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8 yrs ago
Mom is out of the hospital so I might actually have time to rp but we'll see
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8 yrs ago
'yo sis we need a thot slayer there's too many thots want to join the thot police we're recruiting'
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8 yrs ago
should I return?
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8 yrs ago
If that ain’t a college mood
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8 yrs ago
“Hullabaloo, and howdy doo! Musty prawns, and Timbucktu! Yeltsy-by, and hibbety-hoo! Kick ’em in the dishpan! Hoo hoo hoo!!”
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Elora Nicholi
The Boot Buckle, Deliar


The long needle perforated the indigo satin, pulling the two ends together to form a Dolman sleeve. Elora instinctively sewed, her mind drifting to more engaging matters. Chubby, the ragged homeless cat Elora had adopted, leapt to the window sill and began licking the glass. It was a favorite venture of the queer cat and the redhead glanced at the queen to give her eyes something to do. Adopting Chubby was probably the best decision she had made as the long-haired offered much amusement for the often bored young woman.

“Are you thirsty, Chubby?” Elora hummed, her fingers still at work. The cat meowed in response that she took as a yes. Her fingers jerked as to move, but the needle was halfway through the fabric. The neb lurched through the material too fast and struck the tip of Elora’s finger.

“Ow!” she gasped, yanking her finger free and planting it in her mouth. It was only the slightest prick and little to no blood had poured from her veins. Sighing, too uninterested to seam, she placed the unfinished dress upon the stand next to her wooden chair and stood up.

She had decided that travelling to the tailoring shop could wait until later when she had worked the blasé from her indolent bones. Ever since they have entered the month of Februari, Elora had been restless and anxious for the day she morphs to a nineteen year old woman. Her fingers itched to cook, though she had no equipment, and most days she found herself shirking her responsibilities, moving to tavern to tavern. Edna and Edlund, her dismayed parents, had become annoyed and frustrated with her behavior. Too many times in the past twelve days have they sat her down to talk about responsibility. But Elora could not help it, she just could not sit still and had less will than usual to pay attention to mundane details.

Elora exited the Nicholi house, heading to the nearest tavern to drink her agitation away. Snow crunched underfoot and cold seeped through her expensive silken red dress in which her mother had sown herself. The blanket of snow soaked the hem of her skirt, leaving a dark border of crimson. The redhead passed by a group of soldiers whom dragged an unconscious colleague through the snow by his arms, leaving two trails behind him, and she stared in wonder. Soon, The Boot Buckle appeared and she shook her shawl free of precipitation before she entered. The tavern was filled with members of Deliar, drinking themselves to nirvana in which Elora expected to reach in an hour.

“Barkeep, I would appreciate a drink of sorts.” She called from the door, finding her way to a table.
I should be available all day today, but I'm not sure.
ADreamofStormySkies said
Hello! I would love to reserve a spot! Since I'm still in school until the 10th, my posting will be a little slower than usual until then, but I'll have my CS up tomorrow because it's the weekend.


Okie dokie
WOOP WOOP!
I'll be getting my post up sometime today(:
I'll make a post tomorrow regarding the soon-to-be massacre.
Sorry, I was busy today and have yet to read any of the posts but I reluctantly have to sleep. I will try to read all of it in the morning(:
Yeah sure ^_^ Sorry, I would've answered sooner but I was at a seven-hour party.
neko_sama said
Personal InformationName: Benjamin,EliasNickname: BenAge: 19Gender: maleSexuality: straightAppearance Description of Appearance: on the tall side,with long dreadlocks,and dark skin.Athletic build.Style:Disposition usually kind,and happy,but has a very harsh temper when triggered.Likes: Art,music,working out,and fight training.Dislikes: loud ppl,the unrefined,and those without restraint.Personality:If you asked most people,they'd tell you he's a good guy.that he'd never hurt a fly,in all honesty he's gentle at heart,and a loving soul.but in reality he can be very malevolent,and manipulative.he's a great secret keeper,a master lier,and more than a little sadistic.he has never been a fan of hurting others without reason,however given a reason he cam remorselessly deal with others.calm,and cool headed,he has no apprehension at the thought of using others to reach his goals.but at the same time,he's generous,and willing to help other.the question being to what end? Fears: he fears very little,except dog's,and spiders.PastHistory:Benjamin was raised trailing the world with his parents.as he grew older his family began to fall apart leading to a divorce,and the suicide of his mother.his father later became physically,and verbally abusive.as time moved on Ben grew older,and more able to defend himself,eventually turning the tables on his father,and killing him.he was in the USA at that time,and went to trial.he was found not guilty.As he continued on in life he became caught up in the occult,to the point he was a high ranking member of a coven.At some point he created his own cloven,heralded as the second coming by those of a mind to do so.his skill in the art of manipulation grew tremendously as the years went by.by the time he was 19,having joined the cloven at 18,was considered the highest ranking member under their leader.when it was time for his final ceremony,he was tasked withe retrieving a sacrifice.he achieved his goal,yet felt remorse at the idea of killing an innocent.soon after he left the coven,his thought's weighing heavy on his mind as he nodded off in his bed.


Not accepted. Sorry, but the grammar is not advanced and the character is bland and simple. I'm sorry, but it's not advanced level. My criticism is to work on your grammar and put spaces between punctuation marks so it doesn't appear cluttered. There is not enough details and too many spelling mistakes. Another thing is to make your character flawed - you put technical flaws in them, but then you contradicted those flaws. He's malevolent, but he doesn't hurt others without a reason? A sadist that doesn't hurt without reason is just...not likely. Possible, but not likely - and uninteresting. The only way it could work is if he has a black-and-white view on right and wrong, subsequently making it where most of the time he kills a rather innocent person over a small wrong. Please don't be offended by my critique, I'm only trying to help you in the long run.
I'm going to a party (blech) right now and I won't be back until like eight central time (US edition), but I'll get on afterwards to work on everything else.
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