Fat Boy Kyle

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Vates can see possible futures... sometimes... I should really work on beefing him up. I don't imagine he could touch any other player at this point :P

I think the whole flying throne bit was the only issue I had with Itkomi, but everything else was fine by me. Given that he's one of the few fully fledged bad guys at this point (from what I gather) he needs to have some advantages.

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I'm still alive, just waiting on more posts before I contribute again :)

Hidden Motivations?

Politicians often have to present to the public the notion that they support a particular set of ideas, not because they believe in them, but because the mentioned ideas are popular and likely to win votes. In the UK (at least) political parties also employ 'whips' who keep their members in check, meaning that unless a MP wants to be kicked out of their party they have to be seen to support (in public and voting) most of what their wider party supports regardless of their own beliefs.

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gamer5 said
I fight back!

1. My CS and Sample are definetly readable now.
2. I showed my CS and Sample to Kaga (Kagamine) one of the people which were in charge of the Writter of the Month OFFICIAL CONTEST on the Old Guild which said that it showed a great level of grammar accuracy and dedication to making the post. I hold her oppinion twice more important then yours since she was one of the most influental people on the Old Guild and one of the rare people which I trust about grammar stuff.
3. I read at least one of your IC posts and glanced at a few other ones which you and the other made and I think my Sample and CS are at least incredibly close to that grammar level if not at the same.
4. My style of writting is based around long, multiple sentances linked together. Yes, this is a hard thing to do, but in the long run and with good linking it becomes a beautiful writting style which creates, (at least by my opionion), a feeling like you are reading a novel not a post. If you want don't like this then do what you told me to do.
5. If you wish to drag this stuff feel free, but when it comes to argumenting my stand stance I was one of the best, if not the best, in my school. You have been warned.

Extra - If you need a show how good and dedicted my post can be take a look at my new RP. (LINK is here:http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/16966/posts/ooc)The first OOC post explaining the setting is clear, intresting and allows the roleplayers to be creative. I was also willing to spend a whole day working on it and the map to make the experience of roleplaying on such a RP nicer and smoother.

Gamer5, former GM and member of numerours Casual RPs, current GM of the Lands of Lemea and WOTM Casual-level winner.

I couldn't help myself, sorry. Looking at some of your posts I see that you can, on occasion, clearly write to a decent standard. However! When you consider this, the fact that your writing standard seems to be so inconsistent, and that you yourself said it takes much more effort to write to our standard (which to be honest isn't that high - simply just grammatically correct), it perhaps indicates an underlying problem. Perhaps you should get checked to see if you have dyslexia or a similar condition. Good luck with your life, you may need it.

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Sony Vakarian - Korriban
Sony kneeled on the cold stone floor far into the underground maze. He was exhausted, both mentally and physically. For months now he had been in this ancient tomb, trying desperately to unlock its hidden secrets, to learn its power. When he had first entered the tomb he had felt little change in the force and would regularly leave the temple to hunt or trade. However over the last two months, since travelling much further into the temple he had been sensing massive shifts in the force; he held the temple responsible for this and believed that it must therefore hold great secrets.

The only artifacts he had so far been able to find were some teachings of a once powerful sith named Darth Nox. Through study he had learnt of a ritual known as force-walking, but still did not fully understand how it worked and nor what repercussions it had. Whilst these artifacts were drenched in the dark side of the force Sony knew they weren’t responsible for the massive shifts in the force and had continued to look for answers with no avail. Having been underground for over two months, Sony had adjusted to the darkness and had also been forced to nearly starve himself. “What more can I do?” Sony tried to shout, but his exhaustion allowed only for a course whisper to escape his mouth. “I have meditated, I have seethed, I have torn through walls, I have read, I have looked over every inch on this temple and I have had no rewards. Is this a test of will? A test to see if I’ll go mad? I do not care anymore. Keep your secrets. I am leaving, and one day I’ll return and bury this temple beneath mountains!” and with that he rose to his feet and begun making his way out of the ruins.

Many hours later
As Sony reached the entrance hall he was forced to squint due to the light shining through the temple’s entrance. As he walked towards the entrance he passed one of his caches and picked up a couple of bottles of water, downing them quickly. He smirked lazily to himself as he thought about how stupid he had been to not simply trackback and resupply at a much earlier time. As he reached the entrance he was hit with a gut wrenching realisation, that he could still feel the huge shift in the force. ‘But how?’ he thought to himself ‘Before I could not feel the shift until I was much further into the temple’. He stood outside the temple now with his arm sheltering his eyes from the light as he tried to comprehend what was happening.

‘What if the temple was not responsible for the shift?’ Sony slowly moved his arm away and looked up at the sky, seeing multiple trooper shuttles litter the view and feeling the presence of force users. ‘The Sith…’

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eyesonlyhacker said
We can probably use all the approved characters listed together. Jones add this to the first post if he wants to.- Played by: Jones Sparrow- Played by: jman221- Played by: StephenRouse- Played by: Automaton- Played by: Fat Boy Kyle- Played by: Skyrte- Played by: eyesonlyhacker- Played by: Apoalo- Played by: HellHoundWoof

Might be worth copying and pasting that into a CS thread for easier and quicker access. Nice posts by the way guys! :)

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Can we suspend TheGodfather from the RP until he cleans the kitchen?

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Sony Vakarian

Name: Sony (not Sonny) Vakarian
Race: Human
Age: 27
Appearance: Younger than in photo and with a finer trimmed beard. Stands at 6ft1. Weighs about 13/14 stone. Has brown hair. Blue eyes. Multiple body scars.
Faction: Grey Jedi
Bio: Sony was born on Coruscant into a family of force sensitives and was the eldest of three children. His father, Oku Vakarian, was a Jedi Knight (a Jedi Shadow to be specific) who’s duty was to seek out and destroy anything belonging to or in support of the Sith and its teachings. Sony rather expectantly was sent to the Jedi Academy at a young age and would go on to become his father’s apprentice.

Growing up Sony showed great potential in regards to control over the force and was a great academic. His skill with a lightsaber was also of a good standard (mostly in part to the expectations and strict training of his father and family). As he got older his thirst for knowledge greatly grew and it was expected he would become a Consular, however as he began accompanying his father of missions this changed quickly. Oku taught Sony lessons that most Jedi would frown upon, telling him that the Jedi’s stoic nature was unnatural and that Sony should embrace his humanity. Sony also found that Oku would often study or even preserve some Sith artefacts; the very same ones that he would be tasked to destroy. Oku told Sony that it was the only way they could truly understand the Sith and the only true way they could preserve balance.

Sony also began studying the darker side of the force, although with much caution and still held a firm belief in the light side of the force and the general Jedi beliefs. However he was careless around his friends when back at the Jedi Temple and some Knights became suspicious of his teachings, leading into an investigation of him and his father. Sony, unaware of the investigation, was requested to stay at the Temple for multiple missions. During which time the investigators discovered that Oku was studying the Sith artefacts and teachings, but due to unforeseen circumstances were not able to apprehend him and so he returned to Coruscant oblivious.

Sony went to meet his father as he landed and witnessed two Jedi Knights, both he considered family friends, draw their lightsabers and cut his father down as he tried to resist arrest. Sony in a surge of absolutely blinding rage attacked the two knights, killing one and seriously injuring the other. Using his fathers shuttle to drive to another port, Sony smuggled himself aboard a freighter. He has been roaming the galaxy ever since learning what he can and trying to master the force. He has grown to hate the Jedi, and thinks that their devotion to the light side is just as unbalanced as the Sith.

Personality: Sony is in complete touch with his humanity, having shrug off a lot of his Jedi teachings and doing his best to keep balanced. As such he is not as stoic as a Jedi, but neither is he as sadistic or chaotic as a Sith. He tends to act seriously and has little time for games.

Skills/weapon(s) of choice: Sony has a standard orange lightsaber and he uses the Niman form. He is adept at using basic force techniques and will often utilise his anger whilst doing so; he can use force lightening but it greatly fatigues him.

Relationship?: Oku has a younger brother (Obi) and sister (Shi’an) on Coruscant, both of which are now in their very early twenties and are Jedi apprentices. He has no contact with them and does not know what they think of him.

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Too late to join?

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GreenGoat said
*sobs*So that means Im just a minor side character?*runs away crying*

Me too