him that the city is now ours." Ren adds as she sends the bat morph to go back to mountain, and without thinking the bat morph departs flying as fast as he can to deliver the two messages.

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And can I ask can the EOM trace all communications via radio?

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@6slyboy6

I might need more time to prepare for the battle if thats alright.

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@Wildman13

UAE? Do you really want to govern 2 races when one of them is threatened by the might of the empire?

@6slyboy6

Oh maybe after this then.

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@6slyboy6 Gonna be honest here I'm scared for the Rarians and I think they're also as scared as I am but they will probability fight it head on cause that's what they do and is the UAE approved or not?