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    1. Darkmatter 12 yrs ago

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10 yrs ago
Current Currently buried in a number of things which I hope will benefit the Guild.
11 yrs ago
In some ways, the guildfall was a blessing. It makes it harder for my original 2009 RPing to be found...
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11 yrs ago
I've finally returned to the Guild. Many months of much RPing ahead.
11 yrs ago
A thousand things to be done; plenty motivation.

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Aeronautical Engineer
Irish
TV and Film addict

Been here on the guild since April '08, seen a lot of change but still love it. I've been on and off, I've GM'd fantastic projects and train-wrecks, it all comes with the territory. I once tried to make a YouTube ad for the guild because I'm slightly insane. In a weird place with the Guild right now, seems like so many names I knew are gone, but more than happy and ready to meet new people. Been writing casually for over a decade, a lot of that practice has been here. I have some small short sci-fi stories printed in anthologies but those are so heavily edited they don't even feel like mine any more.

When not on the Guild I'm most likely working, playing FFXIV or the Souls series or (insert recent must play video game).
Anyone with a passing interest in sci fi needs to read Saga by Brian K Vaughan.

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NewSun said
You, good sir, are fucking mental ;)EDIT: Maybe the psychological effects of having a keyboard only really apply to me. Still, it's nice to have. Also I suck at touch screens.


I used to post exclusively from my iPhone when I was in between states of having a computer, for about 6 months.
InspectorGadget said
The character sheet for the BB shows me nothing. Literally. It's all smoke and mirrors and doesn't tell me anything on how to destroy him in one uber powerful strike from my non magical swordsman. Wtf. Fix it. I need to know his weaknesses and his flaws and everything that will help me make this into a short lived RP. Otherwise this is going to take time investment, development and real effort. Also. I thought advanced existed because some people aren't good enough to write concise posts that are easy to read and understand in as few words as possible? I didn't know that advanced offered rewards... I thought it was a pain in the ass. And I suppose he could have been hiding. But where? Behind a tall bush? Plus he's an Aries. He doesn't hide, even if he should. Uh. I understand that Aries probably don't exist in this RP. But that's how he is being played.


For your sake I am going to assume this post was sarcastic. I'm 99% sure you meant it to be but, I'll assume away that 1% as I never quite know with you.
Chronicles Of Enduwin Chapter 2: Gatherings ~ Part One




Three nights and three days had passed, meaning that now, as the afternoon light of Solas struck Shankee’s face, it was the fourth day of travel. Four days of travel in row, with little rest. Thankfully though, the storyteller knew that it was coming to end; the travelling that is. Much of it had been done on horseback. It was much quicker, had the old Fargg simply walked around the Olc and to here, the centre of the plains, it may have taken weeks, if not longer. Now though he moved of his own locomotion, having sold the horse, which he bought four days ago, that morning. Brash and curt would be the only way to describe the smithy which he had sold it to. There would have been no use for the horse now, Shankee was sure of it.

‘Ah.’ He muttered to himself.
‘Mmm.’ He added.
Having raised his gaze from his feet for the first time in several hours, he looked at something other than the crook of his staff. What he saw, what had elicited the verbal reaction, was one of the few noticeable hills of the Plains of Origins. Not only one of the few, but the hill. That is to say, this time it was the hill. Another hill could have been the the hill under other circumstances and then this hill would be any other hill; but this was the hill now.

Atop the hill were out-thrusts of rock that had the appearance of being intentionally placed, not naturally formed. From above they must have looked like the petals of a stoney-grey flower jutting up from the monotone flatness of the plain. Shankee quickened his pace slightly, having his destination in sight spurred him on. It was only a matter of moments before he reached the rocks. Up close one could see that they were almost perfectly rounded into cylindrical forms, resembling the struts of a small building. They were arranged in a pattern that seemed to shift ever so slightly every time the storyteller attempted to wrap his head around its configuration. Shankee knew where he was; for sure he knew this was it. The centre of the pattern featured none of the rocks, it was bare earth again but with a noticeable hollow that dipped into the hill it was on.
“The point.” The old Fargg mumbled to himself again.

“It’s the actual point of origin.”
It was only now, being here, after having read of it so many times, having woven tales of it to hundreds of ears that Shankee thought to himself, ‘Why have I not come before?’
He then concluded that even if the thought had occurred to him before, which he didn’t think it could have, he would have been unable to locate this place no matter what. It was a place that was and wasn’t of Enduwin. It was here before Enduwin, it became Enduwin and it didn’t become it. It was an ethereal place. A dreadfully confusing place and one of intense power. Reaching into his small travel satchel, the Farrg fingered a glass sphere, no bigger than a marble, which bobbled in the bag’s depths.

Shankee could see them. The others. Warriors, guardians, adventurers; they were all coming his way and were close very close indeed. Could they see this place? Was it for them too? No. This was why he was here surely. Otherwise why would he have arrived first? It must be, it must have been his first task.

Letting go of the orb, Shankee was physically alone again. Motioning forward more with his body than his feet, the storyteller made his way to the hollow. It was about three times his height across, perfectly circular and around a metre at its deepest. The slop down to this lowest point was gentle and safe. Reaching the lip of the hollow Shankee placed one foot over the edge. Immediately a rush, like fire shooting through his body, spread from the foot throughout his body and seemingly evaporated off him. It was intense, a freezing fire, a numbing stinging painless sensation. Placing a second foot inside the sensation intensified greatly, much more than doubling if the storyteller was correct. Every step after that increased the sensation tremendously. Upon reaching the centre of the hollow it felt as if his entire body was vibrating. ‘It is vibrating!’ He thought to himself. It was pulsing through him, the pulse of origination. The metaphorical and literal starting point of the world.

And then it was gone. As quickly as it had overtaken his entire being, it let him go again, releasing its gyrating grasp. Shankee remained unmoved for several moments. It felt as if he was awaking from a dream in which he was already awake. Gathering his wits, and wrestling himself out of his stupor, the storyteller recalled his task. At least what thought to be his task, for now. Raising his staff up directly in front of him, using both hands he brought it crashing down on the ground before him. Shankee whispered into the cusp of his hands, but the words boomed across the plains.

“This way. Over here now, come now this way.”
The words reverberated across the flat plains, impossibly echoing off non-existent mountain tops. They travelled out to the ears of the approaching adventures and plucked at their heartstrings; beckoning them to the mound.
Decided to split this Chapter post into two parts. The first for Shankee, the second for Bawzel. The former will be summoning all the adventures and the latter will be calling for his generals (sicarius, inspector and NPCs (or other players who join between now and then)).

HellHoundWoof said
I see, sorry that my character was not up to par. I also appologize for my inadequacies in spelling and my grammar, English is my second language.At the moment I am without my computer which affects the quality of my post. I am working from a tablet as well hence the reason I could not open the link for the history, as well as the one for the CS. Also the compendium I had assumed it was for applications. In response to some of your critiques, he left the city through a secret dock but as you said earlier the lands of Taure do not exist here so mentioning the islands of Ju'ra Yes it is a pre-made character from some time ago, I was not aware the elves of this RP are so long lived I assumed they aged more closely to humans, his political career circles around that which is why he is not seen as a 15 year old.. As per the magic I appologize though my character does not use magic. His 'spread' range of skills is simple, He has a liking for polotics from his father and what man of any wealth does not take on a means of defending himself and his honor, granted the archery could be too much if accompanied by swordsmanship. His skills as a torturer merely come from a politiciansmind set, analytical and calculating. I can also set his appearance up more if that would please you. I am happy to tailor my character to the standards you've set and will gladly work with anyone willing to help. Though this response may seem to say otherwise I thank you for your critiques. Edit: This is also my first Advanced RP.


Well then, it is good that you took the criticism constructively and I would be delighted to have you on board
The thing with advanced is they require time investment. They have the most reading/writing but also the most reward. The plot and character development are to a higher standard. All I ask is to make the character a part of Enduwin make it fit. Feel free to create a new race even, we have a lot of humans
Mostly, it's just that the grammar, syntax etc need to be maintained to a high standard and all's good
No I wouldn't think so :p

I'll definitely have the post up sometime today.

Can't remember if I said already: cops can you throw your CS into the compendium?
Bit of general FIY

The next post for shankee is a bit convoluted as far the timing goes. He is essentially arriving first, but the idea is you would have been literally there or very close at the time he gets there. So once I post, could everyone basically post so as they are with Shankee. Once that happens I can post a really cool bit of exposition, which will no doubt lead to some awesome character interaction. Followed by an even cool piece of plot.
MelonHead said
Well, a god could probably -see- into a mortal, and my character wouldn't try to kill yours. He was just going to arrive, have a look, and then decide to stick around and see if anyone formidable came over. Its simple Orc logic, he can just fight and try to kill one opponent who may or may not be formidable and then have to start fresh again. Or, he can stick around for the number of formidable foes who will come after the bounty, until he's dead, which gives him more opportunity for the glorious death he seeks.He may scuffle a little though, test the knight to see if he's worthy.


The gods are sending everyone to the Plains right you got that? Then why not let the orc be a main character instead of a secondary party member. Give the bloodthirster his time to shine!
NewSun said
Now i'm all for being bounty'd on, but if the Orc was called by the Gods, then there would be no need for the bounty to be in place as a story device in the first place.


Exactly my point!
FrozenEcstasy said
Oh hey, that's a noun.I don't like that noun, it's gross.


For the good of all that is immature and silly I say this;
'So's your face.'
Callthecops said
Yeah, I'm not upset about it, I just wanted to seem relevant.


You'll always be relevant to me <3

NewSun said
One thing you will have to bear in mind is how your character will track him to the Plains of Origin. In any normal situation it would be possible, but he and the Goblin just been teleported halfway across the world. I'd imagine there would be little to track in that situation.


Uh huh this is true. Then again, no reason an orc couldn't be called by the gods...
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