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Bleach: A New Dawn

AbigailTenshi said
I have an issue with this History:- For one, the Captain's and seated members couldn't handle a few enemies in the Rukongai? I highly doubts that.- The Squad 11 Captain wouldn't be so friendly nor would care about anything or anyone other than his own Squad members and killing the enemies, more so killing the enemy. He wouldn't act that way towards a hiding child, if anything, he'd tell the child to be brave and quit hiding like a weakling before he'd walk off to defeat the rest of the enemies.- If the Captain took him in and he lived in the Squad 11 quarters then why is he waiting to join the Squad? Doesn't make sense. owo

We'll, how else was I going to make Squad 11 captain adopt him? The easiest way to explain it is like Yachiru being adopted by Kenpachi Zaraki. Except it was more like the Captain sensed his rage more so than his fear. Expllo I'll re-edit those skills.

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Well what about Kaien?

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Let me explain. My plan for my Arrancar was to introduce him as having Juuuuuuuuuussssst become an Arrancar with no memories of being a hollow. He wanders Hueco Mundo, searching for who he is and his purpose. Then, he comes to Rukongai somehow and discovers who he is and what his purpose is. Eventually he betrays the Arrancar and hopefully joins Soul Society

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Kaien? My CS ON 689?

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District 80. Though he had been born here, grown here, it was not a stroll he wanted to take. At least, not until he had become Captain. But that position was a long way off, and in his eyes, this was the first real step towards that goal since he had gone through the academy. This mission could not, would not deter that.

He turned down a side street, heading for a black house with decades old dried blood on the door. Over his shoulder, he saw his compatriot raise an eyebrow. "This isn't my former home. This is the home of an old...I guess you could call him an acquaintance." He said as he walked inside, greeting an old, blind man by name; a rare sight considering their location. "Sandeyuri. It's Kakashi, the boy you named scarecrow. We're looking for your son. We're looking for Sayuri."

The old man started up from his cot, excited. He walked as if he had eyes, and clasped Kenny like a father hugging his long lost son, then slapped him in the face. "140 years and no word?! Not one letter?! Sayuri may be my child by birth but YOU are my son. And a Shinigami too, by your Reiatsu. If you're looking for Sayuri, try the brothel. If he isn't there, try District 63. He hates you though. You remember what he did to you as kids."

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Eh. A large part of the male's story takes place in Hueco Mundo, but yeah, I can wait for an Arrancar.

My Kaien character, on the other hand has been waiting for days. I'm happy to be patient, but nobody has told me whether his revised shikai is ok, or if there's anything else I need to change.

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I have 2 Arrancars planned, one of which is a female NPC

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More like making a CS to show to Kurisa that I'm serious about wanting an Arrancar. I have everything it a name. I even have his "Zanpakutō" named; I just need a name name

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What would a good name for an Arrancar be?

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Kurisa, I responded to your response, and thanks for replying by the way. Would you like for me to move my CS to the current page to peruse at your leisure?