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9 yrs ago
Current Fun fact: Raoh was so awesome and manly that he received a real life funeral.
9 yrs ago
Care to try something different? roleplayerguild.com/topics/8..
9 yrs ago
'Are you gonna stay the same? Pale, grim, deep in shame?'
9 yrs ago
Finally gotten to the point where I'm a pack a day smoker. Not terribly happy about it
9 yrs ago
'I am the fountain of life, out of myself I grow, and the more you drink of me, the fuller I will flow.'
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Right now I check in randomly at all hours of the day and night, because I don't sleep love writing. So I'm easy to get ahold of if you need to.

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@MyCatGinger I can wait however long I need to, gives me more time to plan and come up with more trial ideas anyway. I think it'd be best to wait til everyone's ready, I'm just self-conscious about making other people wait too long. Maybe I'm worrying too much. Insomnia puts me on edge sometimes.

@Silver Carrot The main thing I would emphasize is just to design the character as though they were an actual person that you could bump into on the street.

If I were making a character based on my own CS, I'd start with their general appearance, how they would fare in a social situation, and a broad idea of their personality, specifically one that appealed to me. A personality I would enjoy seeing interacting with other people and reacting to what goes on around him/her. Then I'd think 'okay, what would this person have done or seen in their life that would have led them to the present day?' and then 'what sort of things would that kind of person like, dislike, and aspire to?'. After that I'd consider what their current situation would be like, their job, marital status, how things have changed since childhood and why, etc. At the end I'd look over it again and add a few little touches, like 'since they care about their appearance, they'd have really neat hair' and 'after that run in at the junkyard I really doubt he'd like dogs'.

Think of it like meeting someone in real life for the first time: you get a general sense of who they are based on the way they look, their mannerisms and how they talk and carry themself. Then as you get to know them better you learn more about their past, what they enjoy/hate and basically why they are the way they are. I would try to create a character's traits in the same order that I'd learn about them if they were real and I was trying to befriend them, rather than pick a couple specific things I like and design everything else around those couple things.

Though I apologize if that's stuff you've already considered or too broad to be helpful. Not saying my way is best either, just that that's how i look at it.

If you want to you can PM me about any ideas you have and I'd be happy to talk about them with you. I pretty much don't sleep so feel free to hit me up anytime.
I understand, real life always comes first. As long as you're still interested that's fine with me.

I would like to get some opinions from everyone though: should we go ahead and start? I think if you have a post ready that you could go ahead and start, and I can just make sure we stop before the first trial. The first trial is specifically designed to give characters a chance to interact anyway, so anyone who starts a little late won't miss much.
Been mulling over how to proceed. Rambler is a little harder to write for than I anticipated, since he doesn't really know what's going on yet. I'm not sure how to have him act on his own right now.

The Collective I created specifically to be a wild card, so I could have it show up somewhere else and start attacking people if that would help.
Well, it's been a week and I really don't want this to stagnate.

@Silver Carrot may I ask how your character's coming along?
Since it hasn't come up yet:

I'm not planning on having any kind of post length rule. In general I think longer more descriptive posts would work better for this RP, and I encourage those kind of posts, but I don't think you should have to adhere to some arbitrary paragraph limit either.
Hey @Darcs, just wondering how you're coming along with your character.
Looks great! I'm particularly impressed with your sample post, you really went above and beyond there. Character accepted! Please repost your Part 1 in the characters section when you get the chance.
Though Mognag was enraged and little more than a snarling beast at this point, even a beast can learn from its mistakes. Upon seeing Carla disappear again The Collective immediately dug its giant claws into the street, slowing its descent considerably. It still hit the building, but only with enough force to daze it momentarily. Before it could pick itself back up and continue its single-minded pursuit Ivory took advantage of the situation and wrested control away from Mognag, his furious growls gradually dying down.

"Quit squirming before you get us killed! I'll handle it!"

The Collective glanced back at the building. A large shadow hugged the ground directly behind it. "If she can warp, then..." The creature leapt into the shadow and disappeared, each part of its body completely vanishing from sight as it touched the shade. A moment later it reappeared within the shadow of another tall building, though this one was much closer to Carla and the citizens. Though The Collective's ability to teleport was more limited than Carla's it still came in handy.

In a flash it bridged the distance between itself and its prey, and quickly dispatched of three civilians, two with its claws and the third with its tail. The remainder fled in terror as The Collective pounced on top of Carla, pinning her arms to the ground. "Stronger... still hungry! It flicked its tail menacingly, but before it could strike a curious thing happened. The Collective's face, once alight with anger, was now twisted in grief.

"H-help... me..." It choked out these words in Ivory's voice, but it sounded far quieter and more pained than anything Ivory had shrieked so far.

"How can she still be alive?!?"

"Won't... let me move..."

The Collective's grip loosened until Carla was able to free herself. It remained in its position, still as a grotesque statue.

By the by @Atrophy, can you name your PM 'Thin Line Part 2' please? Just makes it easier for me to keep up with.
Very good, I look forward to seeing it!
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