Yes but you're still referring to us as if we are our characters when you earlier told us that we are to describe their actions instead of be inside their heads.
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Saying like "The old man talked to you." vs. "The old man talked to the travelers."
Sorry. I mean this posting system of the website. What I feel weird about is that, when we sort of distance ourselves from our characters and more so describe their actions and use that to show what they're thinking, its sort of odd that you post in second person. I feel like I'm telling the story of my character and so going from narrating his adventures to suddenly becoming him and being addressed as him sort of sets off the flow of the story. Sorry if I'm not making sense.
Ugh this system is ridiculous.
Sorry I haven't been posting. I suddenly started feeling really weird about this roleplay. Could I make a suggestion?
Oh hey Komamisa <3
Sorry. Real life calls. I couldn't make the longest post. I'll have more time tomorrow. Also I seem to talk a lot about sound.
Oh and I don't care if you guys notice him right away or not. When he realizes you aren't a threat, he'll talk to you and if you see him, he won't get very defensive unless someone acts hostile lol. His sword and shield aren't the strongest when he's not close enough to Charlie.
Oh and I don't care if you guys notice him right away or not. When he realizes you aren't a threat, he'll talk to you and if you see him, he won't get very defensive unless someone acts hostile lol. His sword and shield aren't the strongest when he's not close enough to Charlie.
Worden was exhausted. He decided to take the longer path to the summit of the mountain. He would have gone steeper but the giant mechanical turtle accompanying him wasn't the best at manuevering. The gravel and debris crunched beneath Worden's feet and even more so under Charlie's. They made a lot of noise as they climbed the mountain. His face was wrought with worry. He knew how noisy his contraption was. So as he neared the summit and heard the voices in the distance, he turned to Charlie.
"Stay here for now. I'll be back." He said to the thoughtless golem. As Worden walked away, the monster seemed to understand the basic order given to it. It stayed in place. Worden was now making much less noise. With his sword and shield strapped to his back, he entered the small campsite. He saw three people and each of them dramatically different than the other. Without saying a word, he stepped close enough to hear their words, hoping they didn't hear him.
"Stay here for now. I'll be back." He said to the thoughtless golem. As Worden walked away, the monster seemed to understand the basic order given to it. It stayed in place. Worden was now making much less noise. With his sword and shield strapped to his back, he entered the small campsite. He saw three people and each of them dramatically different than the other. Without saying a word, he stepped close enough to hear their words, hoping they didn't hear him.
How exactly are we all alone with this person when we are all going to the hill? Am I misreading something?
How exactly are we all alone with this person when we are all going to the hill? Am I misreading something?
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