*Flails helplessly*
Rargh! Trying to design a technique which focuses around the use of Vis's trait is difficult. The force of Vis's swing creates the pressure wave in an arc but mixing that with a dial is difficult. I can create the mist around Vis with dials but turning it into a weapon requires constant use of Vis's trait and is thus almost useless in close combat. Creating cloud based techniques that don't use dials would require Vis to swing hard enough to not only compress the air but also make a visible arc of air. Perhaps modifying a sword with a Jet dial would increase the force of the swing enough to achieve this.
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You want to know about me, huh? Well, I am a type 0 super luminous star as classified by the Yerkes Spectral classification system. Now, I know it seems impossible that a star can type on a computer but I don't care about that. I've been roleplaying for roughly four years now. I tend to stick to my fantasy, sci-fi, and anime roleplays but have been known to go beyond that. I am comfortable playing both male and female roles. I have no posting schedule but do tend to be more active in the afternoon and on weekdays. I live in Central Time Zone (UTC-06:00) for those who are wondering.
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BrodZ11711 said
whats fodder?
Fodder is a term used to refer to people or items that can be destroyed and wouldn't really be worried about. When used in sentence it would be like this:
"The militia were put on the front lines of the legion to act as fodder."
Jabber said
-snip-
To add on to what he has done I would suggest rephrasing:
-He found his way into the captain’s quarters and begging for mercy the captain offered him a devil Fruit called the "Moku Moku no Mi".
-He took the fruit in one hand and the captain asked "So I live now right?" short answer, he’s now in 8 different pieces in a barrel that Edge later on ate.
-Gaining the abilities of smoke have made Edge even more feared among his crew.
The first sentence sounds almost has if he is begging for mercy instead. I would suggest doing it as 'the captain, begging for mercy,' instead..The second sentence makes it sound as if Edge ate the captain, unless of course that is what you meant to say. The third sentence is just hard to understand. Try rewriting it as 'After gain the abilities of smoke, Edge was feared by his crew even more than before.' They are just small things really but it makes it easier to read them.
Duthguy said
Well since his main goal is revenge Yoki might.
Be wary there. You have to remember that Edge is hunting a bounty. Yoki or Vis might be the bounty or it could be some random pirate.
Wow, Vis and Kurama are the two oldest characters with the respective ages of 24 and 25.
The bounties are a nice reward if somebody could kill us but it isn't nearly as high as some of the better people with bounties. After all, Luffy had a 400,000,000 beli bounty and lord knows how high it was when he became the Pirate King.
A 4.5 mil Beli bounty seems a bit high though. Vis has a 3 mil Beli bounty for the murder of three people, one of which was a marine. The 3.5 mil bounty is better seeing as it was 'theft' of a devil fruit.
I-Am-X said
This RP is growing pretty fast, things are looking good.
Yep, the only issue we might have is a lack of people. There are only four of us.
Bump to see if we can get more interest.
The morning wind blew through Vis's hair as he stood at the stern of his ship, the Wind Walker. Vis had been up well before the sunrise. His swords rested in a sash around his waist. His hands rested on the hilts of the katanas as he stared out at the sea. The waves were glinting in the early morning as they hit the docks. Vis reacted quickly when heard a creek in the wood of his deck. Gurikari flew out of it's sheath and towards the man who had intruded on his peace, it was one of his crew members."What have I told you about coming to me in the mornings?" Vis said calmly to the man, one of his deck hands. The deck hand sputtered and tried to answer but was too afraid of the blade that rested a few inched from his throat. Vis lowered the blade and turned away, the audible sound of scuffling made him smile.
It was the main issue Vis had with his crew, they were too careless. He had told them that they shouldn't sneak up on them and quite a few of them didn't. But those who did often left about as soon as they made port. In the last week, his crew has gone down from eighteen to twelve. Vis had posted notices all around Lougetown but he wasn't the only one looking for crew members. Other, ships that were better known were getting the majority of the people. But today was Vis's chance to get more people. There would be plenty of rookies here, in the town that Gol D. Roger was born and killed, to prove themselves to more experienced crews. Of course, smaller crews like Vis's were looking for members but they were rarely noticed by anybody. The music which had been playing for a few seconds came to an end and Vis took a step towards the gang plank.
The time had come for Vis to go looking for new members of his crew. Several of his crew members were leaving the ship to go to a tavern or to go looking for a new crew, he wasn't sure which was more likely. He wasn't sure he liked this way of recruiting but he had to admit that it was effective. It weeded out the weak and left only those who were strong. Vis was likely to compete against one or two recruits but he wouldn't want to perform with his full abilities, he shouldn't be the one to humiliate them. Vis passed by a few restraunts, bars and taverns on his way to the center of town but found no intrest in them other than a few which seemed to be frequented by violent pirates. The rising sun seemed to make people wake up as more and more people started to gather in the streets, many of them going the same direction as Vis.
Today was going to be a day full of battles, injuries and humiliations as rookie fought rookie in attempts to prove themselves to the elite crews. But Vis wasn't looking for the strongest or smartest people, he was looking for crew members who were dedicated and loyal. After all, strength isn't measured by how powerful you are but how dedicated you are to protecting your cause. For Vis, his strength came from his dedication to protect innocent people and he was looking for people who were willing to do the same. "Its not about your physical strength son but the strength of your morals that has made you strong. This blade, Gurikari, is a weapon of honor and whenever blood has been spilt by it, it has been for an honorable cause. You are to carry on this honor."Vis's father had said this to him the day he had recived Gurikari. He intended to keep the blade clean of innocent blood, in the name of his father.
It was the main issue Vis had with his crew, they were too careless. He had told them that they shouldn't sneak up on them and quite a few of them didn't. But those who did often left about as soon as they made port. In the last week, his crew has gone down from eighteen to twelve. Vis had posted notices all around Lougetown but he wasn't the only one looking for crew members. Other, ships that were better known were getting the majority of the people. But today was Vis's chance to get more people. There would be plenty of rookies here, in the town that Gol D. Roger was born and killed, to prove themselves to more experienced crews. Of course, smaller crews like Vis's were looking for members but they were rarely noticed by anybody. The music which had been playing for a few seconds came to an end and Vis took a step towards the gang plank.
The time had come for Vis to go looking for new members of his crew. Several of his crew members were leaving the ship to go to a tavern or to go looking for a new crew, he wasn't sure which was more likely. He wasn't sure he liked this way of recruiting but he had to admit that it was effective. It weeded out the weak and left only those who were strong. Vis was likely to compete against one or two recruits but he wouldn't want to perform with his full abilities, he shouldn't be the one to humiliate them. Vis passed by a few restraunts, bars and taverns on his way to the center of town but found no intrest in them other than a few which seemed to be frequented by violent pirates. The rising sun seemed to make people wake up as more and more people started to gather in the streets, many of them going the same direction as Vis.
Today was going to be a day full of battles, injuries and humiliations as rookie fought rookie in attempts to prove themselves to the elite crews. But Vis wasn't looking for the strongest or smartest people, he was looking for crew members who were dedicated and loyal. After all, strength isn't measured by how powerful you are but how dedicated you are to protecting your cause. For Vis, his strength came from his dedication to protect innocent people and he was looking for people who were willing to do the same. "Its not about your physical strength son but the strength of your morals that has made you strong. This blade, Gurikari, is a weapon of honor and whenever blood has been spilt by it, it has been for an honorable cause. You are to carry on this honor."Vis's father had said this to him the day he had recived Gurikari. He intended to keep the blade clean of innocent blood, in the name of his father.
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