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Name: Dante Castello
nickname: Leo
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Relationship status: single
Appearance
Crime: Assault and attempted murder
parents: Victor and Maria Castello
siblings: none
friends: none
partner: none
Personality: Dante is a fun loving guy. His parents were both strict and he has a code of discipline due to that and martial arts training. His father being a master of taekwondo started teaching him at a young age. As he grew up the notion of only using it for self defense and honor were beaten into his head. Dante is a nice person, but also outspoken and not afraid to say how he feels. He tends to get attached to girls way to easily. He is overprotective but extremely loyal, he would die for his friends. His overall physique and care for those he care about led to his nickname of Leo.
likes: Taekwondo, reading, drawing, music, and skateboarding
Dislikes: People who prey on the weak, dishonesty, unnecessary violence, and being aone in the dark
Talents:Proficient in taekwondo, He is above average intelligence, but does not boast about it, knows some first aid due to mother being a nurse
Biography: His parents loved him, but were strict. He never really knew his mother that well she worked a lot at the hospital. His father was very intelligent and a professor, but also a master of taekwondo. He made sure that he passed this on to his son. Dante was raised to never hit a woman, actually he was raised to never hit anyone unless in self defense, but he always wanted to protect the weak and innocent.He was not the most popular guy at school, but did have friends. One of them was a pretty girl who he was fond of named Melissa. Eventually all good things must end. Melissa was attacked and killed, but not before her killers did some unsatisfactory things to her. Dante normally the clear headed calm person finally snapped. Hunting the man down who did it Dante engaged him. It was not so much of a fight as Dante savagely beating this man who he then put in a lock and attempted to suffocate. The guard knocked Dante out now he is on his way to earth.

theme: Can you feel my heart by bring me the horizon

weapon: A large knife that he wears on his belt.

g r o u n d h e r
ill jump in

name: Leo

height and weight: 6'2 and 185 lbs

age: 18

power: increased attributes(speed, strength, perception) all of them are increased by about x3 that of a normal human

weapons: Butterfly knife, a pair of silver knuckles with crosses on them, a longswordsword that he wears across his back, a kite shield that is also worn across his back.

appearance: Black leather jacket and fingerless riding gloves. Ripped jeans and dock martin boots. His hair is jet black and styled into a faux hawk. He has piercing green eyes and slightly elongated canine teeth. On the back of the jacket a silver lion is embossed. He has chains wrapping down each arm.

personality: He is the "cool" guy. He is extremely smart, but also lazy. He likes fast bikes and fast women. He hates people who think theyre better than others and loves to fight them. Hell he loves to fight anybody as long as they put up a good one.
ok I have improved upon the history, and explained his proficiency while at the same time limiting it. I increased the cooldown for his moves as well. I changed his appearance and his swords appearance in its shikai and bankai state. His zanpakuto's spirit is now a female, and I think he should be ok now but if I need to fix anything tell me.
TheRider said
Sebastian watched as the four figures grew agitated. The smile curled his lips into a wide caricature of a Cheshire Grin. Nine writhed, the black snake coiling around its master. It lifted it's head and stared at the figures, tasting the air with quick flicks of its tongue. It looked directly at the man holding the gun at Sebastian, it's muscles coiling gently around the pale arm of its master.Another entered, someone with at least some sense of manners and decorum. Sebastian raised an eyebrow as he introduced himself. He gave a short nod and smiled "as I said before...my name is Sebastian...soon to be God of Revels, Pleasure and Desire" he said with an exaggerated bow before looking back up "as pleasure to meet a man that thinks with his head" he tapped his temple before looking over at Adrian with a distinct look of disdain before his yellow eyes flicked back to the man called Daniel. He went to step forward when the gun wielding idiot dropped his gun and his jacket to pull out his sword. Sebastian didn't quite understand the need to reveal the painfully unattractive body the man had...nor did he understand the need for violence.Sebastian just sighed, a soft sound of disappointment "I don't understand where this need for violence comes from" he held his hands up "have I wronged anyone here in any way?" He said, his voice losing its playful tone as he looked at the cold steel blade that threatened him "if you fight me now...I cannot guarantee you come out without scars...." he said slowly "not physical scars mind you...I can already see that your one way desire is tied to the leather clad beauty here...I know ways to harm people without actually hurting them" his lips curled into a sick twisted parody of a grin, a brutal gash that split his face at the lips "I suggest to not raise my ire you thick skulled, arrogance spewing, over confident little insect" his eyes glowed with unnatural yellow power as he stared Adrian down.


Adrians lips pulled back into a snarl and a growl emanated from deep within his throat. His muscles tensed as his anger grew. "Ill show you a scar." Adrian said slowly walking forward. His katana was held to the side with his right hand and his footing was equal. His left hand was across his body on the bottom of the katana's hilt. Slowly he began to advance on the other man. When he was about five feet from him Adrian quickly dashed forward.

Leading with his left foot Adrian pivoted and brought the sword around in an arc at the mans chest. Though the wound would not prove fatal it would incapacitate the man if it landed. The blade was a silver arc as it flashed at blinding speed towards the other man. Adrian' face was emotionless and he said nothing merely concentrating on his blades trajectory.
allright im working on improving the cs I was a bit rushed earlier ill go more in depth.
ok character is finished
"What the hell man im about to kill that guy!" Adrian said stepping between Daniel and the newcomer. "You think I cant hurt you?" throwing the handgun to the side and dropping his jacket to the floor Adrian drew his sword. "Why don't you come find out what my steel taste like?" Was all he said as he stared the other man down with fury.
its a work in progress I'm at school ill finish it when i get to the house
Name: Raizo Hizure

Appearance:

Age: 180

Height: 6'2

Weight: 185 lbs.

Hair Color: black

Eye Color: green

Race: shinigami

Rank: unseated

Spiritual Energy Color: gold

Personality: He is a generally quiet individual, but also enjoys saying his mind when in the company of those he trusts. He enjoys being around people he likes and is outspoken then. When around crowds or people he doesn't know, he is uncomfortable. Women in general make him uncomfortable, but he can talk to them like normal. He dislikes vain people who think themselves better than others. He is a fighter at heart and loves nothing more than a good battle. When he is around others he will avoid conflict, but if someone does something such as threaten an innocent he becomes very angry.

History: He grew up in the soul society as a slave. The war on all fronts had taken all but the youngest of his family. He was found and taken for a slave. He worked for a middle class family. He was not mistreated, but he was not treated as an equal either. Mostly he was to do chores and be a companion for the family's son. At the age of 100 the other boy died. With that role no longer needed, and the family stricken by grief Raizo was forced to do more arduous tasks. When the man retook the soul society he simply had to wait and bide his time until he could join him. Watching this mans incredible display of strength had inspired him. He wanted to emulate this free man and become a hero like him. A nameless shinigami who the took back the soul society noticed how in his free time he was always attempting to practice sword techniques. These techniques were imperfect and inadequate, but the man saw a burning passion in Raizo. Buying him from the family at the age of 110 he began to raise the boy. Raizo agreed to do whatever the man required so long as he would teach him the way of the blade. For the first 30 years Raizo was allowed to do nothing but train his body. From the time he woke up until he passed out from exhaustion the man made him push his limits. The man was a firm believer that he who landed the first blow always landed the last. Because of this he made Raizo train on his footwork and speed more than anything else. While the boy did become physically stronger his most impoved attribute was always his speed. Finally at the age of 140 Raizo was allowed to begin training with a blade. He was given an unnamed sword like all shinigami are and for the first ten years was allowed to do nothing but meditate with it. On the eight year he contacted his swords spirit. Meeting in her word it was a peaceful lake were they stood atop the water. She told him of herself and he did the same. For the next two years he did nothing but continue to strengthen the bond between himself and his sword through meditation. Finally after ten years he was allowed to perform combat training. His conditioning paid off and he excelled at melee combat. Learning to use advancd sword techniques quite easily. For twenty years he practiced sword techniques and the ability to use speed based moves. Finally at the age of 180 his master has deemed him fit to attempt to join the gotei 13.

Other: extreme speed and sword proficiency. He is not the fastest but for his age he is very quick and agile.

~Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto name: Kogane no raion kiba

Type: fire

Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: "Fall before the lions fang. Release! Kogane no raion kiba!"

Spirit Appearance:

Inner world:

Sealed appearance: katana with gold wrappings

Shikai appearance:

Bankai appearance:
wont obtain bankai until later.

Shikai skills:
1. Lions claw He flash steps past the opponent and slashes them with his sword while it is infused with golden spiritual energy. Greatly increasing its cutting power.(cooldown 2 post)
2. burning earth He stabs the end of his blade into the ground and gold flames erupt from the ground in a line towards his opponent.(cool down 4 posts)
3.Kings cloak Gold spiritual energy envelops him. It appears like golden flames surrounding his entire body giving off an unearthly glow. These flames burn anything but him that they touch and extend along his sword as well.(lasts 4 posts has a 5 post cooldown)
4.Phoenix He uses an immense amount of spiritual pressure to heal his wounds(takes a lot of his spiritual energy only usable once every three days)
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Bankai skills: N/A
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Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills: N/A

Skills

Zanjutsu: Shitonegaeshi, Hōzuri
Kido:none
Hakuda:none
Hoho: shunpo

Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained:
if this is still open id like to make a character.
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