Okay so the leaving to India. It is a plot twist and I have a plan. This is to put a slight bit more about my character and her family who live all around the word but it will also have a problem and then mystery until something good happens.
'Why, why do I need rest,' She pulled something out of her bag. A return ferry ticket to India. She was meant to visit her family for a week before coming back and she left tomorrow.
The 12 year old shook her head slightly. 'I am fine, I promise,' she said but had her fingers crossed behind her back. She forced her eyes open, showing how red and puffy they are.
'I am fine,' she smiled but her eyes were half closed and you could tell that she hadn't eaten, drunk, slept and had been crying since the accident. She seemed withdrawn now.