Varromere

Black Cinders [High Casual]

I'm going to give this another day and then I'll start writing up an IC, unless you guys would like more time?

In the meantime, expect some PMs from myself regarding your previous mission, how you're arriving in Isamanca, where you're supposed to be going and who you're with.

Black Cinders [High Casual]

@Filthy MudbloodFirstly, where does her surname come from? Her mother? Herself? I ask because Jzarea is a Mesoamerican-inspired culture (I nitpick, I apologise).

Secondly, a vamphiir must be incinerated and reduced to ash, so revise this part. Perhaps a Hunter/Huntress did the burning for her?

Sivar Velg is a continent, and it is also on the other side of the world from Jzarea, just in case this wasn't considered. When you're ready, let me know and we can officially welcome Eris to Black Cinders!

@TemplarKnight07A warm welcome to the Bard, Balthier!

Nitpicking though - people from Lorinth are Lorintines, people from Baruvad are Baruvadi and people from Paerium are referred to as Paeric.

Black Cinders [High Casual]

@Argetlam350Welcome Lethodus of Lorinth, accepted!

@RyuShuraSmall thing - Hunter-Captain, not Captain-Hunter. Nitpicking aside - welcome to our resident warlock Talia!

Warlocks and daemonic magic are largely viewed with suspicion and fear, as they have a history of cruel users (crueler than necromancers, really) and addicts to power. My friends, take that as you will. I look forward to the discussions taking place, thank you @BurningCold for getting the ball rolling.

What if Xho's noble father is the warlord that tortured Talia? @The Narrator

@TemplarKnight07Let me know when Balthier is ready! :)

@LucidnonsensePM me with your ideas. :)

Black Cinders [High Casual]

@BurningCold

Denric, welcome to the Order!

Black Cinders [High Casual]

@The NarratorBrilliant!

Welcome to the Order of Cinders, Xho Sulune. Feel free to post your CS in the character tab.

Also, guys, I would greatly appreciate if you could space Appearance/Biography/Personality so that they are their own paragraphs, and bold the headings so that it looks cleaner and is easier to read. @Mr_pink

For instance:

Name: Blahdina Blahoohah
Appearance: Blahoona blahndodo.

Biography: Blahvia blahkuuna.

Personality: Blahhhhhhhhh.

This would be greatly appreciated. :)

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Also, once you guys have your CS' accepted and posted, I'll be overhauling the main OOC post. I'm not entirely happy with it, but I will of course get the IC rolling before this starts. :)

Black Cinders [High Casual]

Guys, please do not hesitate to start discussing relations between your characters. As the character tab starts filling up, read over their profiles. It shouldn't take too long. If something sticks out - reach out, get something going. Are you a part of a group of Hunters/Huntresses? Were you raised together? Trained together? Are you rivals? I am happy to facilitate and make recommendations if that will help you guys, but as you guys will be in this together, I strongly encourage you all to take the time to flesh these details out. The effort will make it all the more worthwhile.

Black Cinders [High Casual]

@RekaiganOf course!

Black Cinders [High Casual]

@Mr_pink@Kaiachi

Welcome to Arilyth, Locust Highland and Ehnleth! Feel free to post them in the character tab.

Remember guys, if there's anything you need or wish to know, feel free to ask!

Black Cinders [High Casual]

@Mr_pink@BurningColdPost them here first, my bad!

The Order of Cinders

roleplayerguild.com/topics/139881-blac.. in case I forgot to mention anybody - here it is!