Havent RP'd in a while, but this looks really good to me. here is a CS. Hopefully its up to your standards
Name: Caius Ronus
Age: early 30's old enough to know better, still too young to care.
Gender: Male
Relic Description: No Relic
Skills: Mediocre woodworking and herbal identification, swordmanship and field dressing/medicine. Practical woodsman skills and basic military fieldcraft. He does not excel in any particular field but these are the fields he stands out in.
Background: Born into a family of 6 with modest wealth and means. When Sickness took his father and thieves blades took his mother, his 3 older siblings left an adolescent Caius to tend the family farm as they left for the larger surrounding towns to secure employment and hopefully a better life for the clan. Caius grew up quickly out of necessity. Becoming weathered and strong under the hot sun of the fields and occasionally under the heavy hooves of the farms livestock. 2 years after his family had left Caius accepted that his siblings had either perished or abandoned him, having no concept of money he sold the family farm to neighbours for a pittance and sought an easier life elswhere or possibly any information on his remaining family. Caius Eventually tracked down his sisters, in shallow, poorly marked graves on the outskirts of am impoverished Hamlet. They met their ends as "entertainment" for a band of travelling soldiers. Of his brother he found no trace.
Caius eventually enlisted with the army, losing an eye and most of his blood in his first Skirmish, but finding God as some of his surviving fellows dragged him back to camp. He still is not sure how he survived, but the fact he still lives has given him resolve. Caius deserted from the army at the age of 20 and at the age of 25, after years of wandering he found a way to serve God and do his will by joining the ranks of the Church. Cauis learned to fight with a vigour and dedication that made him stand out amongst his peers. Although he lacks an eye, decent equipment and even adequate training. Caius' dedication, faith and perseverance has elevated his station in the Church. He now roams the land under orders to seek out corruption and bring the people into the light.
Appearance: Caius is a tall man, with sun-bronzed skin and shoulder-length coarse brown hair. He wears a white cloth wrapped around his forehead covering his missing eye and a long olive cloak with the symbol of the church stitched into the back. Beneath is a patchwork leather cuirass complete with rusted iron shoulder plates and one iron gauntlet for his sword-arm.
Motivation: Faith, although his one good eye is not turned blindly to the churches corruption. The Church is doing Gods work..... right? Unsure of himself, Caius keeps his eye open. His Church is important to him, but if he loses his faith in doing their bidding he has no qualms raising a sword against his superiors.