Earnest Evans

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You mean that guy with the chains and who can eat people? He's obviously evil! Of course people are going to toss away a robed monstrous-looking figure who just showed up, looking at the bad guy hungrily and talking about ripping flesh from bones!

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how did you bring that up again? i'm done with it. all i was saying was that if we do boss fights where players only have one person fighting, it'll slow things down. it has nothing to do with personal qualms.

grandsword

The fight will be slowed down, if only marginally, but by separating the players so they all have something to contribute you not only add more player agency but you get to flesh the fight out. If we'd just stuck with Ganondorf and his swords, Pete, Cirno, Utsuho, Chaos, and Jack wouldn't have much to contribute other than taking potshots at Ganondorf while Bee and MAYBE Omega did the visceral stuff. That's not fun. If a whole ensemble of bosses showed up to act as lumberjacks to the main match (where the other protagonists ALSO act as lumberjacks), the players have something to do while Bee deals with the main antagonist.

get called assholes or such when interfering

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This sounds pretty personal to me. Don't feel bad, Chaos did a suicidally insane thing and, as such, died as he lived. Better to die as yourself than live having betrayed your own principles.

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First problem: the cold war didn't start in 1946. The earliest people say it started was in 1947, way too late for him to have been raised during it. Another problem I see is the tone of your work. I'm guessing you have a lot of pent-up anger, and are venting it in your writings. Honestly, it's not a good idea to do that, since it will mostly just get you thinking more and more of the violence you want to perpetrate against your enemies. Instead, I suggest branching out and writing some lighter pieces. Something to brighten the mood and flex your writing chops.

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You seem to have a major issue with getting your tenses right. "A rifle stock slams into the back of his head and he stumbles forward onto the vault door. He growls and brings a hand to the console at the side of the door" is in present tense, when it shouldn't be. "A rifle stock slammed into the back of Finnand's head, sending him tumbling into the vault door. Growling, he brought his hand to the console at the side of the door." flows much better.

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i act hostile to seemingly hostile evaluation.

JonxlatheLion

Criticism comes in all forms, friendly and unfriendly. The mark of a great artist is the ability to pick out the advice from what you see as hostile bullocks.

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Those are actually some very interesting premises. Could you post an excerpt from The Burning?

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Ten years of practice will mean nothing if you act this hostilely to criticisms of your characters.

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It's harrasment when you won't stop despite me stating my feelings were being harmed

JonxlatheLion

If you felt intimidated and abused because of arguing with us, it would have been best to ask us to stop instead of escalating the argument into you quitting the RP.

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Arguing isn't harassment, you know. It'd be a rather silly move for you to completely give up on this RP because of three people.

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If you want to give up on something you spent 2 years on because of a bunch of argumentative dudes, go ahead.