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Ren paused, readying herself for the next sweet intake of Telonin breath. Something moved, high above her in the fading light of the horizon. She squinted, hoping to catch a better look at the unusual disturbance. Planet Inok rarely had visitors. It was far too far out of the way of any place of interest - save, of course, the industrial site of Telonin Farm. The only guests Pol ever entertained were ruthless Klinx representatives who were cryptically insistent on forging deals regarding ship oxygen supply and trade, despite their lack of a need for oxygen themselves.

Ren shuddered in the cooling air, but it wasn't due to the chill. The mere thought of the Klinx was enough to cause unease in the gut of any being - human and T'brak alike. Thankfully her father was a being of iron will, and of plasma artillery. Surely it wasn't that time again. The last batch of representatives had only recently left their farm not two weeks earlier.

She narrowed her eyes tighter and scanned the sky for the flashing light she had seen.

There.
And again.
A craft?

Swallowing hard, Ren realised that whatever the illuminated figure was, it was definitely inbound for the surface of Inok. As it drew closer, her anxieties were confirmed. The craft was definitely not of the T'brak. Concern began to knot tightly in her belly as her eyes followed its descent into an area nearby that was, thankfully, free of industry and civilisation.

If she were to call over a guard, the mockery that would follow would haunt her for the rest of her days. Poor Bragga, they would offer condescendingly. Can't even manage by herself when something out of the ordinary happens. She needs our help! As usual.

No.

She was on the verge of losing everyone's faith as it was. She was going to hande this herself. Her hand closed around the nearest metallic object she could find. A rake. She grunted her annoyance, but it would have to do.

Slipping into an exo-suit, she held the rake in both hands and began to trudge her way through the external fields towards the damaged craft in the distance.

It was close. The filters failed to remove the smell of burnt wires and molten metal as she edged closer to the vehicle. An outline. An entrance? She brandished the rake above her head, ready to bring it down onto the metal frame with as much force as she could muster.
Human name: Eva (?) /
T'braxi name: Telonin Ren

Age: 22

Appearance: She has an outdoors-y tan from working the fields/greenhouse. Her hair is a deep brown - almost black - and reaches down to her waist, although she generally keeps it up in a sensible ponytail. Her eyes are a cold, pale grey. She generally wears various fitted pants (more suitable for movement) with boots and a white button-up blouse. She stands at the little smaller end of average height at 5'3".

Gear: Ren has never handled a "proper" weapon in her life, save for the knives and laser scalpels used on Telonin Farm to check the maturity of their oxygen-producing crop. That being said, her steady hands and precision were skills of note among the family and staff.

Personality: Ren initially comes off as aloof, but it's merely a symptom of being preoccupied with her struggle to fit in with her T'braxi community and being a suitable (and recently-announced) heir to the Telonin property, with all the assests therein. Genuine smiles seem rare at first, but become more frequent with time and guidance. Her human warmth and altruism are alien to her as T'braxi efficiency and focus is all she's ever known.

Bio: Eva (Ren) was used as currency when she was still an infant. In exchange for a year's worth of ship oxygen Eva was handed over to Telonin Pol, head of the Telonin Oxygen Farm. Being a decent albeit hard leader, Pol refused suggestions to make Eva a domestic servant and instead raised her as his human daughter, renaming her as Telonin Ren. Ren is now second-in-command of her father's business but still lacks any true respect from her T'braxi community, being the only human in the region (and humans having a poor reputation throughout the galaxy).


T E L O N I N F A R M


Ren ignored the whispers and sniggering as she made her way through the aeroponic maze. Just keep counting... she thought, the internal monologue keeping a firm hold on her frustration. Forty-five steps. Forty-six. She marched farther and farther away from the murmurs and deeper into the tangle of young greenery.

It wasn't as if the situation was anything new. The T'braxi had always seen humans as an inferior species - why would she be any different? When she was younger and more "insolent" she had fought hard to show that her soft, peach form wasn't a hinderance, that one needn't be 7 feet tall and ash-skinned to be a productive member of society.

Those days had long since passed. Eventually the frayed ends of her patience were worn down to numb stubs. Her pride no longer mattered. All that mattered now was ensuring she upheld the standard of excellence and discipline for which Telonin Pol was known. After all it had been announced in the last Erkiin that in the highly unlikely circumstance that Pol should ever ascend to the stars, Ren was to take his place - much to the dissatisfaction of her T'braxi "brothers".

The thought of Prin and Povol being furious with her brought a heaviness to her heart. T'braxi politics and perfection was far too much at times. She sighed. Had this been a community of Bragga - of humans - would the situation have panned out any differently? She glanced skyward, grey eyes gazing longingly beyond the clear ceiling of the biodome. What's out there? asked her mind's voice. Are they out there?

The evening air was finally cool and thick with moisture. Beads of marching sweat which had clung desperately to the slick film of her skin now rolled down her neck to settle into the white fabric of her buttoned blouse.

She shut her eyes and inhaled deeply.

The oxygen of Telonin Farm really did feel different to regular air. It reached deeper, tasted sweeter. Perhaps the advertisements circulating around Axis weren't gimmicky after all. An uncommon chuckle escaped from her throat as she opened her eyes and turned them to the empty, darkening sky once more. One day...
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Ooh. I'd either love to participate or see how this pans out.
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