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Cleaned it up, but Grammar is not my forte. I apologize but can someone pm me what needs to be cleaned up in that regard?
Kilt, I am awaiting ones approval. If it is not to your liking please inform me :D
Yup, shes a caster not a melee. push comes to shove she will beat you over the head similar to Elizabeth
I can lower them, to the earlier zio's But aside from my move list we straight?
Name: Zelia "Demi" Lionheart
Gender: Female
Age:17
Clubs/Occupation: Web designer.....(Self supporting)
Personality: Isolationist, its not that she doesn't want friends......She doesn't want bother. Explaining things to others is a headache and honestly everyone is generally to dumb to follow the pseudo-code anyway. Spending a majority of her time locked up in her single apartment with just a computer screen for light leaves her looking sickly, so she has low opinion of her own looks, adding more to her desire to avoid others. School is something she dabbles in but it is such a bother and it makes her sweat...she hates that. The children around her don't understand a dollar and they sure as hell don't understand her! IDIOTS.
History: In and out of trouble since her early teen years "Demi" keeps messing with things she shouldn't. Her family is to into tradition for her taste...Oh and renouncing foolish things like religion don't help your situation. While she is brilliant her social skills where left somewhere in the first sand box she was pushed over in. Others her own age scare her, as they are just nogoodstuckupspoiledsnobdontunderstandthedifferencebetweenjavaandlua! mean. Recently due to an over active police officer she began going to school again, oddly he's behaving as her guardian, not that she likes it.....no really. What does she care that he takes pride in her....What makes it difficult is being a 17 year old first year. But after some coaxing she sucked it up and bought some inner ear headphones, hopefully she can zone her way out of this horrible nightmare....
Appearance:
Weapon: Her Wacom tablet....No seriously just writes the code for the spell and boom!
Persona
~Name:Lillith
~Arcana:Devil
~Drain:none
~Weak:light
~Null:dark
~Reflect:electricity
~Resist:none
~Skills: Zio ,Rakunda, Dia,Mazio
Critique away
Gender: Female
Age:17
Clubs/Occupation: Web designer.....(Self supporting)
Personality: Isolationist, its not that she doesn't want friends......She doesn't want bother. Explaining things to others is a headache and honestly everyone is generally to dumb to follow the pseudo-code anyway. Spending a majority of her time locked up in her single apartment with just a computer screen for light leaves her looking sickly, so she has low opinion of her own looks, adding more to her desire to avoid others. School is something she dabbles in but it is such a bother and it makes her sweat...she hates that. The children around her don't understand a dollar and they sure as hell don't understand her! IDIOTS.
History: In and out of trouble since her early teen years "Demi" keeps messing with things she shouldn't. Her family is to into tradition for her taste...Oh and renouncing foolish things like religion don't help your situation. While she is brilliant her social skills where left somewhere in the first sand box she was pushed over in. Others her own age scare her, as they are just nogoodstuckupspoiledsnobdontunderstandthedifferencebetweenjavaandlua! mean. Recently due to an over active police officer she began going to school again, oddly he's behaving as her guardian, not that she likes it.....no really. What does she care that he takes pride in her....What makes it difficult is being a 17 year old first year. But after some coaxing she sucked it up and bought some inner ear headphones, hopefully she can zone her way out of this horrible nightmare....
Appearance:
Weapon: Her Wacom tablet....No seriously just writes the code for the spell and boom!
Persona
~Name:Lillith
~Arcana:Devil
~Drain:none
~Weak:light
~Null:dark
~Reflect:electricity
~Resist:none
~Skills: Zio ,Rakunda, Dia,Mazio
Critique away
I have revised my own, Is this closer to the ideal cs? Or is there more work to be done? If there is I am more than willing.
Ill rework it.
*Btw* Thank you for the suggestion on how to do a revision instead of tearing me down, I appreciate it, and will use a lot of your suggested idea in the revision as it still gets the character across.
*Btw* Thank you for the suggestion on how to do a revision instead of tearing me down, I appreciate it, and will use a lot of your suggested idea in the revision as it still gets the character across.
I shall create a cs. be up After I get back from an errand
May I Claim the Devil Arcana?
Erp I missed up when I retyped it sorry *straightens*
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