Javier

Apocalyptic RP anyone?

I'm not sure at the moment, I need some time to think

Apocalyptic RP anyone?

I'm in, sounds good.

Haven City (Steampunk, Wizards, Fantasy)

Viktor Fights Back

Viktor flew to the top of the wall and looked upon the Orcish army. Shots were being fired left and right from both sides, but the Orcs just kept coming and coming, like there was an endless army of Orcish warriors following the front lines of the army Viktor was seeing. They kept firing down on the Orcs, not even making a dent, no matter how many Orcs they took down. Soon, Viktor began to fire down at the Orc army with an endless rain of fireballs, burning every Orc that he hit. Everything pointed towards the wall defense forcing the Orcs to retreat until Viktor and the commander noticed that the Orcs were using battering rams on the gates and bringing down parts of the wall.

"They're going to break through, we need men down there now!" yelled the commander signaling for the warriors to go to the bottom of the wall. "You," he started, turning towards Viktor "we need you down there as well."

"It'll be my pleasure, anything to feed once again." said Viktor, smiling just before he flew back down to the bottom of the wall.

Viktor un-sheathed his sword with his right hand, at the same time holding his fireball spell in the other, ready for the Orcs to break through. The warriors ready their weapons, everything is quiet for a moment. The silence is suddenly broken by the sound of the Southern Gate falling. Viktor readies his weapon and charges toward the Orcs, firing as many fireballs as he can at them, until eventually, he reaches the Orcs' front lines.

Legend of Korra - For Lack of A Better Path (2)

Lower end skillful is more appropriate.

Legend of Korra - For Lack of A Better Path (2)

Forgot to add something, check now.

Legend of Korra - For Lack of A Better Path (2)

Ok, I know I've made tons of mistakes with my CS, but I've been busy and tried to get a rushed CS because I'm really interested in this RP. So I've edited that part that bothers you, tell me about any other mistakes I've made.

Legend of Korra - For Lack of A Better Path (2)

Cleared everything up now!

Legend of Korra - For Lack of A Better Path (2)

I'm done editing my CS.

Haven City (Steampunk, Wizards, Fantasy)

Sorry for not posting in a couple of days, I'll have a post up today night or tomorrow morning.

Legend of Korra - For Lack of A Better Path (2)

Let me edit it, I didn't have much time to make the CS so I didn't put much thought into it.