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Schradinger said
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And in regards to Grnmachine's character, I'm not a GM but I would like to raise some concerns/pose some questions. First the concerns.Considering that my original iteration of Krix had skin as hard as iron and was turned down by light because of his wide array of immunities/resistances, I'm not sure this would be something he would approve. Tempered steel itself can be twice as hard as iron, and Anthony's skin is harder yet. In addition to that, he's protected against fire, ice, earth, wind, water, illusion, light, and lightning magic. And exceedingly resistant to acid. That's more resistances than my character originally had, and even greater resistance to physical harm.

The next concern is with the time limits on your abilities. In most arena settings, for the purposes of measuring the timing of abilities that have a time limit, a single post is generally worth about 5 seconds. This means that your ice arrow would completely immobilize your opponent for 6 full posts, during which time you could do pretty much whatever you wanted to them (it also means you would only be able to use each type of magic once every twelve posts).

Then for the questions. These probably don't need to be answered in order to get accepted, but I tend to run through scenarios in my head and my curiosity demands they be asked (it'll also save time later on if I ever fight you so I know what the specific effects of his abilities actually are).

When you use the word "target", do you mean the thing he's aiming at or the thing the arrow hits? As an example, say he shoots the fire arrow at his opponent and misses for whatever reason. The arrow then goes on to strike the arena floor. Does it simply fizzle out because it didn't hit the thing he was aiming at, or does the entire arena floor now burst into flames?

175 mph is about 256 fps, which while faster than a recurve bow is still slower than modern compound bows. Based on your original post it seemed to me that you were wanting the arrows to be faster than even modern arrows can travel. This one was more of an observation than a question...The wind arrow. As you have it now, if this arrow hit my character I would treat it as though it created a tiny tornado all around my character, but left the character himself untouched. Is that how you meant it?

The lightning arrow. This just makes lightning strike nearby, not where the arrow hits? If so, its only utility in combat would be as a flash-bang grenade.

The rain arrow. Is this just a big bubble of water that will essentially drown the person it hits?


Before you read this, know that i am not closed to changing my character, but i'd like to do only whats necessary to balance him.

Yes, my character had good physical defense, but his magical defense is not as good as you think. Do not confuse "Protected from" and "Immune". Anthony is resistant to the magics listed, but not fully immune; he is affected less by them. His only true immunity is acid- and that will still hurt him if potent enough. His defense is also mitigated by the fact that he has less offensive potential than you may think. The only magics i see being considered as "Offensive" are lightning, and fire. The rest i dont see being categorized by anything except utility. A scythe is hard to land a hit with, and an arrow in and of itself doesnt win a battle easily.

The time parameter i am willing to open a discussion on.

I wrote "Target," thinking of whatever is hit- albeit the floor, walls, etc. Another thing is that magic in the arrow cant be changed once fired, so if i use ice and i miss, i cant change it to rain, and we'd have to deal with a big chunk of ice in the arena for a few posts. However, if it hit a champion, the "Magic" would "follow" them if it has a physical manifestation and lasts for more than 5 seconds, like the wind arrow.

I am willing to change the speed of the arrows. How does 200 Miles Per Hour sound?

The wind from the wind arrow would cause no harm, just annoy the target. The only damage from a wind arrow is the arrow.

The lightning strikes where the arrow hit, so if it hit a person's arm, lightning would strike their arm.

The rain arrow created a big "bubble" of water where it lands, stays a bubble for about a second, before popping, and sending water all over the arena (not at harmful velocity, just sprawl across the floor as water would normally do).

Hope this helps!
i dont want this to die...
MissCapnCrunch said
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I have no idea how to respond....
Champion

Name: Anthony

Age: Looks like late 20's, but has lived for hundreds of years

Sex: Male

Appearance: (I couldn't find a picture.) Humanoid, exactly 6'. Medium build, with blue spikey-ish hair, a black bandana to keep his hair out of his face, tanned skin, and a bare chest and abdoman. Dark brown pants with a black belt similar to the bandana on his head. No shoes.

Powers/Skills/Weaponry: Despite his lack of armor, Anthony is extremely durable. His skin is as tougher than tempered steel, and protected against magic that he casts, and other forms of similar magic. Acid has nearly no effect on him, unless it is an extremely strong kind of acid. Anthony wields an indestructible scythe with around a 1-and-1/2' long handle, And the blade of the scythe comes in after a foot of handle. He can store the scythe in a safe place and summon it to his hands at will at any time. He also has a bow and quiver with an infinite number of arrows. This also has the same summoning and storage ability. His scythe and arrows aren't normal, though. They are extremely sharp and the arrows fly close to 175 mph, and both have the ability to charge to different kinds of magic. Once a magic type has been used, it cannot be re-used for a minute. They are as follows:
Fire, creates an inferno one landed, envelops the target completely, and tends to be ~1500-2000 degrees Fahrenheit
Ice, freezes the target for about a half minute.
Earth, slows the target for about a minute.
Wind, create (Very powerful) random gusts of wind around the target.
Sun, blind the target for 15 second.
Moon, cause whoever was hit to hallucinate for a short time for 30 seconds. The hallucinations distort the reality they see (E.G. they see an object thats right next to them but its really 30 feet away, or vice versa.)
Lightning, summon a lightning bolt near the target.
Rain, an immense amount of water envelops the target.

Deity

Name: Beth

Sex: Female

Appearance: (Again, no picture. Sorry.) Beth has a beautiful face, with emerald-green eyes and light brown hair extending to her knees. She wears a simple white cloth garb and an amulet with a sapphire around her neck.

Domains: Harvest, farming, hunting, food, the seasons, the weather.

Combined

Alignment: Neutral. Very simply, enjoy life to the fullest, and do what you must to survive.

History: Beth came into power through a divine ritual, one that once she used, could not become undone by any means. And strangely, all information (Books, scrolls, etc.) regarding this ritual vanished soon after Beth attained her godly form. She began manipulating the behavior of plants, animals and weather, just to mess with the other gods. This led to the creations of the seasons, farming and hunting. The other gods didnt like this, though, and so Beth created Anthony to battle for control for her. Anthony has lost his fair share of battles, but his only battles to date are against creatures that Beth creates.

Better?
Thanks for the criticism notdeadyet. I'll work on my CS when i can, and it would be great it you drew my charecters for me, but lets do it via PM. I dont always trust people with my email.
When will light be on? Its been awhile since they last posted... I hope nobody minds if i repost my app.

Grnmachine said
Champion

Name: Anthony

Age: Looks like late 20's, but has lived for hundreds of years

Sex: Male

Appearance: (I couldn't find a picture.) Humanoid, exactly 6'. Medium build, with blue spikey-ish hair, a black bandana to keep his hair out of his face, tanned skin, and a bare chest and abdoman. Dark brown pants with a black belt similar to the bandana on his head. No shoes.

Powers/Skills/Weaponry: Despite his lack of armor, Anthony is extremely durable. His skin is as tougher than tempered steel, and protected against some magic. Anthony wields an indestructible scythe around 1-and-1/2' long, which can be stored in a safe place and summoned at will at any time. He also has a bow and quiver with an infinite number of arrows. This also has the same summoning and storage ability. His scythe and arrows aren't normal, though. They are extremely sharp and the arrows fly very fast, and both have the ability to charge to different kinds of magic. Once a magic type has been used, it cannot be re-used for a minute. They are as follows:
Fire, creates an inferno one landed.
Ice, freezes the target for a short period of time.
Earth, slows the target for about twice as long as the ice magic lasts.
Wind, create (Very powerful) random gusts of wind around the target.
Sun, blind the target for a short period.
Moon, cause whoever was hit to hallucinate for a short time.
Lightning, summon a lightning bolt near the target.
Rain, an immense amount of water appears near the target.

Deity

Name: Beth

Sex: Female

Appearance: (Again, no picture. Sorry.) Beth has a beautiful face, with emerald-green eyes and light brown hair extending to her knees. She wears a simple white cloth garb and an amulet with a sapphire around her neck.

Domains: Harvest, farming, hunting, food, the seasons, the weather.

Combined

Alignment: Neutral. Very simply, enjoy life to the fullest, and do what you must to survive.

History: Beth came into power through a divine ritual, one that once she used, could not become undone by any means. And strangely, all information (Books, scrolls, etc.) regarding this ritual vanished soon after Beth attained her godly form. She began manipulating the behavior of plants, animals and weather, just to mess with the other gods. This led to the creations of the seasons, farming and hunting. The other gods didnt like this, though, and so Beth created Anthony to battle for control for her. Anthony has lost his fair share of battles, but his only battles to date are against creatures that Beth creates.Other:
UGH! I hate it when i get the double-post glitch....
Aww man... ugh, i just hope i get one more applicant at least.
Name: Timothy Martin

Age: 18

Nickname(s): (None)

Clique: Outcasts/Loners

Appearance:

Personality: Quiet, passive, reserved

Crush: Isabella Roma

Relationship Status: Single

Hobbies/Interest: Gaming, Science, Coding

Short Bio: Despite being blessed with good looks and a great mind, Timothy was the butt of many jokes and the victim of many pranks. The school authorities never did anything, and Timothy never told his parents. He kept his feelings bottled up, which led to him incoherently ranting himself to sleep every sunday night, and crying the next morning as the alarm woke him. The only thing keeping himself from suicide is his video games. Its the only things that no matter what, always made him happy. He sometimes creates small flash games for some money as he sells them to arcade sites. Once he even got a game onto Steam. People seemed to like his games, which only furthered Timothy's depression. It's not my interests or abilities that cause people to hate me... He thinks. It's me... My personality, how i do things... Nothing can change that... And so it is only when he needs money that he makes a game. It reminds him how much of a monster he thinks he is when people give it good ratings. One day, one of the kids stole his laptop and hid it in the school. Timothy knew his notes weren't in trouble- he had set up certain security programs to prevent it. It took almost two hours to find it- it was in the janitor's room. By then it was snowing- too much so to leave. I hope it ends soon... Timothy thought.

Other: He takes his laptop to school, and uses it to take notes with. Most of the teachers know this. It is also his gaming/coding laptop.
I'll make a CS. Tonight or tomarrow it'll be up.
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