Dawnon Aeris

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the gms have spoken and i have nothing to add to whats been said so the show goes on as the saying goes, i am glad it didnt come to a stand still because of my nitpicking

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yes it does take three posts, what i meant was that i gave my construct two weeks thought before i put it into play, it took longer than that actually because the rp has been going on for two months, we all paced the progression of our dungeons to be as realistic as possible, however given your theme your progression isn't that out of place i have to give you that because storms do tend to roll in out of nowhere, but then again they tend to be furious yet short even hurricanes dont last longer than a few days once they leave the sea front

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ill let the gms have the final word in this matter, its just extremely out of place imo, breaks the immersion

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why do you care what i say xD, im no authority on the subject, just speaking my mind

edit: is it me or are the new guys just jumping WAAAY ahead of themselves..i mean it took me like two weeks to make my construct and rainator is like every post is exponential growth..i understand catching up but thats way too freaking fast IMO, i mean the keeper conflicts havent even started so there is no rush anywhere

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im just saying with this sort of posting if we had more people it would be the equivalent of reading a book with every page being a separate chapter that almost doesn't connect to any other chapter in the book, i admire the way people can write up so much at once but maybe theres a bit too much exposition sometimes, unnecessary exposition. im not trying to start any fights or anything just trying to be active on the rp

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dont want to imagine this with more people, i must admit getting through text walls gets repetitive fast, i love the seven horsemen of the apocalypse side story Lube has going on though, action all over the place.

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Macaroth came from his seclusion among his people once again, he came from the chapel easily pushing the doors open, there was something new about him however. Two marvelous silver wings sprouted from his back, they were feathered but the feathers were metal yet still as pliant as real feathers but razor sharp to the touch as a few people who attempted to touch his wings witnessed firsthand. He smiled and had their wounds cured by his touch, their blood fed him as he absorbed it.

His Man-at-Arms were gathered before him, uniform in partial plate armors, some wielding crossbows, others halberds and others swords and shields. They saluted him by pulling their weapons to their chest and standing at attention, upon their heads were ornate plumed hats and the clothes under their armors were tailored to the best of the woman capabilities colored in burning orange and white. The zeal of his people impressed him somewhat, this was an army of about four hundred that almost looked too fine to march into combat.

He spoke to his people who stopped what they were doing to listen "Good people of Akrassa, you continue to gather seeking my guidance and protection, my wisdom brought back with my rebirth. Fear has gripped your hearts and eats at your very souls, but fear not my brethren, my children for soon we will march to purge the corruption that has settled into the kingdoms since last i walked among the people and fought to secure their freedom, we will bring about a new order and destroy or convert those who would oppose us!" He spread his wings ten feet in every direction and took to the air as the people cheered, he flew around the chapel and landed again at the entrance and picked out forty men from the ranks and took them inside to give them rebirth into the ranks of His Sons.

Status:
Dungeon: Keep named Akrassa constructed around a chapel in the woods.
Resources: Lumber taken from the surrounding woods, food gathered by hunting and brought by converts, materials for weapons mined in the mining town in the foothills of the nearby mountains.
Forces: 10 imps, 6 monks, several hundred human workers. approximately 400 Man-at-Arms and soon to be 50 angels
Construct: Iron Maiden
Rogue Being: N/A

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Let's not blow this thing out of the water just yet..

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He smiled as his creation floated before him, encased in a lavished, shiny version of the torture instrument known as Iron Maiden, its dimensions were fairly large though the Maiden was 15 feet tall and 8 feet wide and 4 feet deep. It hovered above the quicksilver pool and spun gently in the air as Macaroth inspected it, he set it down on the chamber floor and opened the mask window to greet the occupant.

A pale gentle face lay behind the mask, her eyes slowly opened revealing them to be bright and captivating ice blues and she smiled extending her rosy lips, her voice was musical as she spoke "Hello father..how may i serve you". Macaroths heart skipped a beat, she was even better than he expected, he smiled back to her "all in due time my sweet Rose, just sleep for now." She closed her eyes again as he closed the beautifully molded mask that hid even greater beauty. He summoned his imps and had her taken upstairs to sit in the chapel in place of the altar. Macaroth sat down to rest after this arduous task was done and contently ran his fingers through his long hair and relaxed by the fireplace in his throne.

The people came to the chapel to see this new machination of strange times, while fearing the Iron Maiden they were also captivated by the fact that it was not in any way grisly like its sisters. The Iron maiden was molded into an image of a girl praying while looking up to the sky, her hair flowing around her and her hands clasped to her chest, also the girl had angelic wings that extended along the sides of the metal box. The people were somehow comforted by it, trusting their saint to know whats best as his army grew stronger by the day the man at arms having amassed a hundred more able men in just a few days. These men were excluded from Macaroths life sapping aura for the duration of their service.

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well things seem to be heating up, quite fatefully so if i may add..welcome aboard my new adversaries