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Sacrilege War (Apocalyptic Grimdark Fantasy - Interest Check)

Alright, now that I have the free time I will be updating my sheet and finishing it up some time today or tomorrow.

Fallout: Generals of the Yakima Republic | A Cooperative Military NRP

Name: Melanie Torbrough

Age: 35(Says she is 26)

Race:Human

Gender:Female

Rank: Colonel

Brief Origin Story: Melanie tends to hide her beginnings from people she comes across. What is known about her is when she came into leading a small group(5-9) of townspeople against a hive of feral ghouls. Melanie succesfully infiltrated the hive without alerting the feral ghouls and laid down explosives at the portion of the cave which lead deep into the hive. When the dynamite exploded, the towns people were to shoot at any feral ghouls that came running out. Meanwhile, Melanie had gotten safely from the explosion and killed any feral ghouls that came to investigate the cave in. Melanie was around 25 years of age when she was appointed the town sheriff. Eventually, Melanie was appointed the head of the militia of all the towns in the surronding area(total of 100 humans). Melanie eventually left the militia and joined the Yakima Republic. When asked why she left, she simply said 'Let's just say that somebody wanted to kill me.'

Appearance:

Melanie

Army Name: 1st Republic Infiltrators(The Black Widows)

Army Banner:

Black Widows

Army Specialisations: Infiltration and Recon

Army Origins: It wasn't until recently that the Black Widows had come into being. Every member of the Black Widows have been hand picked by Melanie herself. Some of the members are people Melanie use to serve with. Most of the members are women who have particular sets of skills at getting into places they aren't suppose to be in.

Army Racial Composition: Melanie is far from against having races other than humans in her army. But, Melanie will not accept somebody who she believes won't fit into the army or cause conflict with other soldiers.

Order of Battle:

Rico's Recon(1st Company)

Forerunners(1s platoon), 30 humans(10 females, 20 males) and 5 ghouls(2 males, 3 females), equipped with light weaponry(knifes, pistols, and hunting rifles(wielded only by 10 humans and 5 ghouls))and light armor(mostly raider armor or leather armor).

Silencers(2nd platoon), 20 humans(15 females, 5 males) and 10 ghouls(5 females, 5 males), equipped with knives and low calibre pistols(.32 pistols and 10mm pistols) and light armor/civilian clothing.

Watchers(3rd platoon), 20 humans(10 males, 10 femals) and 20 ghouls(14 males, 6 females), equipped with knives, low calibre pistols, hunting rifles(10 humans and 10 ghouls), and light armor(leather).

The Widows(2nd Company)

Infiltrators(1st Platoon) 30 humans(all females) and 5 ghouls(females), equipped with knives and .32 pistols, wear civilian/very light armor.

Collectors(2nd Platoon) 20 humans(Females) and 10 ghouls(females), equipped with knives, light armor, and 10mm pistols

Cleaners(3rd Platoon) 40 humans(20 males, 20 females), 20 ghouls(10 males, 10 females) and 5 Super mutants(males), equipped with knives, assault rifles and pistols, wears light to medium armor.

Total: 235

Headquarters Name: Subway Station 88(The Hourglass)

Headquarters Description:Subway Station 88, nicknamed the Hourglass by the Widows, is a pre-war subway station fitted with enough bedding to fit all the Widows. The Widows have cleared out the majority of the subway and blockaded any entrances from other subways. The main ground entrance is always guarded by two super mutants from the Cleaners. The Widows have seperated parts of the subway so that each one does different things. There are three major rooms in the Hourglass know; Living Quarters, the Entrance, and the Armory. The living quarters, as its name states, is where everybody in the Widows live. Even Melanie sleeps in the same area as her soldiers. The entrance is the above ground entrance which the Widows guard which has been fortified. The Armory is where the Widows keep all of their weapons and armor. Unlike the other rooms which are simply cut off from each other by a wooden barrier, the Armory is a guard room with fridges lined up to block the glass.

Sacrilege War (Apocalyptic Grimdark Fantasy - Interest Check)

I won't be that active in updating my Realm sheet for a while. Some issues with the plumbing in my house need to be fixed and it seems it may be a while before I am capable of actually working on the sheet without some interruption. Sorry for the delay. I will try and update the sheet later if I have the free time.

Sacrilege War (Apocalyptic Grimdark Fantasy - Interest Check)

Yeah, I am not too far from the action. I could support a few hosts so long as they aren't too big. The further reaches of Ma' Hurcazak would be safer for smaller hosts.

Clash of Civilisation: A Historical/Alternate History RP

Kingdom of Sparta

Capital City: Sparta(Black dot on the map)

Ruler: King Aeolous and King Theleon

Form of government: Dual Monarchy(Two kings)

Traits (choose two of the following):
Militaristic'Gia ária !' 'For Ares'
Seafaring 'Pou mas dóthi̱ke apó ton Poseidó̱na !' 'Given to us by Poseidon!

Brief history:The Kingdom of Sparta use to be the small city state of Sparta. Sparta was a mostly disorganized but militaristic city state led by a despotic general. The general had grown old and lazy. He was unwilling to change or try and conquer more land in the name of Sparta. Eight years ago, a group of soldiers lead by Aeolous Rorithor started a rebellion. Aeolous besiged Sparta with a small coalition force consisting of three hundred and fifty Spartans and fifteen trireme. It took three months before Aeolous sucessfully took over Sparta. But, it was not Aeolous who killed the general. Instead, the general's son, Theleon Courine killed him. Theleon and Aeolous were both considered heros of the rebellion and were placed as the heads of the Spartan empire. Aeolous led the seafaring forces of Sparta while Theleon led the land forces. Since then, Sparta has expanded quickly by conquering its neighbors.

Claimed land (map if possible please):

Spartan Lands

Kings of Sparta

Name: Aeolous Rorithor
Title(s): First King, King of Sparta, King of the Sea, King of Old
Age:39
Brief backstory: A Spartan by birth, Aeolous was raised in the arts of war. Aeolous was good with a sword but better with a bow and arrow. He found himself wanting more for the sea than the land. Aeolous led around sixteen raids on Sparta's neighbors before the general began to become more sheltered. Aeolous had began to get restless, along with his fellow Spartans. Aeolous led a force of soldiers against Sparta and the general.
Appearance (image or description): Aeolous is a stout man. He stands a little over five foot four inches and weighs two hundred pounds. He is a muscular man even among his family. Despite his age, Aeolous has salt and pepper colored hair. He only ever grows stubble and often cuts his hair to be sparse as a burned forest. Scars cover his chest and arms from his training. One particular scar marks where a arrow got buried in his shoulder.
Personality and interests (what do they want?):Aeolous is a rather ambitious ruler. He looks to take all in the name of Sparta and Ares. He is by far the most violent of the two kings of Sparta. Aeolous has no trouble in killing his political enemies but is the most supportive of the people. He prefers to talk with the generals under him before he makes a decision.

Name:Theleon Courine
Title(s):Second King, King of Sparta, King of the Land, Child King
Age:25
Brief backstory:Raised by his father's maids, Theleon had never like his father. Theleon's father, general Kalinab Courine, was rarely seen with his son. Theleon, despite this, had developed well as a Spartan and became the leader of a small platoon in the rebellion. Theleon had not seen his father in three years on the day he killed him. He was considered a hero for killing his father and given a position as king and leader of the Spartan land forces.
Appearance (image or description):Theleon does not look like his father at all. He bears a wide and strong jaw along with blonde hair while is father had a rounded jaw and black hair. Theleon stands at five foot and eleven inches and weighs only one hundred and seventy five pounds. Despite this, most of Theleon's body weight is muscle. Theleon keep his hair long and in pony tail with a small, scraggly beard. Theleon carries twenty five scars on his back from lashings he had received.
Personality and interests (what do they want): Like Aeolous, Theleon is ambitious and hopes to make Sparta the most glorious Kingdom in the world. Yet, Theleon is very careful when it comes to battles and prefers to play it safe. He likes to look for all possible ways to take down his enemies with minimal costs. Theleon considers everyone his equal no matter their standing towards him. It is Theleon's belief that everything happens as the Gods intend it to happen.

Sacrilege War (Apocalyptic Grimdark Fantasy - Interest Check)

Ma

-Realm name:Ma' Hurcazak
-Flag/Banner:Flag of Ma'Hurcazak

NATIONAL
-Capital: Nagshinze
-Government Type: Republic
-Currency: Boritzas
-Population: 13,505,872
-Realm Size: Empire(72)
-Unique Trait #1: Unity- The people of Ma' Hurcazak have been recently united by the rebellion. The forces of the Ma' Hurcazak Navy and Army fight as if they are brothers. No matter what race, the Navy and Army has always held true that they are brothers in arms against the forces of Darkness.
-Unique Trait #2: (Created by me, mostly to reduce min-maxing)
-Unique Flaw #1 Racism- The citizens of Ma' Hurcazak, unlike the Navy and Army, are still highly racist against every race that is not human or dwarf. Often times this causes infighting between citizens which then diverts the attention of the public from the true enemy, the darkness. It isn't rare to see hanging orc or goblin bodies on the roads through Ma' Hurcazak. These bodies are more often than not victims of lynch mobs from small villages who are still afraid to accept the Unity of all races.
-Unique Flaw #2 (Created by me, mostly to reduce min-maxing)

GEOGRAPHICAL
-World-Realm Map: [hider=Ma'Hurcazak]

-Internal-Realm Map:

Internal

-Major Cities: Nagshinze, Hizeram, Turikast, Venos, Nalluke
-Major Castles:Ibitza, Fakurima, Opizina, Joruke, Vandia, Avernzas
-Buildings of Interest: The wall of Cazina(Still under construction. brown line on the map.)
-Geographic Features of Interest: The Silver Sea- A enclosed Sea in Ma' Hurcazak known for the way light glints off the waves. The light often makes the waves look as if they are made out of liquid silver.

RACIAL
-Majority Race(s): Humans, Dwarves and Orcs
-Minority Races: High elves, goblins, and hobbits.

RELIGION & MAGIC
-State Religion: Yuwanite Aestrosism
-Religion Demographics: Out of the 13,505,872 people living in Ma' Hurcazak, 8,985,624 people worship Yuwanite Aestrosism.
-Holy Relics In Possession: The
-Magical Schools and Curriculum: There are two major schools of magic studied in Ma' Hurcazak; the seer school(Yuwan) and the school of light magic(Justinian Magnus). The military of Ma' Hurcazak mostly employs a mixture of both seers and light magic users. But, a majority of the military magi are seers and used to help the defense of Ma' Hurcazak. The healers are used to help those wounded by excursions out into the rest of the world.

MILITARY
-Total Military Size:
-Military Details (Unit Types and distribution of numbers)

NATIONAL DRAMATIS PERSONAE
-Head of State/Monarch: The Council of Ma' Hurcazak
-General Of The Army : General Zashina Mahraza
-Admiral of the Navy: Admiral Braka Xenorth
-Persons of interest:

General Zashina

By far, General Zashina was not a popular man in his early years. He started many fights and often broke a few noses. But, Zashina had not joined the Army of Ma' Hurcazak until he was forced to by a kind judge. He had punched the wrong man(who happened to be a noble) and was given the choice of prison for five years or the Army. Zashina couldn't make up his mind so the judge forced him into the Army. It turned out to be the turning point in Zashina's life. It was nineteen years later, when Zashina was thirty-seven years old, that Zashina led the rebellion against the former monarchy which led Ma' Hurcazak. Three years after, Zashina was appointed General of the Army by the Council. It has been five years since then and major changes in the army have been made under Zashina's commands.

Admiral Braka Xenorth

A former pirate, Braka was the only elected leader which has caused an uproar. Few people consider Braka capable of leading the Navy. Others are angry from the antics she use to be involved in and how other people would look at the Navy if they knew it was headed by a former pirate. During her years as a pirate, Braka was the leader of the Red Skull pirates(who have also joined the Navy). The Red Skull pirates had, during Braka's years, twenty ships ranging from sloops to frigates. Often these ships were stolen from the rather slow and inattentive soldiers of the Navy. Much of that has changed during Braka's four years as admiral. Braka has made major reforms to the Navy including cutting soldiers out of the Navy and training soldiers to be more attentive and ready for battle. Quite a few people have begun to look at Braka in a new light.

(Notable)Council members

Out of the fifty-three council members, only seven of these members are important. Two of the six members are the Gurisia Twins; Tyler Gurisia and Haven Gurisia. Tyler and Haven Gurisia are the children of Steward Wilhem Gurisia back in the years of the Ma' Hurcazak monarchy. Tyler and Haven were raised in politics and were twenty years old when they first got involved in politics. Unlike their father, they saw the rise of the Republic a great chance for Ma' Hurcazak to be unified. Tyler is third seat representative for the humans while his sister is the fifth seat representative. Tyler is a kind man who often goes out in the public and greets people. Unlike his sister, he focuses on things in the larger scale and worries less about the small things. Haven is kind but not one for conversing with people all that often and prefers to make sure everything is planned out and followed. She has quite the temper which tends to get her in trouble with others.

The third of the seven members is Falsanir Gurikaras, first seat representative to the orcs. He is a kind orc and former slave back when Ma' Hurcazak was a monarchy. Falsanir was the first orc ever to be granted freedom and is considered the model orc for orcs in Ma' Hurcazak. He has never been known to engage in violence and is always first to consider peace rather than war. Yet, it was Falsanir who guided the orc slaves of Ma' Hurcazak in revolt against the king. He was also a major advocate for equal rights for all races. Falsanir is now sixty years old(entered slavery at 10) and still promoting the beliefs of the orcs he represents.

Yignaus Akave is the third seat representative of the dwarves. Originally born Naghuras Albrit, Yignaus came into his current name around the age of twenty-five. At that time, Yignaus was a lowly miner who's future was bleak. Yet, he stumbled upon a brilliant idea in his free time. Yignaus called it 'clear coal' which, unlike its cousin black coal, didn't produce a harmful smoke. He was given the name Yignaus which meant inventor in the local dialect. Yignaus was then allowed to set his own hall(familial building), he decided to call it Akave hall. Thus, he became known as Yignaus Naghuras Akave by the locals or just Yignaus Akave by outsiders. Five years later, Yignaus was elected as third set representative of the dwarves in the Council.

Ia'vahurn Bruher is the first seat representative of goblins and former leader of the largest goblin clan in Ma' Hurcazak. Ia, as he has come to be called, was twenty-two and was the son of the war chief Gralos Bruher of Clan Black Heart. When the rebellion started, Gralos pledged himself and his clan to the rebels, yet he never lived to see the fruit of his efforts. Gralos died at the hands of an assassin sent by the king. With their war chief dead, moral began to fall and goblins started to leave. With all hope fading, Ia took over Clan Black Heart and assaulted an encampment of some seven hundred soldiers with only two hundred goblins. That night, five hundred soldiers died to the the goblin sneak attack. The goblins themselves only suffered the loss of seventy-five warriors. More goblins began to flood into Clan Black Heart as Ia won more battles.

After the fighting was over, Ia settled down in a small house approximately twenty miles outside the capital. Since then, Ia has been elected many times as the first seat of the Goblins. Only once has anybody ever tried to take the title of first seat from him. The challenger was his own son who currently holds the position of fifth seat.

Leon Tursion is the fifth seat of the hobbits and considered one of the slyest hobbits out there. Leon use to be a merchant along the Silver Coast. He sold 'relics' to people who passed by his stall. They, of course, were not true relics but instead regular items that Leon convinced people were magical. He angered quite a few people but it was this slyness and drive to make life better for his people that got him elected to the Council. Leon uses his slyness to this day to improve the day to day life of hobbits all across Ma' Hurcazak.

Known as the Golden Queen, Na'hura Alessie is the second seat representative of the High Elves. Na'hura is the former queen of Ma' Hurcaza. Despite what many believe, she is not called the Golden Queen for her hair but for her actions before and during the revolution. Na'hura was offered to King Aegmon the third when he ascended to the throne. The Queen, unlike her husband, was a kind woman who cared for all. She use to sneak out of the Palace with baskets of bread and cheese. Na'hura would hand it out to those in need. It was the Golden Queen, in fact, who helped kill the King. She sent letters on army movements so that the rebels could be prepared. When the war was over, Na'hura was offered the position of High Seat. She turned it down so that she may better represent her people in Ma' Hurcazak.

Rathian Vairhune

Rathian Vairhune is the High Seat of the Council and has been elected every election since the rebellion. Rathian was the spearhead of the rebellion. A former court mage, Rathian had been a slave in King Aegmon's court. It was Rathian who took beatings should anything go wrong. Eventually, Rathian escaped the court and spread word of King Aegmon's cruelty. The citizens were angered and mobs began to burn down guard outposts in protest of the King's actions. When the first citizen was killed, the Rebellion began. Slaves and races everywhere in Ma' Hurcazak began to kill their guards and any soldiers who tried to stop. It was only a matter of time before the Rebellion reached Nagshinze. Rathian took pleasure in killing King Aegmon. He was considered a hero of the Rebellion and later to be humanitarian.

Since then, Rathian has donated most of the money he makes to the poor or those who are down on their luck. Rathian is a personal friend of Falsanir and has often let him teach his sons. Rathian is the first of the High Elves to hold a position of great power in Ma' Hurcazak.

HEROIC DRAMATIS PERSONAE
-General Zashina
-Admiral Braka
-Sir Edward Visar
-Ranger Gira Cirth
-Reaper Izazel Higura
-Priestess Cina Watugas

CULTURAL
-History
-List of Historical Grievances
-Relations
-Cultural Notes
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Clash of Civilisation: A Historical/Alternate History RP

Putting this here to save space. On the topic of resources, I think that each quadrant(separate white blocks) should have a boost to a certain resource. For example, a quadrant located where we would expect mountains would have an increased amount of stone and bronze(or later on iron). Same with forests, increased production of lumber if the player owns a lumber camp in that quadrant. There would also have to be specialty resources like quartz, sandstone, and etc. The specialty resources could then be used for trade if the player is lacking certain resources.

In a sense, our production of resources wouldn't be limited to just the resources we own in certain quadrants. So, we really have the ability to produce all the resources in all quadrants. But, if it is not specifically stated that a certain quadrant has a certain resource how would we know what is there? To answer this, I believe we should implement a little something called surveying. We could survey quadrants we own(or don't own) to see what resources exist there. The results of the survey could be determined by a dice roll. 2 dice of 1 to 5 could be used to determine if the surveyor had found bronze. If the surveyor is skilled in locating bronze(located successfully more than five times) then the fail rate is lower. For example, say the fail rate for an unskilled surveyor is 4 out of ten. If he is skilled, then the fail rate will be 3 out of ten. This means that he has a 70% chance of finding bronze over the before 60% chance. That means, if he rolls any number above three he will successfully find bronze. This way, we balance what sort of resources we can get.

Now we move on to determining how to get these resources. Let's start simple with a lumber camp. Without a lumber camp, the citizens of a certain region could harvest 10 logs per update. After building a lumber camp, the citizens could produce 30 logs per update. That means that the lumber camp adds 20 log production. Now, how do we increase the amount of logs without building you say? Well, lets state it this way. If five citizens produce 10 logs without a lumber camp and the same five can produce 30 logs with the lumber camp then that means their production goes from 2 logs per citizen applied to 6 logs per citizen applied. This means that resource production buildings don't actually produce resources but effect the rate at which citizens produce resources. Now, let's say this is after a successful survey of forests. This means that you indeed can harvest logs in that quadrant. Now, let's say that the quadrant is a forest quadrant. This means that the citizens would have been producing 1 log per if it was not a forest quadrant. Thus, the natural increase from the lumber cap is four no matter what. Basically, each lumber camp increases the production of the citizens applied to it by 4. Thus, in order to limit the amount of production we would need to limit the amount of resource buildings that can be placed in a certain quadrant.

Anyway, this is just my idea on how resources should work. I shall now get back to work on my application.

Fallout: Generals | A Cooperative Military NRP

Expect a sheet to be in this post in a few hours. Perhaps I will be the first to post a female general.

Name: Melanie Torbrough

Age: 35(Says she is 26)

Race:Human

Gender:Female

Rank: Colonel

Brief Origin Story: Melanie tends to hide her beginnings from people she comes across. What is known about her is when she came into leading a small group(5-9) of townspeople against a hive of feral ghouls. Melanie succesfully infiltrated the hive without alerting the feral ghouls and laid down explosives at the portion of the cave which lead deep into the hive. When the dynamite exploded, the towns people were to shoot at any feral ghouls that came running out. Meanwhile, Melanie had gotten safely from the explosion and killed any feral ghouls that came to investigate the cave in. Melanie was around 25 years of age when she was appointed the town sheriff. Eventually, Melanie was appointed the head of the militia of all the towns in the surronding area(total of 100 humans). Melanie eventually left the militia and joined the Yakima Republic. When asked why she left, she simply said 'Let's just say that somebody wanted to kill me.'

Appearance:

Melanie

Army Name: 1st Republic Infiltrators(The Black Widows)

Army Banner:

Black Widows

Army Specialisations: Infiltration and Recon

Army Origins: It wasn't until recently that the Black Widows had come into being. Every member of the Black Widows have been hand picked by Melanie herself. Some of the members are people Melanie use to serve with. Most of the members are women who have particular sets of skills at getting into places they aren't suppose to be in.

Army Racial Composition: Melanie is far from against having races other than humans in her army. But, Melanie will not accept somebody who she believes won't fit into the army or cause conflict with other soldiers.

Order of Battle:

Rico's Recon(1st Company)

Forerunners(1s platoon), 30 humans(10 females, 20 males) and 5 ghouls(2 males, 3 females), equipped with light weaponry(knifes, pistols, and hunting rifles(wielded only by 10 humans and 5 ghouls))and light armor(mostly raider armor or leather armor).

Silencers(2nd platoon), 20 humans(15 females, 5 males) and 10 ghouls(5 females, 5 males), equipped with knives and low calibre pistols(.32 pistols and 10mm pistols) and light armor/civilian clothing.

Watchers(3rd platoon), 20 humans(10 males, 10 femals) and 20 ghouls(14 males, 6 females), equipped with knives, low calibre pistols, hunting rifles(10 humans and 10 ghouls), and light armor(leather).

The Widows(2nd Company)

Infiltrators(1st Platoon) 30 humans(all females) and 5 ghouls(females), equipped with knives and .32 pistols, wear civilian/very light armor.

Collectors(2nd Platoon) 20 humans(Females) and 10 ghouls(females), equipped with knives, light armor, and 10mm pistols

Cleaners(3rd Platoon) 40 humans(20 males, 20 females), 20 ghouls(10 males, 10 females) and 5 Super mutants(males), equipped with knives, assault rifles and pistols, wears light to medium armor.

Total: 235

... and the Darkness is Harsh [SF]

My lord this sounds amazing. I will get to work on a race.

Sacrilege War (Apocalyptic Grimdark Fantasy - Interest Check)

Hmm, I am still in debating what races will live in my country. I might make my own if I don't find one I find suitable. But, I am thinking of a mix of dwarves, humans and other races. I am more thinking of a nation ruled by representatives based on race.