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9 days ago
Current @Kuro: Congrats, you've received the "Fully Developed Frontal Lobe" DLC!
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29 days ago
Happiness is the acceptance of problems, not their solutions. *eats the fortune cookie*
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1 mo ago
If an argument/spirited debate/conversation takes up more than a handful of back-and-forth statuses maybe that means it should be in PMs instead.
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1 mo ago
Oh also, on art: If you feel you don't measure up to "the old masters," look up the camera lucida, Claude glass, etc. Dudes 100% considered tracing to still be real art. Just don't "steal" from IPs.
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1 mo ago
@Marlowe: I say that b/c you need solid fundamentals, anatomy, value shading, etc before trying to "stylize." Otherwise your "style" will be far too limited and you won't continue growing. (2/2)
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Also, since characters are decided now, I should probably mention this. For some added excitement, characters are probably going to be assigned to individual quarters with bunkbeds, meaning y'all are getting roommates. I'm thinking that since Dorothy and Liese's biological sexes are kind of known information for the higher-ups at the very Liese-t (groan), they'd probably get stuck together to avoid accusations of indecency (them being an Absolute and a Light user also helps, since, y'know, Successor of Alexander obviously will be working with the Successor of Arbert Grayle, right?)

But for everybody else, how do you want to go about deciding? I could randomly roll to see who gets assigned to room with who, or I could pick pairs based on who wants to be stuck together. Ultimately, depends on what everybody wants to do.


Whoever gets Kai just has to remember: he needs walkies at least 3 times a day, he won't eat dry food, and he gets anxious during thunderstorms. XD

Dime's handwriting is... nightmarish distinctive. The basic, biographical details have been written in a different hand from the rest of the document, which is thankfully being handled by a professional reader.


Examiner: ...At least she CAN write... *looks up as Kai, the next in line, hands in his own paper* Even a commoner will surely be better than a dog...

*crinkling sounds, the paper opens--it's a black-and-white manga style comic biography with no text and yet a precise level of detail, dynamism, and perspective*

Kai: Gramps always told me pictures were worth thousands of words, so I figured it'd save time! :D

Examiner: What the f--

@Zombehs
Seems like he'll have plenty of great potential interactions with the rest of the cast! ^_^


Interactions such as "Why does the blue haired gremlin boi keep STEALING MY TOOLS?!" *Kai scampers out of the smithy on all fours, a hammer clenched in his teeth, as something that should not have been touched explodes in the background*

@webboysurf
I think Nathaniel's an excellent addition! As far as any critiques go, the only thing I'd personally suggest is maybe adding a flaw or two, or pointing out the negative aspects of his established traits. You did that with his "honorable to a fault" trait, but aside from that and maybe the implication that he holds grudges (which is still pretty tame since there's no malice in it) most of his backstory is about all the positive skills and abilities that were taught to him, and there's not much mention of the things he can't do or isn't much good at. There's an element of bittersweet in the parts about him being "meant" for the battlefield as opposed to his brothers--has he ever stopped to consider what his life COULD be like if he CHOSE to do something else? Of course, that particular thing could feature more in the RP itself as he develops, rather than being openly stated.

@ERode
I mean, the opener did state that Aura was starting to appear more often, and that it seemed like a new generation of Heroes was on the cusp, right? And since we're all in the "childhood arc" right now, we could always just handwave it as "they're all super talented--for a bunch of teenagers, comparatively." Fey could always have a grown-ass knight come manhandle us all on the training yard and then reveal, "oh that guy? He's actually the weakest knight in his unit, he's just actually been fully trained and has battlefield experience whereas you are all literal kids," XD
Basically, that one friend who is talented not because he's super magical, but because he can just think his way through a fight. Read moves, anticipate, find a counter. So nerdy in a fight? Still working out the kinks.


So like, whereas Kai might be the kind of "naturally talented" athlete who can do an unassisted no hands backflip without even warming up, your guy would be the one who can watch a technique be executed, and figure out like, the body mechanics, or how it ties into a combination of techniques, or how to counter it?

And if someone were to ask either of them, "How do I do this move?" your guy would be able to say "Lower your hips, and pivot on your lead foot," and work them through it, whereas Kai would just gesticulate wildly with his hands and tell them "First it's like, shaa! And then you do it like, BAM! And if you did it right, it'll be like Ka-tiiing!" and then smiles while they look at him in abject defeat.

But I'm also little worried about having a ton of princely types I guess? I'm trying to figure out something that plays well off the rest of the cast we have so far at least.


Isn't the whole otome genre just different flavors of princely types? All bishounen, all well dressed, all with terrifyingly long hands, and so forth? I don't think you'd bother anyone by being a similar archetype so long as the personalities and behaviors were noticeably different. A sad broody prince vs a brash loudmouth military kid, or a scholarly push-up-glasses type, etc etc, you know?

We've got like two characters here who aren't actual nobility, if you're interested in diversity then Dime could use some more company down in the pits than just Mister Raised-by-Wolves


"Hey, my Gramps wasn't a wolf!" *goes back to scratching his ear with one leg*

I like how you already mistook Liese for Julian even before the RP starts.


I think it'd be funny if, after he spends enough time around both of them, Kai becomes one of the few who can regularly tell them apart because he does it solely by scent, and then is always confused when other people can't. XD

@Feyblue

Here's my character submission! Again, I welcome critique or feedback from the rest of you all, since I wasn't part of the discussions back in the original interest check. Hopefully he'll fit in well, although I don't know what traditional "Otome" route archetype he'd qualify for! XD

Since a number cap has been mentioned, I wanted to poke my head in and say hi. I've been working with Feyblue over PM to iron out a few ideas, since I didn't originally chime in on the first interest check, and I hope it's okay to jump in like this since it seemed like you guys did a good bit of group-brainstorming in the check. I'll be posting my submission for a Character Sheet once it's been thoroughly finalized, and would welcome feedback from the other players!
Travis d’Arcy

@EnterTheHero@tobiax

LOWER DECK 2

“Oi, watch the merch!”


She--wait, was this person a woman? The pink hair and the robes made him think that way at first, but he...wasn't sure about the voice. And the Japanese style clothes hid a lot of other features that would've been distinguishing. But, whoever they were, they stared at him for several long moments before answering. In his coat pocket, the palm of his hand tensed against his pistol.

”Hm. No, I don’t suppose I am. And I don’t suppose you are, either, judging by the cold sweat.”

Travis let out a shaky breath. They walked closer, flicking the blood from their sword. He wondered just what a pro like this was doing on a passenger cruise. A sword meant getting up close and personal with somebody...an assassin? The thief didn't think there were any bigwigs on the ship...or at least, none of the safes he'd hit so far hinted at that kind of status.

”I have business with these hijackers, as it turns out. I’d suggest you return to your cabin, but they’ve probably knocked the damn handle of, same as mine. I can’t very well leave you here to be harpooned by some Neanderthal, so… follow me. I’ll see us through this mess, but please, don’t end up underfoot. I can’t guarantee your safety if you between me and my enemy.”

"Oh, believe me," Travis said, putting his other hand in his pocket as well, "I keep me head well out of trouble..." But the bloodied figure kept going--and not in the direction Travis wanted. "Oi, uh...shouldn't we be headin' above deck--"

There were two noises, simultaneous, yet easily picked out by their direction and style. Both footsteps. Both groups of more than one person. The first sounded lighter, quieter, except for a distinct, metallic tink tink tink. The latter, heavier, more numerous--by quite a bit. Travis's head whipped back and forth--and the latter group proved to be the most urgent.

The sound of flippery boots tromped down the stairs towards the cabins. There was a slamming from below, and the echoing sounds of the engine were drowned out. A cluster of ten divers, harpoon launchers on point, flowed down the stairs, beginning to march into range behind Travis. As they approached, one of the more eager of the divers fired.

"Right then!" As soon as he saw the rifle come up he'd made a dive for the nearest broken-in cabin door. The harpoon tore right through one of his whipping coat tails as he tumbled to the floor in a roll, then scrambled onto all fours. He looked out at the swordsperson as he straightened his glasses. "There's your enemy, and here's me out the way!"

Now that he was in cover, he grabbed the pistol once more and made sure the safety was off. He popped the magazine out just to check--one in the barrel, thirteen more ready to go--then slammed it back in. The 9mm probably wouldn't do much if those suits had any armor, but it was better than nothing. He tried to calm himself down.

You or them, mate, no choice. They shot first--

He stopped, gulping down fear for just a moment.

I ain't the one holding the bloody sword. Why would they shoot at him first? Just to get rid of the easier target? But why get rid of anyone at all--he'd already seen that there were no bodies, and limited harm done in struggles with other passengers. Why did these new arrivals go for the kill right off the bat? And, again, why him?

"Who the hell even are you knobs!?" he yelled out the doorway, keeping his back to the wall between him and the hallway. No guarantee they'd answer--if tall, pink, and deadly there didn't have them too occupied already--but why not ask? Just to be polite, right? He scoffed at his own joke.

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