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The Eevee stood in front of Timothy and blocked his view of the Honedge as she tried to console him. With the Honedge hidden from view, Timothy shifted his gaze to the rest of the pokemon in the room, each of them staring back at him. The expressions on their faces were all too familiar to him. Looks of shock, looks of disappointment, looks of worry. Expressions he was all too familiar with back at home.

"He's so skittish"

"He won't amount to anything!"

"You bring shame to our family!"


Voices from the past. The voices of his siblings. Taunting him.

"Children, be nice!"

"He's been a complete loser ever since he got hurt!"

Everyone in his family had already accomplished so much. He'd done nothing. Nothing. NOTHING. NOTHING!! Useless! Completely useless! Why, he could just-


Something tickled Timothy's neck and brought his mind back to reality. The Eevee had brushed him with her tail and was nudging him to get back up.

No! I can't let that happen all over again! I can't keep making a fool of myself!

Timothy grunted, avoiding eye contact with the Honedge, as he slowly began picking himself up off the floor. His legs were shaking, and his body was sweating, but he refused to drop back down on the floor. Once he managed to get back up on all fours, he stumbled a bit, hitting a few book shelves, but he brought his mind to thoughts of flowery meadows, of sitting under the shade of the tree at the top of the hill by his home. One at a time, he brought each foot forward towards the door.

If I evolve, I'll have nothing left to fear. But I have to earn that evolution first! I need to overcome my fears!

It took a minute of hard determination, but he managed to get himself outside, where he leaned against the tree with a big thump and rested there, panting.

He did it!
Bah, I've been busy. Sorry. I have work soon but when I get back I'll make a post.
Woooow... I have no idea why, but this whole time I was thinking the bandit attacks were happening in the second round of posting... Maybe I'll just trim the end of my post a bit. God, I've been drawing so many stupid conclusions lately.
I'm more talking from a writing standpoint than I am from a game standpoint. They live an absurdly long time, they can transform into dragons, they can communicate with gods... hell some of them pretty much ARE gods. And some can smell intentions. The immense amount of time they live would probably cause them to accumulate LOTS of wisdom and skill in various tasks, and allow them to hone such skills better than any human can in their lifespan.

And as I've also already established, Menkar is a war veteran, which means that against the simple bandits and more, he's gonna wreck shit.
Oh my god, Monado... XD

I feel so terrible for laughing at that post. Well done, though. From a comedic standpoint that was bold and very well executed. I love it! From a writing standpoint, this just makes me want to write more! XD
Post made. According to a Fire Emblem Wiki, some Manakete have the ability to "smell" someone's intentions. I decided to give Menkar a limited variation of this ability, meaning he can only smell malicious intent, like that of a bandit. Since we're talking about a bandit raid, I decided to go ahead with it. If this seems overpowered, do say something. I don't want to be that guy. Manaketes are in general powerful, but I am trying my best to not make this guy too overpowered. Note that Menkar's smelling ability has to do with intentions, so he wouldn't smell something terrible from someone whose intentions are good, but whose mind is warped or something of the like.
Different.

That's one word you might use to describe Menkar. He was not like other men. He wasn't even human. He was a kind of dragon. A beast revered by many, and feared by many more. An ancient being naturally imbued with the powers of a demigod. But, to just call him a dragon would be foolish, for he could take on the shape of a human as he pleased. In fact, that's what his kind, the Manakete, did most of the time. It was easier on their magic reserves, and allowed them to walk among men. And that's what he was doing today. He was alone in the world again. The one whom he wanted to spend the rest of his days with was slain in battle not one month earlier, and he was still deep in grief. But he had learned to don a mask over such emotions in society. He'd done so many times before. It was a mask he'd learn to wear over two thousand years ago. Indeed, with the time defying blood of a dragon running through his veins, years, decades, even centuries were just fleeting moments in his eyes. He called it a curse. He had befriended many humans over his lifetime, and even married one who bore his child. But every single one of them had eroded away to the flood of time. Only he still stood strong. As he had been for the past two and a half millennia, and would continue to for many more millennia. Many he had met over his lifetime called it a blessing. But he called it a curse. Few Manakete walk the earth at one time, so meeting another of his kind was a rare event. In fact, aside from his parents, he had only ever met two Manakete, and one of them was the unfortunate bride to be.

The morning sun was just beginning to beat down on Menkar, who had wrapped himself in a giant brown cloak with a hood, concealing his entire body except for his chin and hands, which stuck forward, placed on his special cane, a gnarled wooden cane with a polished finish and an iron spike in the base which he used for stability on rough terrain. Wings stuck out of his back, but he kept them concealed under his cloak, giving the illusion of him being a giant, hunched over old man, when, while he was certainly old to a human, he was still in his prime as a Manakete. He wore this cloak whenever he entered a town, for while he could take on a human form, his wings were unable to transform. In fact, if you took a closer look, you might notice the reptilian slits in his eyes, or see the sharp teeth concealed within his mouth. Some Manaketes didn't have this problem. Transformation was not something you could improve, it was just there from birth. Female Manaketes generally had a far better grasp of the transformation, as most could fool entire countries into thinking they were human. But not Menkar. His transformation abilities were very lacking, and so if he wanted to keep a low profile, the hunched over giant under the cloak was the only way to go.

He lifted his hood ever so slightly and scanned the horizon, searching until his eyes came upon a small village not a mile away. This was his destination. Someone in this village had reported a sighting of a wild dragon, and maybe, just maybe, it was another Manakete. Wild dragons were very unusual in this part of the country, so the odds were fairly good in Menkar's eyes. With his cane in his right hand, he began walking towards the village, practicing the shaky hands and frail voice that he would use as part of his act.

He arrived in the village soon after, and approached a town guard. "Excuse me, young man..." he said to the guard in a deep, but quivering voice. "Might you be able to point me in the direction of the Moonwatch Tavern?"

The guard eyed him suspiciously, but dismissed his inner doubts and pointed down the road to a stone building with a man sleeping in a chair out front. After thanking the guard, Menkar faked a cough, and made his way to the tavern.

On the way there, he heard shouts and cries from nearby, and watched as a few of the early risers hurried over to investigate.

The person Menkar had planned to meet was likely not going to be at the tavern until later, so Menkar took the opportunity to investigate what was going on. After questioning a couple of bystanders, he determined that some meathead had fallen asleep in a barn and upset the farmer. Much more trivial a matter than he had initially assumed. He grumbled to himself in disappointment, but decided to stick around to see what would happen.
Crimson Flame said I'm procrastinating on on a school paper to write this. You people better be grateful! :P

THAT'S THE SPIRIT! :D

Anyways, I've already got a good idea of what I plan to post. I may even have my post finished tonight. We shall see.
Okay, it makes sense now, I guess...
Sooo... I can just post?
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