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8 yrs ago
Mom is out of the hospital so I might actually have time to rp but we'll see
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8 yrs ago
'yo sis we need a thot slayer there's too many thots want to join the thot police we're recruiting'
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8 yrs ago
should I return?
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8 yrs ago
If that ain’t a college mood
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8 yrs ago
“Hullabaloo, and howdy doo! Musty prawns, and Timbucktu! Yeltsy-by, and hibbety-hoo! Kick ’em in the dishpan! Hoo hoo hoo!!”
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Lovedaia spent most of the time on their walk to the stables chattering. She talked about school, food, pythomancy, and spoons. The topics were completely random and only linked together with a thought process nobody could understand but Lovedaia. The duo arrived at the stables.

The stables were large buildings made of wood, filled to the brim with creatures. Lufu entered the stables, glancing around at the multiple horses and even a few griffins. Moving a short strand of hair from her cheek, she pressed her chest to one of the stable doors to get a good look at the griffin within. He stood tall and elegantly with a puffed out chest with beautiful feathers of white coating it.

“So which one is yours?” Lufu asked, moving on from the griffin and walking down the center to look at each horse. She arrived at a chestnut horse and pointed her finger at it accusingly, “This one? Or how about this one?”

After her fun time with Billie, Lovedaia left the stables and stumbled to the cafeteria. Afterwards, she went to her dorm and unpacked. It took so long for her to unpack that she didn't get to sleep until very late. Finally, she let her head hit the white pillow and immediately fall asleep without a worry.
I'll post when I get back from school
Your writing is fine; but if I could offer a tip. It's all bunched together, so maybe making a few parts of it separate, by subject, would make it neater. Other than that, it looks fine. You are really good with showing a character's personality, and not telling.
Okay, I tried to make the Ryuko coming up with Effie thing work but Effie is an assassin who has many enemies coming after her, so it didn't make a lot of sense. Sorry >.<
Andele said
ryuko knew that this would come but she thought she had more time.....at first sitting there just in silence she looked down trying to think of what to say..... she could fuck this up in so many ways but she hasnt got enough time to think much which was hard even without a time limit because of the alchohol.ryuko decided on what to do and then slowly put her hand on the shoulder of the woman. sho looked up to her with a seducing smile and winked once "can i come with you?"...... afte ryuko said that her head exploded with questions why she did such a weird thing. why did she go for this attempt? it might work but the chances are 1/1000. on the inside ryuko was extremly nervous hoping that this would work but on the ouside she keept up her act.


Effie played with the idea in her head; but then again, she didn't even know the woman's name. And she wasn't drunk enough to put herself in that much danger. While sleeping, she could do anything to her and Effie was not ready to be vulnerable to a possible enemy. No, she would already have to endure nights on her little adventure and so she decided that this woman would be spared from her sleep kicking.

"No." Effie said, dropping the act of being insanely inebriated. No point in it now.

She left before the woman could say another word and travelled up the stairs, even though she in all actually had not paid for a room. There wasn't a point to pay for a room. Picking one at random and crossing her fingers, Effie bent down and struggled to put her pick into the lock. Every few seconds she would twitch her hand and little snaps would be heard. Finally, the door opened and it was revealed that nobody was in there, to Effie's relief. And so she kicked the door behind her, stashed a knife under her pillow and mattress, and closed the window. She didn't bother undressing and instead fell flat into the bed, praying that nobody would get the key to her room.
Okay, this is my last post for the night. I don't wanna speed post anyone.
Okay, that's all I'm posting tonight because I don't want to speed post anyone.
"are...are you not thirsty? cause I'll take this if you don't want it."

Well, she was pretty thirsty. With one eye trained on her, Effie chugged down the drink and swallowed it in one gulp with liquid splashing down her chin. She wiped it hastily before it could stain her precious armor in which she felt no hidden desire to clean. The woman seemed innocent enough; maybe she could just slack of this once. But the sober part of her said "no", demanding her to pay attention to her surroundings. She was in a bad spot, this Effie knew, and so she decided sleep would be the best to cure it.

"I'm gunna g'to sleep."
Effie sat up quickly, her fogged brain slowly going on the alert. She looked over at the newcomer, grasping the drink in hand and staring suspiciously at the woman. Sniffing at the drink, she concluded that there were no known poisons - and she knows plenty of poisons - in it. However, there were many poisons she did not know and so she took a small sip that usually would not be enough to kill. The ale tasted as it always did and had not a single drop of a different flavor. If she didn't die in the next twenty-four hours, then there probably wasn't any poison in it. No, the woman must want something else and so Effie decided she would have to stay cautious. But the drink looked oh so tempting and her mind was so frustratingly fuzzy - Effie would kill for the fuzziness to fade into the numbness she held dear. Hm, kill.

Effie grabbed her emeici and held it waveringly in her hand, pointing it at the woman while saying in an over exaggerated slur, "If yoah try anythin', I'll cut yoah throat. Yeah?"

Of course she was faking her inebriation, quite well actually - Effie took a brief pause to mentally congratulate herself - in order to discover the true intentions of the newcomer.
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