Hi.... so I'd like to attempt to join the rp, but I'm not sure if my CS is up to snuff yet so I'm submitting what I think I have done right and asking what needs to be explained in more detail or changed. Please be patient, because I haven't rp'ed for a while and maybe rusty. Thanks in advance.
Name: Aria “The White Hound” Veratiel
Age: 21
Birthday: December 28
Magic: Magnus Arsonal: Magical requip armors and weapons
Known Sets:
Usually cloths- Long red coat along side the sword he found next to his person when he woke.
(More on the way)
Magic Level: C? (Assuming I can get better)
History: Aria doesn’t recall much of his own history, but when he woke he found a note by him that read as follows: “Aria. Your suffering is at an end and the natural order of things has been restored. Continue to live your life and carry this blade as a symbol of your rebirth. You will recall how to use it as well as a few spells. Take care and I love you.” It was signed by someone named Alexandra, the Red Magnus. The blade lay beside him as he looked around his surroundings, finding himself a few yards away from the steep beginning of a large crater, which seemed to crack the earth into canyons along some of the fringes. As he attempted to stand up, Aria reached for the blade and an image seemed to rush to the forefront of his mind. Just as the memory faded, he thought he saw a few white locks poke out from behind the hood as it turned, but he never saw her face. He quickly realized that where she stood was only a few footsteps away from where he lay, seeing the small prints left by her boots. Aria stood there confused as he wondered who this woman was, and what events transpired here. He still does not recall anything prior to that point.
Personality: Aria is an easy-going, kind hearted young man, but he prefers to express himself verbally infrequently or with a few sarcastic quips. He is action oriented and would more than likely try to complete as much of a mission on his own as to keep his teammates out of danger. It would be rare for him to ask for help, even if he needed it.
Guild and guild mark location: (If in a guild)
Team Members:
Three Strengths: (Not just combat)
1. Extremely skilled swordsman.
2. Large array of requip weaponry, making him versatile at many ranges and situations.
3. Oddly (Or freakishly) resilient and strong for his appearance. His pale skin and oddly colored eyes would imply a sickly disposition, however he appears healthier than most.
Three Weaknesses: (Make them Applicable)
1. His low magical ability and threshold allow him to cast a limited number of spells. Him being primarily unaware of the number and power required for many of his requip sets, Aria must be cautious how many times he switches between the sets as well as what tools he is using for the job he is doing.
2. Upon the mention of some trigger words, Aria will go off on tangents defining a sentence that seems drilled into the young man’s memory. These trigger words are generally species of monster or demon, which he immediately begins to describe their appearance, their prefered habitat or skulking ground, and finally any weak points of the monster. His tone becomes monotone and his blank during such episodes. Such episodes are generally disarming and socially awkward.
3. Members of Dark Guilds, sell swords, and other mercenaries refer to Aria as the “White Hound.” They seemed to regard him with one part positive regard and two parts distrust mingled with anger. Such a reputation has often left Aria in the cold when innkeepers would ‘recognise’ him and ask him to leave without explaining why. Aria is left to conclude that he was a man with a notorious reputation or worked for someone with a such a negative reputation.
Greatest Love: “Pft!” (Has none so far)
Motivation: Finding out what happened to him and the whereabouts of Alexandra.
Appearance:
Age: 21
Birthday: December 28
Magic: Magnus Arsonal: Magical requip armors and weapons
Known Sets:
Usually cloths- Long red coat along side the sword he found next to his person when he woke.
(More on the way)
Magic Level: C? (Assuming I can get better)
History: Aria doesn’t recall much of his own history, but when he woke he found a note by him that read as follows: “Aria. Your suffering is at an end and the natural order of things has been restored. Continue to live your life and carry this blade as a symbol of your rebirth. You will recall how to use it as well as a few spells. Take care and I love you.” It was signed by someone named Alexandra, the Red Magnus. The blade lay beside him as he looked around his surroundings, finding himself a few yards away from the steep beginning of a large crater, which seemed to crack the earth into canyons along some of the fringes. As he attempted to stand up, Aria reached for the blade and an image seemed to rush to the forefront of his mind. Just as the memory faded, he thought he saw a few white locks poke out from behind the hood as it turned, but he never saw her face. He quickly realized that where she stood was only a few footsteps away from where he lay, seeing the small prints left by her boots. Aria stood there confused as he wondered who this woman was, and what events transpired here. He still does not recall anything prior to that point.
Personality: Aria is an easy-going, kind hearted young man, but he prefers to express himself verbally infrequently or with a few sarcastic quips. He is action oriented and would more than likely try to complete as much of a mission on his own as to keep his teammates out of danger. It would be rare for him to ask for help, even if he needed it.
Guild and guild mark location: (If in a guild)
Team Members:
Three Strengths: (Not just combat)
1. Extremely skilled swordsman.
2. Large array of requip weaponry, making him versatile at many ranges and situations.
3. Oddly (Or freakishly) resilient and strong for his appearance. His pale skin and oddly colored eyes would imply a sickly disposition, however he appears healthier than most.
Three Weaknesses: (Make them Applicable)
1. His low magical ability and threshold allow him to cast a limited number of spells. Him being primarily unaware of the number and power required for many of his requip sets, Aria must be cautious how many times he switches between the sets as well as what tools he is using for the job he is doing.
2. Upon the mention of some trigger words, Aria will go off on tangents defining a sentence that seems drilled into the young man’s memory. These trigger words are generally species of monster or demon, which he immediately begins to describe their appearance, their prefered habitat or skulking ground, and finally any weak points of the monster. His tone becomes monotone and his blank during such episodes. Such episodes are generally disarming and socially awkward.
3. Members of Dark Guilds, sell swords, and other mercenaries refer to Aria as the “White Hound.” They seemed to regard him with one part positive regard and two parts distrust mingled with anger. Such a reputation has often left Aria in the cold when innkeepers would ‘recognise’ him and ask him to leave without explaining why. Aria is left to conclude that he was a man with a notorious reputation or worked for someone with a such a negative reputation.
Greatest Love: “Pft!” (Has none so far)
Motivation: Finding out what happened to him and the whereabouts of Alexandra.
Appearance:
