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Lies and slander. She's wearing a concerned adult on her head that's trying to keep her out of trouble.

Should we wait until later to make a second post (since the last person hasn't posted yet), or should I feel free to have Gabby bother someone?
Would it be possible to make some sort of basic map marker for the tunnel system? I'm hoping to expand it into other areas eventually.

EDIT: Also, I like how you're distinguishing between colonies and corps.


Free Workers of La Parranda



La Parranda, Engineering Design Laboratory - 7:19 p.m.


"Stop rotation. Focus: head. Zoom fifty percent."

Doctor Santiago licked her lips as she inspected the design once more. The Tunnel Worm was a beauty to behold, she told herself proudly. The holographic image didn't do it justice, but she was able to see the tunneling mechanism quite clearly. Its head-mounted mining laser could melt through solid rock rapidly, brute force its way through dirt, and suffer no damage from doing so thanks to its durable, almost heat immune exterior. Its overlapping scales made for tough armor that still allowed it to maneuver like a worm should. The mouth was both a weapon - sharp, retractable blades arrayed like teeth made it so - and an alternative exit. A Big Bull could be "vomited" out from the worm, rapidly deployed onto the battlefield.

But the best part? Nobody knew these things existed.

The thought pleased the Chief Engineer so very much. Her design was one-of-a-kind, and its first appearance on the field would be devastating, terrifying, and mortifying for whoever was on the receiving end. This version especially - the Mark I - would be particularly dangerous if it ever saw combat.

Santiago wanted to get the data from such an encounter soon.

Still, there were improvements that could be made to the machine. Smiling, Santiago moved her hand, rotating the holographic image manually. She thought for a moment, then swiveled around in her desk chair and tapped a few buttons on the keypad beside her, then quickly made a few quick taps on the digital drawing pad on her desk - just a few simple dots. "Connect them," she commanded the computer, and it obeyed. "Three-dimensionalize with these paramaters: real height is six hundred percent greater; width tapers from one centimeter to one meter." Again, the computer obeyed; a long, metal piece like a shark's dorsal fin appeared on the screen. "Sharpen," she added, licking her lips once again, eyes growing excited.

She glanced back at the hologram. Slowly, Santiago rose from her seat, shaking her head of long hair, and tugged at the gloves on her hands. "Copy image," she ordered, then reached out with her left hand and began tapping on the Tunnel Worm before her. Slowly, carefully, she added the fin-like blades to the worm, careful to cover every possible angle before stepping back again.

It was perfect. It was beautiful. It was terrifying.

"Yes," she mused, still working out the details in her head. "We'll need... certain metals. We'll need the best metals. Yes. Yes, we will." She had only just begun pacing around her lab when the device around her ear projected an image in the upper-right corner of her view. She stopped.

"Accept call," she said simply. Then, she grinned away at President de La Parranda's face. "Hey, ¡guapo! What brings you to my humble abode?"

"Ai, but it is business this time," the President answered with a large grin. "This time." The two of them spoke like this often, though the President was married. Santiago certainly didn't mind the prospect of casually romping with the man. "For now," Martin continued, "I want a report on those bullets you told me about. Marshal Asturias expressed some concern about-"

"Forget the bullets! And forget that corporate hound," Santiago rebuffed, waving her hand and turning so the President could see the Tunnel Worm behind her. "You shouldn't trust her, you know; she's been in deep with them for some time. But hey: I did finish those bullet design, and look at the cute puppy I found!" She grinned over at the holographic machine covered in terribly sharp blades. "I think I'll call her Precious. What do you think?"

The President whistled. "She would keep me awake for hours if I were to see her in person," he answered honestly. "And I assume that is on your agenda, no?"

"So it is! I need some rare metals, however; only the best will go into the prototype. I want the Mark I prototype outfitted with everything we weren't able to put on the Mark Zero." Santiago smacked a single button on her computer and began transferring a file to Martin. "Think you can get me that, ¿mi deseo?"

Martin's eyebrows rose up. "Those won't be cheap, but... I am going to contact the Talon corporation."

"TSDC?"

"The very same," he answered, flicking a glance back at Santiago. "They won't have any spies in our midst yet. They don't know about our little secret. I feel confident we can secure a deal with them."

"What about that Eudaimonia colony?" asked the Chief Engineer. "Or New Horizon?"

"New Horizon may not be willing to negotiate," Martin thought aloud. "We are rebels, for one; we just destroyed another corporation. For two, we are a mining colony, and they are a mining company. I doubt they'll be open to any deal that isn't one-sided in their favor.

"As for Eudaimonia... Perhaps." Martin scratched his chin. "But I do not know what sort of resources are available to them. They may not have much in the way of rare metals. If they do have them, they'll be guarding this resources closely, I think, and we can't provide them with weapons."

"But we can provide ourselves with them!" Santiago answered cheerfully, clicking another button on her computer. The image of the mechanical worm was replaced by one of a bullet and a lot of hovering text surrounding it. "These should do the trick. Meet the Viper Bullet: pumped full of enough radioactive materials that inject themselves into the bloodstream of whatever poor sop's unlucky enough to be on the receiving end! Even a slight dose should be able to kill a soldier so long as it penetrates skin. Should finish them off between a few minutes and several hours depending on where it hits and how deep it goes in."

"So, it will kill the wounded?" Martin asked, losing a bit of his grin.

"Oh, dear me!" Santiago replied with a mocking gasp, putting a hand up to her forehead. "A bullet designed to kill people! ¡Que horrible!"

Martin laughed hard at that, and the mirthful grin returned. "Touché, touché. Alright: I'll have the munitions factory start producing a few. It'll be a day or two since they need to train the personnel for dealing with hazardous materials. And is the new worm ready for production?"

"I'll need to make some finishing touches and have the other engineers give it a look-see," Santiago replied, grabbing a cloth from her desk and wiping her forehead. "But I should have it ready by tomorrow evening."

"You know what to do when it's ready. I'd like to chat, but... Well, the Marshal wishes to talk about the little secret again."

"Ugh. Of course she does." Santiago blew the President a kiss. "Keep sane, yes?"

"I will try!" he laughed. Then, his face vanished from her view, and her HUD collapsed.
"Wolf's bane," the small woman mumbled as she rifled through the shelves. "Yes. Bogwart, yes. Firelash... Why in the name of all that's holy do I even have firelash?" Grimacing, she discarded it behind her, letting the bottle smash against the floor as she hastily went about gathering up essentials.

At a whopping five feet and one inch tall, Gabriela had to stand on a footstool to properly search through the highest shelves, and she was doing so busily. Bottled liquids and pouches of ground herbs were being thrust quickly into her bags. She was being very choosy about what to bring, not wanting to weigh herself down overmuch. At least, that was her intention. In reality she was snatching up anything remotely useful because she didn't have the time to weigh what would be useful and what would not. Almost everything in her laboratory had a use.

And of course it's going to be confiscated to make some midwife's hand grease, she thought bitterly as she stepped down from the shelf, or some idiot is going to try and make tea out of the basil and lavender.

Gabby sighed and looked around the room. It looked like looters had been through it already, which they hadn't. Gabby had found things she wouldn't be able to take with her - furniture, excess cutlery, those bottles of wine Marius had stashed in the broom closet - and sold as many of them as she could, knowing she'd need every last coin. It wasn't as much as she'd have liked; only a few people had the means of taking a lot of that extra baggage with them, and they knew the sellers were desperate. Still, it was enough to last her the journey at least, and she'd made sure to put the most valuable coins in the hidden compartments in her boots.

There weren't many preparations left to make. Gabby tugged her gambeson on - A great lot of harm this will stop, she thought pessimistically to herself - and tightened her belt a notch. She made sure her focus crystal was still where it ought to be, and it was: on a chain dangling from her wrist, hidden under the sleeve of her tunic. She felt the familiar, latent energies inside waiting for a strong mind to wield them, just as she always did. There were a few other things to bring: a snack for the road, her morningstar...

Gabby looked once more around the room as she headed for the door. She thought about her old mentor, how this was probably the last time she'd be in a familiar place for a long time, and how she hadn't visited his grave since last week. For a fleeting moment, she thought of going out to visit that place and give him one last farewell. He deserved that.

But then she thought about the coming armies of orcs and the grand Varyan legion, and she settled for a half-assed, two-fingered salute before rushing out onto the cobbled streets as quick as she could. Marius would understand.

The road was only somewhat busy, but that was probably normal for a city in the latter stages of an evacuation, Gabby figured. So was thievery. She kept a close eye on her things, carefully keeping a hand on her morningstar as a warning to anyone that wanted to try playing cutpurse. Someone, of course, did make such an attempt. A kid of around thirteen or so ran up to her and tried that pickpocketing trick Gabby had been victim to before: the bump-and-grab. So, when he got too close, Gabby jabbed her elbow into his side.

"Ow! Watch it, lady!" he rasped.

"Watch yourself," Gabby snapped back, picking up her pace. She didn't want to get caught in a conversation with a scamp. He slowed down and eventually turned back, apparently not ready to leave the city yet. Gabby left him to his business.

A few more minutes went by; Gabby managed to get out of the city gates. The caravan wasn't that far ahead, though the sight of it actually made her heart sink. It was nothing more than a few measly wagons and a handful of armed guards, a small group weighed down by supplies, easy pickings for even a small force of raiders or bandits. As if that weren't enough, those who were her age or even younger were hefting weapons around... which, to her, suggested the guards were expecting kids to join in any fight they got into.

Here lies Gabby Varanus, she thought bitterly to herself. She joined up with a small band of runaway nobodies and got murdered by her own people. The end! Nevertheless, she liked her chances more with a few more warm bodies holding sharp sticks nearby, so Gabby fell in with the others, overhearing what was probably some sergeant (judging by his scarred face and his armor) rambling at some young boy with blonde hair, probably a rich merchant's son lucky enough to have some real armor. Gabby's father had an old suit of armor back home, in fact...

But hey! The boy looked impressionable, roughly her age and well equipped. Gabby made a mental note to try and make a good first impression with him; knowing someone rich enough to have his own suit of armor, and perhaps someone skilled enough to use that sword in his scabbard, could be a good thing.

"Alright!" the maybe-a-sergeant barked, "Are we ready to head out?"

Gabby started to reply to that, but got the impression he was checking with someone else in the caravan - probably someone checking the supplies or the like. So, instead, she glanced up at the sky, trying to get a good idea of what the weather she was going to be like. Then, she realized something.

"Damn it," she grumbled. "I didn't bring a cloak."
ArenaSnow's format - he's TSDC - but yeah, it works really nicely.
First joint post made. We've been working on it over the last couple days via PM. Turned out pretty well.

This is how I'd like to do joint posts for things like action scenes and such if anyone ever wants to make similar posts with me in the future.

EDIT: Also, I am shamelessly using TSDC's header format. It's a really nice format.


FBM / La Parranda




La Parranda, surface watch - 2:24 p.m.


The sergeant stood atop a small watchtower overlooking the red, sandy expanse around him. Mean winds had kicked a small sandstorm up, and gusts occasionally brought it high enough to reach him, as they had a few moments ago. The man spat sand from his mouth onto the ground below and quietly wished he was inside the city.

Guard duty wasn't glamorous, but it was an important duty, he reminded himself. He pressed his hand to the side of his visor, peering out across the desert again through the enhanced vision they provided, and sighed. He glanced to his two compatriots beside him, and neither seemed stirred, so he stepped up to the wall and spoke: "This is Watchtower 2 making our routine check. There ain't a damned thing to see."

"Got'cha, number two," a woman's voice crackled back. "Maintain watch."

Ten minutes later, there was still nothing to report. Sergeant Sanchez glanced back out at the desert. He was glad for that at least. He preferred things to be quiet and peaceful. The revolution had pretty frightening, and right now he didn't want any more excitement.

"Hey, Al," said the man next to him, nudging him with his elbow. "Five O'clock. See it?"

Sanchez squinted through his visor and zoomed in on what his friend was saying. Well, shit, he thought, catching sight of one, two... maybe a couple more vehicles moving through the desert, difficult to make out in the sandstorm. They looked to be land rovers, so they weren't that heavily armored, but they could be bandits...

"Flag them down," Sanchez said quickly, walking back to the corner to start radioing in the report. As he did so, he could hear his friend yelling through a voice amplifier:

"You people are approaching La Parranda! Slow down and maintain a steady pace; you are expected to state your business in no uncertain terms!"

2:35 p.m.


Scythe heard the warning and ordered all of the vehicles to quickly slow down. He grabbed his own megaphone and bellowed, "¡Hola! No harm is meant here, we have similar goals on this planet."

The Rovers slowed to a stop 20 yards from the front wall of La Parranda. John, confidently but cautiously, exited out of the vehicle armed with only a pistol safely holstered on his side. "We come as friends, with gifts," he said, his face serious but non-threatening.

A few moments of awkward, uncertain silence passed as the watchmen traded a few words and sent in the message. The sergeant took the megaphone from the private holding it and called back, "We need you to identify any affiliations you may have before you are allowed entry. Who do you represent?"

"Freedom for the Betterment of Mars. FBM for short. We are freedom fighters and our goal is to free Mars by kicking some corporation ass." As John proudly stated this a chorus of "Ooo-ahs" ring out from the small group behind him.

"I am the leader of this organization, John D. Scythe, and anyone who topples a megacorporation is a friend of mine. We'd like to work out an... Alliance of sorts."

The sergeant glanced over toward another soldier on the watch. He shrugged and a barely audible "No sé" came through the megaphone by accident. The sergeant looked back at the approaching vehicles and called out, "Alright: we're going to have the guys inside open the gates. You go in, you wait inside your vehicles until someone comes and gets you. ¿Comprendes?"

"Si," was the short response. Scythe climbed back into his Rover and rolled with his men into the gate, entering a cave. They did as instructed, and waited to meet a figure of authority.

As the gates began closing behind them, the lights inside the cave flickered on all at once. It was a large room: the cave walls were reinforced with pillars of metal, and some fairly obvious murder holes could be seen in the walls. If the residents of La Parranda wanted to start a firefight with someone in this room, they'd have a serious advantage. The walls and floor were covered with white tiles that were worn with years upon years of needing replacement, giving the place an aesthetic reminiscent of a dirty hospital room.

After several minutes, three individuals stepped into the room - militiamen, clearly, with pistols, hammers and knives on their belts. "We're going to need you to leave your vehicles and walk the rest of the way," said the one in the middle with a brown bandanna around his head. "You may bring small arms, but all other equipment must be left here if you wish to proceed."

"Understood," replied John. He ordered his men out of the rovers and walks up to the militia men. "By the way, in the trunk of one of the rovers you'll find a good will offering. Handle them with care." He waited a moment and says, "Lead the way."

Pressing the side of his helmet and speaking in Spanish, the leader headed on through the automatic door he came into. It slid open, revealing a long tunnel with stairs, an elevator and adjacent rooms with bulletproof glass. The group took the elevator down, and minutes later they arrived at a very deep level - floor 62, if the wall was reading the correct number. The door opened, revealing another long hall.

"You'll be speaking with our Marshal in room 140," the bandanna-wearing leader said, leading them forward. "Since we do not know you or your intentions, you will be expected to - how do you say it? - to be on your best behavior." In this cave were ramshackle bunkers and such, clearly another defensive position. All signs indicated this was a military level of some sort. "We've orders to shoot if you try anything, so... don't. Alright?" The man's voice was a bit shaky, but he meant what he said.

They stopped in front of what must have been a former corporate office. Indeed, the Hephaestus logo was still there, only badly damaged and spraypainted over with the word FREEDOM, the sort of treatment buildings get during a riot. John stopped when he saw the defacement and stared, confusing his militia escort. Then, he gave that word a sharp, respectful salute and continued on inside.

The office showed all the signs of having been converted into a barracks. Even the short trip through the building showed it had been badly scored with explosives, and bullet holes could be counted in the hundreds along the scarred, wood-trimmed chrome walls. The smell of ash still clung to the place.

Room 140's door was open when they got there. It looked like a board meeting room stripped bare of decor. In this austere setting, standing beside the long table was a woman of mixed African and Hispanic descent clad in partial body armor striking a pose belonging to a veteran. She stretched a hand out to John.

"Welcome. I'm Marshal Adelina Asturias," she said with no mirth in her voice. "Have a seat."

After shaking hands, John sat and looked at Adelina for a moment before saying, "How does one such as yourself end up here? Your files make you seem like you are... Not exactly a homebody. You're a gun to the highest bidder, a very effective gun, but still just a gun. SkyGuard has had you on their Wanted list and their payroll... What made you decide to take up a cause?" John asked both out of curiosity and to attempt to gauge the woman standing before him.

"I think you're familiar with the term 'need to know basis', Mr. Scythe." Marshal Asturias sat at the head of the table, her hands folded together neatly. "I looked up information on your files, too, in the interim before your arrival. You served in the Skyguard yourself, right? I'm sure you can dream up a few answers to your question.

"However, we're not here to discuss that. You said you had an offer to make." The Marshal drummed her fingers together. "I have the President's permission to make decisions on this matter as if he were the one making the final decision. So, let's hear it."

"Well, we have similar interests on this planet. Namely, freedom," John began. "I think what you people did was a victory for all against tyranny. Quite frankly, the FBM love your ideals. I would like to offer an alliance. The details need ironing out, but, currently the FBM would help protect La Parranda, because, let's be honest, La Parranda couldn't defend against any corporate military forces. The FBM would also send supplies, if they can be spared, to La Parranda. There is also plenty of information to be shared." John confidently and calmly laid out this information.

"Promises and shared ideals may win over some," the Marshal replied just as calmly, "but first, you make it sound as if you plan to wage a war on the Corporations - something we cannot devote this nation to at this time, nor do we necessarily wish to. It's not just a matter of weapons and numbers; it's a matter of holding a sign that says 'Shoot me.'

"So, I'll need some explanations first," the Marshal continued, eyes narrowed as she inspected John closely. "What is your ultimate goal? How do you plan to fight the Corporations? And why should we join you in a fight against the Corporations, especially since public knowledge of such an alliance could easily damn us?"

"Our Ultimate goal is simple: have Mars become a free planet. For all intents and purposes, the Free Workers of La Parranda are a shining example of what the entire planet should be. Fighting corporations is also simple. Harrass them, annoy them, make turning a profit impossible. They'll either have to leave Mars, or be destroyed. On your end of things, La Parranda could be easily destroyed. The security is almost laughable compared to what you may be facing. You know this. A friend willing to defend you and that knows a thing or two about disabling incoming war machines is pretty valuable. Having someone who knows SkyGuard from the inside out doesn't hurt either. And here's the greatest part: our deal does not have to be public. It could be our little secret." John delivered this all very smoothly.

There was a long silence as Adelina Asturias considered what the man said. Her face betrayed very little, but her fingers, still drumming together, seemed perhaps the slightest tad more frantic, just a smidgen faster than before. Finally, she laid them flat on the table and gave the other veteran a wary nod.

"Very well," she began slowly. "Exact details can be worked out in time, but... La Parranda will be willing to strike a silent accord with you. I know there are some among us that would jump at a chance to take the fight to the corporations after what the bastards did." She reached down and pressed some buttons on the device on her wrist. "Here. I'm transmitting some coordinates to you. In return for your show of good faith, we'll allow you use of the Low Road, our expanding tunnel network, to conduct your operations. You may also look for recruits among the populace so long as they wish to join of their own free will. Are we clear on that?"

"Very." John replied, his lips almost forming a smile. "If you ever need to contact me, here's my hologram frequency. May our agreement stand strong against the forces of tyranny." He said, pride oozing from his words. Scythe outstretched his hand for a shake, a final seal of agreement.

Adelina shook his hand, but her expression was much stonier. "Save the flowery words for the President, Mr. Scythe," she answered, her words carrying finality and a cautionary weight. "I'll pray we're not signing death warrants."
Alright. I did the following:

Abjuration went down from Adept to Journeyman. Still her preferred form of magic, but it's going to need training.
Light and Acid went up from Novice to Journeyman. She's better at melting faces and can make basic illusions and blinding flashes of light.
Huh. So, both mages are good at making protective barriers and such?

Should I change Gabby's specialties to avoid redundancy? I'm fine with that. I had been sitting back and cackling "Yeees, I shall make the selfish mage that whips up protective barriers!" like a maniac before, but I'm totally fine with changing my character's focus slightly.

I could reduce Abjuration and increase Acid, for instance, or increase both Acid and Light. Something like that. Backstory changes would be pretty negligible. If I could, I'd only increase Acid or Light by 1 or 2 notches and NOT decrease Abjuration, but Gabby's toting a lot of useful Adept skills already, so that's me asking permission.

Otherwise, I'm 100% ready for the IC too, yeah.
AFAIK this thread is closed.

The word closed probably should be added to the title.
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