eddieddi

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James sighed and glanced round, The last of the toads had been finished off and he was debating what to do next. "I know we won't get involved, But I'd like to see what exactly is going on with the two big guilds, It'll be nice to see the idiots butt heads again." He sighed and about turned, Leading the others back to the airship. lazily clambering up the rope ladder that they'd left there. it didn't take him long, the game had been arranged so long distance travel via airship was meant to be fast. Settling down he waited for the others to get up before powering up the airships engines, turning it towards the Isle of departure and the two warring factions he powered the engines up and set course. It didn't take them long before they arrived on the edge of the no fly zone by the bridge, Settling down James activated the long range telescope and settled to watch the soon to be fight. NT wasn't that far out from the Liberation Group.
On the ground, some people would notice the large airship, though not many would find it intresting, It often seemed to appear just before large battles, Some took it as a omen of bad things to come. others knew better, and knew it was the guildhall of the one guild that had managed to remain utterly free of both sides influences.

High School

Shiro sighed, the book disappearing inside his jacket as he swung off the large brace he was sitting on, one hand digging in to it as he swung round, dropping out of it he landed and knocked a few chairs in to disarray, laughing he set off sprinting over them, bounding from chair to chair, letting them fall over in his wake. Sure the teachers would get pissed off, but they couldn't tell him off unless they caught him. and he was never caught. bounding outside and round the corner he set off towards the main building lazily racing in to the crowd, weaving between people and around others, eventually stopping when he caught up with one of his friends from the year before, "Oh Hi alexander, Glad to see you." He said lazily

((Thats you Dmessenger))

God School

Adam had finished filling up his plate just as the spider like construct fell on to his shoulder, clicking a set of instructions to it it swung under his arm and grabbed on to the plate, clamping on to the underside it hummed softly and proceed to float beside him on some antigravity field generated by the spider, keeping pace with him easily. Humming to himself he pulled his headphones off, turning round to look at the others, For now he'd decided to let everyone do the introductions themselves. he was to interested in having lunch. settling down on one of the tables he clicked again and the spider settled the plate down and unfollded showing him a knife and fork, both seemingly made of re-made gears, some outlines still visible.

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OverconfidentMagi said
If you need to use perk points to unlock active skills, do you also have to use them to unlock passives, or are those gained automatically upon reaching a new class tier?@Charak Do you plan on having your character going to follow Esdeath?

Points unlock New teirs, and speccs in those teirs, you get all passives/actives related to that specalism/teir depending on teir.

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ChadsWorth The Thrid said
am I still allowed in

Yes, Yes you are.

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YuukiSuzuki said
You are once again butting in where it is not welcomed Eddi, helping others out or not. And frankly even if you don't mean offence you're starting to piss me off. When I posted as I did, I mean Gin going to the events/fights taking place nothing more, nothing less (he wouldn't fight in that situation regardless, because it means taking sides and he doesn't do that often). So until the time that this is done with, I would greatly appreciate you keeping your comments to yourself, or speak to Shiho about the matter. If you have some sort of issue with me or how I work, then you're free to state that in a PM. Otherwise yet again, please leave this be and don't keep dragging the matter up.

I have taken this up with Shi, And since you are so adamant about it, I'll relate the Decussion to you, Quotes and all. And then I'll link you to what Rin and I spent a good 3 hours working on. Since then maybe you can....Anyway. here;
Sorry for discussion not being in hiders, Apparently the guild doesn't like that.

Hebigami Shiho said
So, well, it's okay to comment on things once in a while and everything, but Yuuki isn't even done with her CS at the moment, and, as it may be obvious, she is getting kinda angry about all of this. As said before, she has already passed every detail through me and I have already brought to her attention the fact that some people think that her abilities are kind of OP, though I did it like a POLITE person. So, I want to ask you to refrain from making any more comments about her CS after, and only after, her CS is finished. And if you are going to make any more comments, then at least make them as a polite and well mannered person would, please. Thank you for your time.

eddieddi said
Just look at what every other player is saying, Even Rin is saying its OP. A Rp isn't a dictatorship, it is a democracy. if the players want something as a whole, it should happen. if the players, as a whole agree on something, it is most likely true. Someone's anger is no reason for me to change my opinion or actions. You can be angry and offended, It gives you no more right than myself. People say "That makes me angry." or "Thats offensive" Like it puts them on a higher horse. You know, I find the OP cs offensive, It makes me angry. Does that give me more right? No. it just makes me sound like a right Twat. If that isn't OP. I will finish Fixing James. soon-ish, got tied up in world building. will stop that.

Hebigami Shiho said
Okay, look, I am not looking to start something here. Everything is cool as it is now, and I truly appreaciate what you are doing. But still, that's no reason to insult Yuuki. I know it is a democracy, but I still want to wait until she is finished, truly, I doubt she ignored everything everyone else said, so I bet she is also tweaking her CS to tone things down a bit. I also talked to her about it. If push comes to shove, then I'll ask her to re-do some of her skills, nothing more. I know this isn't a dictatorship, and I can tell you that I've been seeing and taking to heart everything everyone's being saying. But I don't want to be unfair to Yuuki by asking her 'Re-do everything because others aren't happy with an unfinished product.', so, I'll wait for her to finish and! If you people still think it is OP, then we can all politely ask her to tone it down. How's that sound?

eddieddi said
We shall See. However, One does not put something on the public domain if one does not wish it to be criticized. Rather than repeating the refrain "the gm said it was ok!" Like it is some divine shield, She should say "Ok guys. I hear ya, I'm working on it give me a few days" Then maybe we'd stop asking about it, Becase as far as a few players can see, thats the only reason we wait.

Hebigami Shiho said
Yeah, I know that maybe Yuuki didn't have the right way with her words when she was talking, but please, let's be patient for a while, okay eddie? That's not exactly a divine shield, as the opinion of the many may overwhelm the permission of the GM, don't you think? As well, as I also have some co-GM's (Though they don't show up that much xD) and Rinion is also there, helping me with things like this. I also greatly appreaciate your opinion, eddie, though Yuuki may not.

eddieddi said
I'm Chatting to Rin-Rin right now. He's in agreement. and I'm helping to. Who do ya think did all the crazy shiznit on the map!?

Hebigami Shiho said
Okay, then, I will give in to you. How about we do this? You and Rinion could come up with tiers best suited and less OP than the ones she has now, without altering the main idea too much, and I'll send that to her, as not to offend her or anything. Do we have a deal?

eddieddi said
I'll ask Rin, also, Please treat my "True Elementalist" as a joke. I was just mucking round and caused a zero jump in one of the stats, and thought "lets make this broken as hell"

Hebigami Shiho said
Yeah, figured that. Anyhow, I think later today we'll be starting, so let's keep it cool until then.

'Cool Untill then' I have not mentioned it as Shi stated that your char would not be involved in any fights untill your cs was done.
then you posted;

YuukiSuzuki said
I agree with Loki on this, I doubt I'll add Gin in for a while until the fight properly starts, might be a little to boring and harder to write upon otherwise.

"add gin in for a while until the fight properly starts" Ie you won't post untill you get involved in a fight. Getting Involved in a fight kinda indicates your fighting.

So in responce to Shi asking me to do YOUR dam work for you I did this'

Fixed Skills

Tier One
Speedster [Passive]
Increases agility by +10 and strength + 5 while a bladed weapon is equipped.

Main Sub-Tier One
Teleport Slash [Active]
The user Disappears, and then reappears 50m away in a single direction, DMG is done to all foes in between , This skill has a cool down of 30 seconds, and scales with tier, Gaining a increase of -1 sec cool down per teir, and a extra 10m per teir, The user can chose to cut the slash short, increasing dmg, reducing distance traveled.

Passive; Dual Weild,
Due to such high specialism in the chosen Weapon, The user can Dual Weild from the very start of their Adventure.

Secondary Sub-Tier One
Weapon Combine Active.
The user can combine Two weapons, Such as two handguns, Or two Daggers, In to one larger weapon, such as a assult rifle, or a longsword, and use said weapon as well as they could use the previous one, This skill lasts for 20 seconds, costs No mana, and has a cool down of 3 Minutes, The chosen weapon must be declared before the spell is cast.

Empty Clip, Active;
The user empties the entire clip in under 2 seconds towards the foe, This causea a 50% acuracy drop, but increases Dmg by 100% per shot. The skill uses No mana and has a cool down of 10 seconds, It does however expend the guns clip, Can be used with dual weilding for even more firepower.

Shoot Barret: Barret H [Active]
Uppon use The gun gains a +60% acc boost, and can also ‘lock’ on to a foe, this requires tracking the foe for 5 seconds, locking on to a foe gives the bullet a homeing ability, which means it homes in on the target for 3 seconds, Upon impact it reduces the foes Agi by 10% for 10 seconds.

Tier Two [-]
Tier Two
Slasher [Passive/Active]
When attacking with a the users ‘specialist’ weapon, auto attack speed is increased by 10%. Can also be increased and thus doubled to 20% for two minutes, Two minute Thirty second cool down.

Main Sub-Tier Two
Teleport Slash One [Active]
The User Gains a bonus to Teleport slash of 10M and a cooldown reduction of 1 second. This bonus re-occurs for every tier (Not re-typed for sanity’s sake)

Mana Blade; Active
The user summons Mana based Throwing knives, Each Knife gains a 15% acc buff (stacks for each knife!) however each Knife takes 5% of max manna to throw, extra knives not thrown do not consume Mana, The buff is lost after 5 seconds of no thrown knives, however the knives can be summoned any time.

Secondary Sub-Tier Two
Variable Shoot [Active]
The User can now enhance bullets with Mana, giving them a Elemental attunement, Either towards Fire, or Earth, Fire bullets have a 50% chance to burn foes, or set them aflame, Earth bullets have a 50% chance to stun for 2 seconds. This skill costs 15 mana per bullet and has a 10 second cool down.

Tracker Barret [Active]
The user fires a Exploding Tracker bullet, Uppon impact the target is marked on the users Minimap for 10 seconds, After those ten seconds is up the tracking round explodes, Dealing a medium amount of DMG to the target.

Tier Three [-]
Tier Three
(Second weapon gained)
Gunner's Pride [Passive]
All Gun/Bow based skills gain a +10% acc bonus, including standard firing, This also increases The DMG of all Gun based skills, Including auto attack by 5%

Warrior's Skill[Passive]
The warrior leanrs to store his (or her) weapon in a dimentional pocket, allowing them to carry it wherever they please, However this is detectable viea magical means. The warrior can draw the weapon at will from the pocket at no cost. it is also costless to replace the weapon in the pocket.

Main Sub-Tier Three
Teleport Trails [Active]
Through Repeated use of Teleport slash, the player now learns how to leave a Trail of Paralysis gass behind them, this gas temporarily paralyzes all who inhale it. This gas lasts for 3 seconds before it disperses, and the paralysis lasts for 2. the mana cost of Teleport Slash increases by 5 mana if this is used. No CD change.


Snake Movement [Active]
The player has mastered Multidirectional movement, and can leap 30m in a 45 degree ark backwards, Scattering a mix of Caltrops and small smoke bombs as they go, Caltrops deal a small amount of dmg, and smoke bombs blind foes. It is used as a precursor to Teleport slash, and uses 20 Mana, and has a cool down of 5 seconds.

Active; Bladed Prison,
The users calls forth a cage of blades from the ground to surround the foe, this skill lasts for 5 seconds, if the foe tries to escape they take dmg, the user of the skill can pass through the blades as if they did not exist.

Active; Bladed ground
the user calls forth the same cage of blades, but this time to cut the foe from under his guard. the blads deal high dmg, and do little else. The CD for both these skills is 30 seconds, both skills take up 40 Mana upon us. cast time is instant.

Secondary Sub-Tier Three
Frozen Shot [Active]
THe User can ‘pause’ their bullets mid air, Using them to prep up a large attack, This takes up 10% of the users Max mana per second, However it does allow them to use other skills while doing it, so they can stack skills with this shot. upon releasing this skill all the bullets fly in the direction they were fired, The skill has a CD of 5 seconds AFTER max mana has been recharged.

grapple Shot [Active]
the user can fire a magical grappling hook from any part of the body, this hook can attach to any surface, and will extend/retract at the users will, it takes 10 mana per second, and the user can fire weapons, use skills, even carry another person while using this.

Tier Four [-]
Tier Four
Eagle Eyes [Passive]
The player gains the ability to zoom in up to 4x the normal distance for a player, at teir five they gain the ability to use Night vision, At teir six they gain thermal, Non of these skills take mana. and any zoom focus can be chosen at will.

Boosted Flurry [Active]
The attack, Aided by both Mana and Stamina shatters a foes defence, leaving them unable to do anything but reel backwards in shock at the fury of the users attack. this inflics the ‘broken’ debuf, for 10 secs, wich reduces a foes armor by 90%! However it takes 50% of the users max stamina AND max mana, also this skill has a 5 second cool down when any other skill is used, its own cooldown when used is 2 minutes.

Main Sub-Tier Four

Poisonous Touch [Active]
The user can apply toxins to a blade or bullet, Dealing Damage over time to whomever it strikes. This damadge over time lasts only 8 seconds, However, each ‘tick’ deals x2 the last, For example, if the shot deals 500 DMG then The first tic deals 5, dmg, then 10, then 20, so on and so forth untill the last tic at 8 seconds deals 320 dmg, it is 1 tic per second, The activation time is zero, but the cool down is 3 minutes. This costs 50 Mana to activate.

Forest Of Blades [Active]
By placing the hilt of the blade against the ground The user calls forth a 10m radus of blades around them, slicing all foes and throwing them outwards, The blades move with the user, even if the hilt is taken off the ground. This skill uses 30 mana per second used and can be cancaled at any time. 4 minute use maximum. 5 minute cooldown.

Secondary Sub-Tier Four

Shadow Image[Active]
The user Creates a ‘shadow image’ of themselves, Which looks like an exact replica using illusion and shadow magic, This illusion is created with a puff of smoke, and the creator becomes invisible for the duration of the skill, The Image continues moving as the creator was, for 25m, At which point it can perform a single action, A basic auto attack for normal DMG, upon the users target, Or a standard T1 or T2 skill, at 25% dmg, Or do a corner and run another 25 meters, upon impacting a foe, the image explodes, dealing a small amount of darkness damadge and Blinding the foe for 2 seconds, this skill has a 3 second cool down and costs 20 mana regardless of what is done.

Tier Five [-]
Tier Five
Mana Collection [Passive]
The user gains an additional +15% max mana and a aditional +5% mana regen, and any attacks used at max mana gain a +200% DMG bonus.

Main Sub-Tier Five

Mastery of The Blade Passive;
Only one step away from total mastery of the users chosen blade, they can now chose to infuse the blade with a specific element, While passive this Reduces the users Max mana Regen by 2% but can be turned off at any time.

Precision Strikes Active:
the users has mastered Such knoledge of foes that they know where and how to Strike, the next 2 strikes cause the ‘bleeding’ debuff lasting 15 seconds stopping a foe going invisible, or stealthed, as well as dealing a small amount of DOT, this debuff also increases the DMG done by any poison or flame attacks. This costs 30 Mana and has a CD of 15 seconds

sure Strikes, Active;
the user has mastered strikeing faster, and strikeing stronger, The next 2 attacks are sure to strike, and cannot be blocked, Cannot be stacked with any other ability. Skill uses 30 mana, has a CD of 15 seconds.

Secondary Sub-Tier Five
Blazer Mode [Active]

Crossfire: Genocide Shift [Active]

Optic Hide [Active]

Tier Six [-]
Tier Six
Dual Combination [Passive]
The Specialist has mastered both their weapons to such a level they can not only duel weild single weapons, but they can weild a blade in one hand, and a gun in the other, Or any similar combination of their choice, The downside is that Attack speed returns to normal, And skills DMG is halfed. however all skills can be used.

Full Drive: Gear Excelion! [Active]
Known as one of two trump cards for the Specialist. The [Full Drive Mode] ignores the strain on the player's body to push them beyond normal limits, all stats are increased by +20 for the duration, save for agility which is increased by +40. All damage dealt is increased by 50% and all mana costs are halved. Lasts for a maximum of 2 minutes, Although can be stoped any time. Only usable once every four hours.

Blaster System [Active]
~Locked~

Main Sub-Tier Six

Kill, Shinso [Active]

Secondary Sub-Tier Five
Crossfire Burst [Active]

Divine Breaker [Active]
I didn't go any further because 1) You weren't going to be using them right away and 2) I wanted you to actually do something on your own CS, ya know?

Also, Quoting Rin here;
"Eddi has full CS review permission, Work With, and not Against him."
I can't find the actual post right now. but I will.
and I'll re state right now; Just because your offended does not put you on a higher horse than everyone else, Your attitude towards someone trying to keep this RP somewhat sane, and someone who as done more than 75% of the Lore work is pissing me off. Doesn't mean I have any more right than I did before. Maybe a Update on your CS would be helpful in this case? Just so we can see you're not just assing us around.

I hope that adequately expressed my sentiment, Since no one else is doing anything about it and I'm doing most of the CS review work. though Asuna is helping massively. ~tips hat in her/his direction~.

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DragonBeastMode said
Eddie, Hebi, and Rin I wasn wondering if I could make a 2nd char, I think it would be fun for me to have a char on LG and NT. It's funny because my psychopath class is on LG and not NT but the class I won't for NT you would think would be on LG. I love doing that. I hope you give me the ok^^.

If you can keep up with to, feel free.

xAsunaWolfx said
char, ask magi or wait a little bit. I'd imagine you'd see her again Anyway. And Eddie, I hope your CS is flawless as well. It's rarely the character's abilities that cause OPness, but the RPer in the IC because as the RPer, that's where you control a lot of your abilities. Hebi seems a laid back GM, texhnically You should be on the same boat since its her RP. And dragon, I think the rules says you can have what you want as long as you can manage them lol

Oh I agree that my CS's are far from perfect and Open to all sorts of OP BS if treated right, However, I don't have a skill that gives me a Unique rarity weapon from the get go that is always max level for my char and can extend said weapon over 5km at 50 times the speed of sound and treat that weapon like a tentacle. Along with the ability to convert it in to twin assault rifles with homing exploding bullets. But there's a difference between Laid back, and "Open to every OP class under the sun."

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KabenSaal said
CS stuff!

Please state how long the buffs/debuffs last for, Also give the first power some cast time or cool down, otherwise I can see it spammed to create immortal creatures.
Also your last spell CANNOT be a instakill. Maybe it deals a immense amount of DMG (see necromancers Death Touch, Or Unholy word). And you may want to split the T3, T4, and T5 skills in to two 'branches' where you can only access one branch. otherwise it will seem a little OP, maybe one is about DOT and one is about Healing?

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OverconfidentMagi said
Check pliz

Ehh, Should be good from what I can see. Though we'll see how it handles 'ingame' as it were. In short go ahead until further instructed.

God School

well watch one!