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i don't think many people will be joining my crew XD
Jabber said
@Brods I didn't focus on rephrasing and just edited a few parts.As for the issue of not being able to have Hiders within Hiders, I suggest you just link those images to the text instead of having a wall of pictures in your CS.
Am I clear to go now?
Can someone give me feedback on my character?
Jabber said
The grammar issues and typos I mentioned earlier are still there though.And if the commanding officer you're talking about is Edge's father or the one from the opposing crew, then that wouldn't get you a bounty. How good is he with his fruit?So we have two logias now.
Where are the grammar issues? Sorry, I'm on my phone.
Do i have the all go to write in the IC
Is that better?
yeah its annoying :(
the hiders, not you
the hiders, not you
Hide the whole thing. got it
Jabber said
Several issues regarding your CS. First, use the code [Hider] for the entire CS.Regarding his bounty, how did he get it? What did he do to deserve one?And for his ability, Logia? If you mean a Devil Fruit, which one? Explain in his history how he got it and elaborate on his level of mastery of the fruit.Lastly, I've noticed a few typos and certain parts that could use some commas and rephrasing.
Logia is a devil fruit. And i will elaborate right now
use it like this
[youtube]GRbD4g3hshw[/youtube Where GRbD4g3hshw is, is where the code after /watch?v= should go, make sense?
[youtube]GRbD4g3hshw[/youtube Where GRbD4g3hshw is, is where the code after /watch?v= should go, make sense?
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