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Ah, apparently I made my edits to a previous draft. These are the fun things they don’t tell you about when you need to do all your writing on a phone. 😐
With requested modifications! After your final approval I’ll add him to the Characters tab. Meanwhile I’ll catch up on IC posts.
Great news! Thanks for the feedback.

I’d thought brass knuckles had more of a history, but a quick google tells me they’re far more modern then I imagined. I’ll make a few adjustments, in particular Hoekstra’s affiliation with the Dusthawks. Also, I’d added the bit about a Sparkboat specifically with the Steelbrow in mind, and so if The Wyrm is onboard, it’ll be a nice built in familiarity between Hoekstra and Sabina.

I’ll have some updates done tomorrow - alas, it’s gotten late in my time zone.
Hello! My friend The Wyrm pointed me in your direction. I’m not sure if you’ve still got any openings but if so I’d love to join. Here’s an initial draft of a character; I thought this band of rogues could use a proper criminal element!

The Beirhaus was ready for a busy Friday and the staff was grateful for the rush. Their job was good when their boss was happy and nothing cheered him up like a busy drinking hall. Delicious scents wafted enthusiastically from the kitchen, inspiring more food orders. Business was good, but for once Georg’s mood didn’t rise to match. He wasn’t foul by any means, but those who knew him knew something was wrong. At the taps he was smiles and quips in French and German, but in the kitchen he had his head down and didn’t speak to the staff in his usual encouraging way. When he went down to the cellar to bring up new casks, Veronique popped in after him.

“You don’t seem yourself, Georg,” she said from the second step to the bottom. “Is everything all right? Did you get bad news from your cousin?”

The older man looked up at her from the kegs he was shifting. He had hired Veronique because she could speak unaccented German, and also fit the ‘official’ standard of beauty for so many of his German customers. She was beautiful but approachable, with a mousey nose and round face framed by appropriately long sandy blonde hair. Unlike so many of the waifish French women in Vichy, she was fit and more strongly built. If Georg was to be honest with himself, which he wasn’t when it came to women, Veronique reminded him of a younger version of his wife, who in turn reminded him of the farm girls he’d known in Westphalia as a youth.

“There are a number of new faces tonight,” he said to dodge the question. “Are there any... strange customers tonight?”

Veronique responded in the negative at first, then described an Italian woman speaking with some young men. German’s didn’t have a good ear for Italian, but the French did and the woman didn’t sound like the one described by his cousin. Georg thanked her, managing a smile, then set to bringing a cask up to the taps
Huzzah!
There it is! Sorry for holding us up!
“Sergeant Volker, what an unethspected pleasure!” The Tilean said in his usual precipitatious way. Meinhardt couldn’t help but give him a wry smile in turn.

“It appears both of us are fools who don’t know when to get out of the game, Severo,” said the Middenlander with arms spread.

Meinhardt made his mark on the paperwork with the quick efficiency of experience. The excitement of a coming campaign was all ready starting to fill him, though he didn’t really expect any action. It seemed he was never so at ease as when he was camping on cold earth or marching over harsh ground. What does that say about me? wondered Meinhardt inwardly, before pushing the thought away. He’d spend the rest of the evening with an ale in his hand, maybe try to get the Breton lad drunk as a Marienburg sailor, to see how well he could ride hungover in the morning. Then they would put boots to road for the guild and maybe pretend to be heroes for a while. Meinhardt headed for a refill.
Hey team, sorry I’ve been so late with a post, just started a new job. I’ll try to get one out tonight or tomorrow!
Farid Al-Hashim was a tall strongly built man who wore a tall dark green hat to accentuate that height. When the Europeans made jokes about a negro smiling in the dark, it was men like him they were imagining. They had to imagine, for none in Vichy were brave enough to make those jokes anywhere that they could be seen by him. Farid’s size had been useful in Algeria when fighting the other boys for coming near his sisters. After his sisters and father had died in the Second Great War, his mother had taken him to France and his size had been useful fighting there too, this time for himself.

As many problems as this country had, Farid still loved it for what it was, and that it wasn’t Algeria which had taken so much from him. He did not lament the ills of this place, but he was determined to stamp them out. Thus when his mother had finally passed, he had packed what meagre possessions he had and left warm Marseille in the south and come to the capital, where true change might happen. That was seven years ago. Quickly he’d found the Tirailleurs, and in him they had found a fierce resolve and soon enough a leader.

Farid smiled that bright smile, brighter for the darkness lit only by candlelight. The rattle of machinery filled this place as the salvaged printing press groaned to life on the concrete floor, working slowly at first but gaining speed. He’d argued long and hard about the first message to be put out in pamphlets. The older men, the veterans of the war wanted to claim responsibility for all their doings but Farid had been unrelenting. He knew that their way would result only in blame being put on the Tirailleurs and that the French would turn on them. He knew their cause needed the French and that - though they didn’t know it - the French needed the Tirailleurs to light the spark for them.

That cause was simple in the telling, but like most causes was difficult and complicated to achieve. For all the talk of the politicians of independence, Firad knew and deep down Jean Public knew it too: France was still a Client State to Nazi Germany.

Thus, as the press worked through the sheets of paper, and the boys snatched them up to fold into pamphlets, their message was not what the old veterans wanted. Farid Al-Hashim had not relented and in the end they realised that he controlled their printing press and had only included them in the discussion to maintain an air of diplomacy. The message he printed was bold and powerful and above all, Patriotic. He played on the fierce pride of the French people, the people who had started the European Democratic Revolution! The people who had cast off the chains of monarchy! The people who now languished under the yoke of a new tyrant, not a King but a Fuhrer.

Vichy would wake up to his words in the morning, and they would keep printing every night until all of France had read his words.
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