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Teen Titans: A New Era

I'd post for grant but I'd like to know if those personality traits are ok

Bleach: A New Dawn

Rose's updated Shikai and history

History: Born into district 70, Rose faced hardship head on with a stubborn, headstrong outlook. This isn't to say she was happy-go-lucky, but she had her good moments and her bad. Her mother was a Shinigami stationed there, while her father was a civilian living there. When her mother's term was up, and she returned to the Seireitei, Rose stayed in the Rukongai with her dad.

Unfortunately, her father was murdered a month after her mother left, and Rose became homeless, living on the streets. She survived through thievery and violence, and it was at least five years until word that her daughter had gone missing. Worried to the point of literal pain, she set out to find her daughter, who had spent the past five years learning to be a ghost (in the tracking sense).

Rose, on the other hand, spent her time avoiding her mother, believing her mother had purposefully abandoned her in the month before her father died. Eventually she was caught by her mother and taken to live with her. She was then sent to the Academy where she excelled in Kidō.

Finally getting over her sense of abandonment, her true nature emerged; she was witty, insanely smart, and knew how to handle herself. She graduated within a year, and within 3 months, gained shikai. Once she gained shikai, however, her humor turned dry and dark. She now makes her way to the Seireitei to request a position in one of the 13 Court Guard Squads. She feels that squad two's assassination tactics don't suit every situation.

Other:

~Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto name: Kubikiribōchō (首斬り包丁; Literally meaning "Decapitating Carving Knife")

Type: Fog/Mist

Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Butcher,

Spirit Appearance:

Inner world:

Sealed Appearance: Sealed, the hilt is substantially longer than most others, and is 17 inches. The blade is 3 feet long and Katana style.



Shikai appearance: THE HILT IS THE SAME AS SEALED.

Bankai appearance: Bankai not achieved yet.

Shikai skills:
1. Mist generation: the Kubikiribōchō generates mist and fog, reducing visibility and allowing the user stealth and terror tactics. (3 post use, 4 post Cooldown)
2. Butchering Blade: Kubikiribōchō's blade glows with its user's Reiatsu and it unleashes a massive strike of vertical energy. (1 post use, 5 post cooldown)
3. Increased Strength by 10 percent for strike durability (4 post use, 4 post cooldown)

Bleach: A New Dawn

The first time I fight with this girl I'm stealing Zabuza's eight points speech.

Bleach: A New Dawn

How is being short "where it's at?" Though Rukia is 4'8 and a half...

Bleach: A New Dawn

Zane620 said
And we saw it Expllo is deducing as we speak, I also noticed you got a fetish for tall people XD

I remind you that I'm 5'4. I wish I was tall ToT

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Expllo said
Well, I really don't tend to give a shit about History's and the thing's I do have problems with are misunderstandings or nit-picks....Whatever it is here, I'm not sure.She thinks her mother abandoned her at birth? I don't see the logic from what else you wrote:She couldn't have thought that considering her mother left a month before her father died, and afterwards became a thief. So obviously she stuck around for atleast a while O.o and if she was so quick to go after her daughter when she went missing, why didn't she help when her daughter wasn't doing well and had no one looking after her? Surely the mother would have gotten word of her lovers death and would have tried helping her daughter?Abilities:1. Mist generation: the Kubikiribōchō generates mist and fog, reducing visibility and allowing the user stealth and terror tactics. (3 post use, 4 post Cooldown)I guess that's fine, unless someone has a problem with the cooldown/PDs? Butchering Blade: Kubikiribōchō's blade glows with its user's Reiatsu and it unleashes a massive strike (1 post use, 5 post cooldown)A strike as in an arc of energy, or...???Increased Strength by 10 percent (4 post use, 4 post cooldown)So....Does it help her attack be stronger, more durable...??? Depending on that I'll get to the cooldowns.Frozen fog: the Fog suddenly becomes a circle, and turns the opponent within the circle to ice. (1 post use, 4 post cooldown)As freezing someone completely would be too OP and would be capable of killing anyone, I say at least freeze the bottom half of them as in up to the ankles or legs. Also would suggest a longer cooldown.

Ah. (Uses Madara's English voice because it's so friggin smooth yet deep) Well. I see. To answer your concerns, yes, an arc, vertical, of energy. And as to the increased strength, it's more along the lines of her durability whilst attacking.

The Frozen fog thing...that...was actually taken out. It shouldn't be there; I apologise. Finally; I'll rewrite the history.

Bleach: A New Dawn

I DID post a CS under a hider

Bleach: A New Dawn

By the SWA, I meant my girl might re-form it. And here is mah girl. *does hand signs for summoning Jutsu because I've been playing a Naruto shippuden game all day*

Rose Shirayuki

Name: Rose Shirayuki (literally Rose of the White Snow)

Appearance:

Age: (Keep it sensible! Think of it like this. 10 Shinigami years equal 1 of our years so a 19 year old would be 190. Just what we go by) 180

Height: 6 feet, 1 inch

Weight: 154 pounds

Hair Colour: Black

Eye Colour: Green

Race: Shinigami

Rank: Unseated

Spiritual Energy Colour: Deep orange

Personality: Like Yachiru, Rose often nicknames people, and her personality is humorous, but serious when need be. She prefers to keep her hair in an orange ribbon ponytail or down, Has an obsession with the color orange and is laid back most of the time. When she was at the academy, her teachers noted on her rapid growth; but she was most often found under a tree reading Shakespeare. She enjoys literature.

When on missions, she tends to try to outhink her opponents.

History: Born into district 70, Rose faced hardship head on with a stubborn, headstrong outlook. This isn't to say she was happy-go-lucky, but she had her good moments and her bad. Her mother was a Shinigami stationed there, while her father was a civilian living there. When her mother's term was up, and she returned to the Seireitei, Rose stayed in the Rukongai with her dad.

Unfortunately, her father was murdered a month after her mother left, and Rose became homeless, living on the streets. She survived through thievery and violence, and it was at least five years until word that her daughter had gone missing. Worried to the point of literal pain, she set out to find her daughter, who had spent the past five years learning to be a ghost (in the tracking sense).

Rose, on the other hand, spent her time avoiding her mother, believing her mother had purposefully abandoned her at her birth. Eventually she was caught by her mother and taken to live with her. She was then sent to the Academy where she excelled in Kidō.

Finally getting over her sense of abandonment, her true nature emerged; she was witty, insanely smart, and knew how to handle herself. She graduated within a year, and within 3 months, gained shikai. She now makes her way to the Seireitei to request a position in one of the 13 Court Guard Squads.

Other:

~Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto name: Kubikiribōchō (首斬り包丁; Literally meaning "Decapitating Carving Knife")

Type: Fog/Mist

Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Butcher,

Spirit Appearance:

Inner world:

Sealed Appearance: Sealed, the hilt is substantially longer than most others, and is 17 inches. The blade is 3 feet long and Katana style.



Shikai appearance: THE HILT IS THE SAME AS SEALED.

Bankai appearance: Bankai not achieved yet.

Shikai skills:
1. Mist generation: the Kubikiribōchō generates mist and fog, reducing visibility and allowing the user stealth and terror tactics. (3 post use, 4 post Cooldown)
2. Butchering Blade: Kubikiribōchō's blade glows with its user's Reiatsu and it unleashes a massive strike (1 post use, 5 post cooldown)
3. Increased Strength by 10 percent (4 post use, 4 post cooldown)
4. Frozen fog: the Fog suddenly becomes a circle, and turns the opponent within the circle to ice. (1 post use, 4 post cooldown)

Bankai skills:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6. (Ultimate Skill)

Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills:

Skills

Zanjutsu: Shitonegashi
Kido: Hado: Tsuzuri Raiden Bakudo: Geki
Hakuda:
Hoho: Shunpō

Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained:

Bleach: A New Dawn

Yachiru was Madame President, but I think that an SWA here would be beneficial.....and comedic relief.

Bleach: A New Dawn

Shinigami Women's Association.