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Fighting? I'm going to WAR for lovely!
I edited the CS, and would like if you could take a look, and provide feedback.
I'll continue to tweak my CS until I'm satisfied with it. This means I'm going to make it as good as one of my DC CSes.
Axel said
Well it takes time before you get review so gotta have some patience until someone comes and passes verdict once again. Also, since you seem so hyped up to join this rp, you should use that time and make additions to your cs sheet. If you plan on staying here for awhile, then you'll regret not putting extra time into it later on . Especially I would assume that you would know more that time makes the world go round seeing how you look like a DC(Detective Comics) fan.
I am. Well, with my better CSes I had source material to leap from. Backstory isn't my forte.
I'm sorry, but I felt as if I wasn't being heard.
Revised CS: Name: Kenny (no other name known.)
Appearance: a Soul Reaper gi with no shirt, short-cropped hair and a black hood with a mask covering everything from nose to collarbone, and hands wrapped from forearm to knuckle in black cloth. He is EXTREMELY built. Scars crisscross his torso and he is missing his left eye. He has never bothered to put a patch over the eye, and has no eyelid for that socket.
Age: (Keep it sensible! Think of it like this. 10 Shinigami years equal 1 of our years so a 19 year old would be 190. Just what we go by) 240
Height: 6’3
Weight: 265
Hair Colour: Black
Eye Colour: Green
Race: Shinigami
Rank: Unseated, but I hope to rise to captain.
Spiritual Energy Colour: Black
Personality: Outside of battles, Kenny is hard to pin down to any one personality type, and prefers to stay within the Seireitei's library rather than interact with others due to a dislike of conversation. He is a loner by some accounts, preferring to keep a small circle of friends rather than a large social set.
In battles he possesses a quiet, calm rage that allows him to rage at his opponent in a tactical, analytical mind. He is sadistic against opponents, largely as psychological revenge for the beatings he received prior to entering the academy.
History: Kenny does not remember much of his life before coming to the Academy; he cannot even remember his real name, only the persistent beatings and rough life in the Rukongai. What he does remember is admiring the captains of the Gotei 13, and in particular remembers seeing a move he would later learn was Hado #90. From then on, he set his goals: become a captain and learn the Hado that had fascinated him for what little of his life he remembers. His goals were not met by all with welcome arms; he was beaten almost routinely by the more priveledged for aspiring so high. They did not know that his dreams would allow him to see beyond the hell that was the roughest part of the Rukongai, and achieve the strength needed to rise above and become captain.
However, once inside the academy, Kenny was welcomed and he acclimatised to life there quickly, being trained as if his life depended on it. He excelled at Hado and close quarters combat, while showing some skill in sword fighting. Eventually he came under the purview of the former squad 11 captain and was offered a place there upon graduation. Kenny accepted and threw himself into his studies with two goals in mind: become captain and master Hado #90: Kurohitsugi. During a training incident, however, he lost his left eye by accident. In response, he beat the other student to a bloody pulp with his bare hands, despite the other boy being on the fast track to Lt. Captain. It was a feat which largely impressed his instructors, and in particular the man who taught him Kido.
After graduation, he sat and meditated with his Zanpakuto and learned its name after five days. Despite being unseated, he shows promise.
Other:
~Zanpakuto~
Zanpakuto name: Sankontessuo(Iron Reaver)
Type: Illusion/Melee
Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Reap
Spirit Appearance:
Inner world:
Sealed appearance:
Shikai appearance:
Bankai appearance:
Shikai skills:
(Start off with no Shikai or 4 to 5 Shikai skills)
1. Fear inducement(minor, but all it does is the equivalent of an increased heartrate) there are the after effects of being fearful of Sankontessuo's wielder for the duration of 6 posts, with a cool down of 7 posts.
2.a slash similar to a getsuga tensho in function.(2 post cool down/1 post duration.) It is named Shadow wave or Kage no nami
3. Increased speed by 20% (3post duration/4 post cooldown)
4. Darkness generation similar to what Tosen was able to do but without the sensory deprivation, rather, it simply forces the battlefield to shrink to a more intimate level by way of illusion. Lasts for entire battles but can only use once per day. As yet, Sankontessuo has not revealed the name of this move to him. As a result its effectiveness is reduced by 50%.
5.
6.
7.
8.
Bankai skills:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6. (Ultimate Skill)
Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills: instigates fear.
Skills
Zanjutsu: Shitonegashi
Kido:Tsuzuri Raiden
Hakuda:Tesshō
Hoho:Shunpo
Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained:
Appearance: a Soul Reaper gi with no shirt, short-cropped hair and a black hood with a mask covering everything from nose to collarbone, and hands wrapped from forearm to knuckle in black cloth. He is EXTREMELY built. Scars crisscross his torso and he is missing his left eye. He has never bothered to put a patch over the eye, and has no eyelid for that socket.
Age: (Keep it sensible! Think of it like this. 10 Shinigami years equal 1 of our years so a 19 year old would be 190. Just what we go by) 240
Height: 6’3
Weight: 265
Hair Colour: Black
Eye Colour: Green
Race: Shinigami
Rank: Unseated, but I hope to rise to captain.
Spiritual Energy Colour: Black
Personality: Outside of battles, Kenny is hard to pin down to any one personality type, and prefers to stay within the Seireitei's library rather than interact with others due to a dislike of conversation. He is a loner by some accounts, preferring to keep a small circle of friends rather than a large social set.
In battles he possesses a quiet, calm rage that allows him to rage at his opponent in a tactical, analytical mind. He is sadistic against opponents, largely as psychological revenge for the beatings he received prior to entering the academy.
History: Kenny does not remember much of his life before coming to the Academy; he cannot even remember his real name, only the persistent beatings and rough life in the Rukongai. What he does remember is admiring the captains of the Gotei 13, and in particular remembers seeing a move he would later learn was Hado #90. From then on, he set his goals: become a captain and learn the Hado that had fascinated him for what little of his life he remembers. His goals were not met by all with welcome arms; he was beaten almost routinely by the more priveledged for aspiring so high. They did not know that his dreams would allow him to see beyond the hell that was the roughest part of the Rukongai, and achieve the strength needed to rise above and become captain.
However, once inside the academy, Kenny was welcomed and he acclimatised to life there quickly, being trained as if his life depended on it. He excelled at Hado and close quarters combat, while showing some skill in sword fighting. Eventually he came under the purview of the former squad 11 captain and was offered a place there upon graduation. Kenny accepted and threw himself into his studies with two goals in mind: become captain and master Hado #90: Kurohitsugi. During a training incident, however, he lost his left eye by accident. In response, he beat the other student to a bloody pulp with his bare hands, despite the other boy being on the fast track to Lt. Captain. It was a feat which largely impressed his instructors, and in particular the man who taught him Kido.
After graduation, he sat and meditated with his Zanpakuto and learned its name after five days. Despite being unseated, he shows promise.
Other:
~Zanpakuto~
Zanpakuto name: Sankontessuo(Iron Reaver)
Type: Illusion/Melee
Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Reap
Spirit Appearance:
Inner world:
Sealed appearance:
Shikai appearance:
Bankai appearance:
Shikai skills:
(Start off with no Shikai or 4 to 5 Shikai skills)
1. Fear inducement(minor, but all it does is the equivalent of an increased heartrate) there are the after effects of being fearful of Sankontessuo's wielder for the duration of 6 posts, with a cool down of 7 posts.
2.a slash similar to a getsuga tensho in function.(2 post cool down/1 post duration.) It is named Shadow wave or Kage no nami
3. Increased speed by 20% (3post duration/4 post cooldown)
4. Darkness generation similar to what Tosen was able to do but without the sensory deprivation, rather, it simply forces the battlefield to shrink to a more intimate level by way of illusion. Lasts for entire battles but can only use once per day. As yet, Sankontessuo has not revealed the name of this move to him. As a result its effectiveness is reduced by 50%.
5.
6.
7.
8.
Bankai skills:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6. (Ultimate Skill)
Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills: instigates fear.
Skills
Zanjutsu: Shitonegashi
Kido:Tsuzuri Raiden
Hakuda:Tesshō
Hoho:Shunpo
Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained:
I EDITED THE CS AND EXPANDED ON THE HISTORY AND PERSONALITY. Tell me what you think.
Back to the drawingboard.
Well, is it good?
Revised CS: Name: Kenny (no other name known.)
Appearance: a Soul Reaper gi with no shirt, short-cropped hair and a black hood with a mask covering everything from nose to collarbone, and hands wrapped from forearm to knuckle in black cloth. He is EXTREMELY built. Scars crisscross his torso and he is missing his left eye. He has never bothered to put a patch over the eye, and has no eyelid for that socket.
Age: (Keep it sensible! Think of it like this. 10 Shinigami years equal 1 of our years so a 19 year old would be 190. Just what we go by) 240
Height: 6’3
Weight: 265
Hair Colour: Black
Eye Colour: Green
Race: Shinigami
Rank: Unseated, but I hope to rise to captain.
Spiritual Energy Colour: Black
Personality: Outside of battles, Kenny is hard to pin down to any one personality type, and prefers to stay within the Seireitei's library rather than interact with others due to a dislike of conversation. He is a loner by some accounts, preferring to keep a small circle of friends rather than a large social set.
In battles he possesses a quiet, calm rage that allows him to rage at his opponent in a tactical, analytical mind. He is sadistic against opponents, largely as psychological revenge for the beatings he received prior to entering the academy.
History: Kenny does not remember much of his life before coming to the Academy; he cannot even remember his real name. What he does remember is admiring the captains of the Gotei 13, and in particular remembers seeing a move he would later learn was Hado #90. From then on, he set his goals: become a captain and learn the Hado that had fascinated him for what little of his life he remembers. His goals were not met by all with welcome arms; he was beaten almost routinely by the more priveledged for aspiring so high.
However, once inside the academy, Kenny was welcomed and he acclimatised to life there quickly, being trained as if his life depended on it.he expelled at Hado and close quarters combat, while showing some skill in sword fighting. Eventually he came under the purview of the former squad 11 captain and was offered a place there upon graduation. Kenny accepted and threw himself into his studies with two goals in mind: become captain and master Hado #90: Kurohitsugi. During a training incident, however, he lost his left eye. In response, he beat the other student to a bloody pulp with his bare hands.
At graduation, he received his Zanpakuto, learning his name within 5 days. Despite being unseated, the man shows promise.
Other:
~Zanpakuto~
Zanpakuto name: Sankontessuo(Iron Reaver)
Type: Combat
Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Reap
Spirit Appearance: like the grim reaper
Inner world: (optional)
Sealed appearance: Ninjato with a black wrapped hilt
Shikai appearance: a scythe with a red blade
Bankai appearance: sickle with a black blade
Shikai skills:
(Start off with no Shikai or 4 to 5 Shikai skills)
1. Fear inducement(minor, but all it does is the equivalent of an increased heartrate) there are the after effects of being fearful of Sankontessuo's wielder for the duration of 6 posts, with a cool down of 3 posts.
2.a slash similar to a getsuga tensho in function.(one post cool down/1 post duration.)
3. Increased speed by 20%
4. Darkness generation similar to what Tosen was able to do but without the sensory deprivation, rather, it simply forces the battlefield to shrink to a more intimate level by way of illusion. Lasts for entire battles but cannot be used for 6 posts afterwards. Takes 6 posts to be able to use.
5.
6.
7.
8.
Bankai skills:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6. (Ultimate Skill)
Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills: instigates fear.
Skills
Zanjutsu: Shitonegashi
Kido:Tsuzuri Raiden
Hakuda:Tesshō
Hoho:Shunpo
Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained:
Appearance: a Soul Reaper gi with no shirt, short-cropped hair and a black hood with a mask covering everything from nose to collarbone, and hands wrapped from forearm to knuckle in black cloth. He is EXTREMELY built. Scars crisscross his torso and he is missing his left eye. He has never bothered to put a patch over the eye, and has no eyelid for that socket.
Age: (Keep it sensible! Think of it like this. 10 Shinigami years equal 1 of our years so a 19 year old would be 190. Just what we go by) 240
Height: 6’3
Weight: 265
Hair Colour: Black
Eye Colour: Green
Race: Shinigami
Rank: Unseated, but I hope to rise to captain.
Spiritual Energy Colour: Black
Personality: Outside of battles, Kenny is hard to pin down to any one personality type, and prefers to stay within the Seireitei's library rather than interact with others due to a dislike of conversation. He is a loner by some accounts, preferring to keep a small circle of friends rather than a large social set.
In battles he possesses a quiet, calm rage that allows him to rage at his opponent in a tactical, analytical mind. He is sadistic against opponents, largely as psychological revenge for the beatings he received prior to entering the academy.
History: Kenny does not remember much of his life before coming to the Academy; he cannot even remember his real name. What he does remember is admiring the captains of the Gotei 13, and in particular remembers seeing a move he would later learn was Hado #90. From then on, he set his goals: become a captain and learn the Hado that had fascinated him for what little of his life he remembers. His goals were not met by all with welcome arms; he was beaten almost routinely by the more priveledged for aspiring so high.
However, once inside the academy, Kenny was welcomed and he acclimatised to life there quickly, being trained as if his life depended on it.he expelled at Hado and close quarters combat, while showing some skill in sword fighting. Eventually he came under the purview of the former squad 11 captain and was offered a place there upon graduation. Kenny accepted and threw himself into his studies with two goals in mind: become captain and master Hado #90: Kurohitsugi. During a training incident, however, he lost his left eye. In response, he beat the other student to a bloody pulp with his bare hands.
At graduation, he received his Zanpakuto, learning his name within 5 days. Despite being unseated, the man shows promise.
Other:
~Zanpakuto~
Zanpakuto name: Sankontessuo(Iron Reaver)
Type: Combat
Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Reap
Spirit Appearance: like the grim reaper
Inner world: (optional)
Sealed appearance: Ninjato with a black wrapped hilt
Shikai appearance: a scythe with a red blade
Bankai appearance: sickle with a black blade
Shikai skills:
(Start off with no Shikai or 4 to 5 Shikai skills)
1. Fear inducement(minor, but all it does is the equivalent of an increased heartrate) there are the after effects of being fearful of Sankontessuo's wielder for the duration of 6 posts, with a cool down of 3 posts.
2.a slash similar to a getsuga tensho in function.(one post cool down/1 post duration.)
3. Increased speed by 20%
4. Darkness generation similar to what Tosen was able to do but without the sensory deprivation, rather, it simply forces the battlefield to shrink to a more intimate level by way of illusion. Lasts for entire battles but cannot be used for 6 posts afterwards. Takes 6 posts to be able to use.
5.
6.
7.
8.
Bankai skills:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6. (Ultimate Skill)
Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills: instigates fear.
Skills
Zanjutsu: Shitonegashi
Kido:Tsuzuri Raiden
Hakuda:Tesshō
Hoho:Shunpo
Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained:
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