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I claim post 200 bitches.
Personally I think it would be impossible for her to tell (Growing up with it or not) unless she pulled down Tess' shirt to reveal that her boobs were actually oranges, but hey, if Allen's cool with it I will be too. Just don't do it to any of my characters.
"Well actually I get told my eyes are really blue, but thanks."


Creepy as shit Allen.
InfernoBlaze said
I'M BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!


Henry Olin, Asae Sugiura, Dana Alcott, & Matthew Evans.

Asae left Tetsuya on the couch, leaving him to talk with Annabella. He looked at her slightly before diverting his attention back to Annabella's questioning on the whole...relationship thing as she put it. Asae walked around, looking for a door of some sort, anything to lead tot he outside. The realization that her and Tetsuya could very well have kids was, shocking to say the least for her. She had no idea how Tetsuya had even taken it before she kind of just walked off from the conversation. What she needed was fresh air, or something to get her mind off the baby situation. Finding the door took another couple of minutes, but she found it eventually, she walked out into the open, breathing in hard for the fresh air. She looked around to see if anyone was around her, before she took off the strap of the box that had one of her prized possesions with in it. She thought about Tetsuya's warning with the schools Policy on items such as this, sighing she closed the box and put the strap back on Find a place farther, away from the school, then open it... a mimic of Tetsuya's Voice ringing in her ear. Yet another thing he left on her mind, his damn scolding. Even when she wanted to get away he was there.

She countined on her path towards any type of opening in the wall, before stumbling upon Henry again. She saw that he stood before a gate of some sort to the outer wall with several others around him. He seemed to be speaking them. Walking up and waving Asae began to speak to the man turned reptile. "Hey Henry! Seems like you've conjured up a crowd, any reason in particular?" hopefully this could be her ticket out and she would be able to pratice using her sword in peace.

Henry's eyes diverted from the group of teenagers he was addressing. It seemed Tetsuya's fiance had joined them. She had a large box within it. He narrowed his eyes at it for a moment before brushing it off. Whatever was in it wasnt his buisness. "Asae," he began, smiling to the woman. "I guess I didn't do a very good job of advertsing with the fliers everywhere. My little gathering here is for a little jungle expidition I've been planning." He said nodding over the group of people he had gather together. "You're welcome to come with if you want." He said. Matt lowered his sunglasses as she approached and said something along the lines of "Nice rack..." under his breath.

It's that woman again. Dana thought to herself as she diverted her attention away from Jack, and turned towards Asae. She adjusted that sunhat she had on, and looked at the woman. They had a brief conversation, but soon as capture the flag started, they went their separate ways. Of course, Dana didn't really have much to say to her, being a strange woman that wandered in here. Dana's mindset was always try to make a friend out of anyone... She just didn't see that working. A change of subjects came fast when she heard that Matt boy saying something lewd underneath his breath. Something about a rack... Whenever a boy mentions a 'rack' he's almost always talking about a woman's mammaries. Dana raised an eyebrow and looked at him with a glare that spoke for her. "Don't be lewd." She chided Matt.

Asae smile faltered slightly when she heard the boy talk about her breast, sighing I'll make mental note of him for future interaction...dont fuck up your ride now she look at the other girl say something to Matt, the girl form eariler that she had been talking to. Asae mentally faced palm trying to think of her name, though she slightly waved at the girl. Best try to start making friends rather then enemies for the time being, she already had enough of those. "If it wouldn't be a huge inconvience, sure, I would love to tag along." though in truth she was simply going to ditch the group and head somewhere by herself.

Matt put his sunglasses back up, but looked over to Dana when she mentioned something about not being lewd. He also saw that Asae had flatered. She had to have heard him as well. Whaaaaatever. "Sorry for that," he said, sounding honest. "I cant compliment one girl without complimenting the other. Nice legs." He said. However, because he said this out loud, Henry heard it, and with his tail knocked the shithead down by wrapping it around his leg and yanking upward. "Insult me next time, please. I can take it and give it back." the reptilian man said, leaning back against the gate. "Sorry about that girls." he said, his eyes seperately focusing on Asae and Dana. Matt got up and brushed himself off, giving Henry the middle finger in obscure ways no one would notice on his way back to standing up. "Dickweed..." Matt mumbled. "What was that? I didn't hear you." Henry replied. "Nothing."

Asshole.... Dana thought to herself, almost wanting to say it outloud. She just hated it when people made fun of her disability... But it was something she was used to at this point. But, Henry was quick to put Matt in his place like he usually did. It almost made her giggle. "... You could always look away for a moment, Henry." She said with a strangely cheerful smile. Nobody would know what she meant except for Henry... And if she did do anything, nobody would notice until she was back in her chair, looking shocked as everyone else. Other than that, Dana choose to ignore Matt. Jackasses like him weren't worth her time.

Asae covered her smile when Henry put Matt in his place, though Matt's remarks to Dana angered her. The girl on the other hand seemed to take it like it was nothing, ignoring it really. It amazed Asae, not only was she able to keep smiling even through an asshole comment like that, she knew how to joke about it. I wonder how she would react to being in a relationship with a giant fucking bear...you're doing it again Sae... she shook her head slightly and walked over to the group, Matt had basically written himself off as the village ass, so there was no talking to him, at all. So it was pretty much between Henry or Dana, she choose Dana only because they didn't have a real conversation from last time. She would just talk to Henry at a later point. Standing next to Dana she took off the sheath and leaned against it "It's nice to see you again, sorry for leaving the conversation so fast from eariler, though I feel like it wasn't a complete loss. I commend you for not killing the asshole over there, personally I would have stuck my swo-...nevermind that, but you're strong willed not to knock him on his ass." she smiled small at Dana, god was she awful at small talk.

"10$ says she has a giant penis." Matt added in, talking about Asae to Jack.

Suddenly, it seemed that Asae wasn't as distant and cold as Dana thought she was. Maybe it was a little wrong to judge a book by it's cover. "It's okay, we didn't have much more to discuss," Dana started off by answering what Asae said about leaving. But then, what Asae said struck a chord. Violence was never a solution, some people may disagree, but it was true. Violence begrets violence. "It is fine... I am used to it after all these years." Dana started off, hinting that she was living with her disability for a while. "But, I would never hurt him over it. Words are words. Only you can decide if you'll let them get to you."

"I wonder if I could get internet famous by doing the ice bucket challenge and then showing a picture of you saying I have a friend with ALS. Then keep all the donation money."

Dana kept ignoring Matt, since he was only proving her point even further.

"Welp," Henry began, deciding to end Matt's idiocy and the small talk. "I think that'll be the last of everyone. Let's go." he said, before opening the gate for everyone to step out of. Before Dana could even get a response from Asae, Henry decided to keep things moving, and started this trip. It was a problem since Theresa hadn't shown up yet, but maybe she isn't interested in it anymore. Dana sighed. That meant she would have to roll around this jungle herself. Or... "Um, Asae?" She turned towards Asae, "Would you mind pushing me? I... I just need a little help sometimes." Asae nodded and laughed a bit "Would you mind holding the box as a trade? It's not to heavy, but it's an inconvience at times" she held out the sheath towards Dana, before getting behind her and gently pushing her towards Henry and out into the forest. Dana nodded and grabbed the box, and proceeded to rest it on her lap... She briefly wondered what the hell she had in there, but as long as it wasn't anything weird (A bomb, a gun, a small child) everything would be fine!

Once everyone was through, Henry shut the gates behind them, making sure they were properly shut and all. "Everyone please stay relatively close to me. There is wildlife out there, and I think it'd be best if you didn't tangle with them without me being there." Henry said, taking a few steps in front of the group and leading the charge. "Follow." he said, starting the march.

Matthew Evans, Amanda Blackmore, & Nikki Biyung

Unbenoust to everyone, Matt had stepped off into the woods by now, and was waiting for the group to move out of sight. Once they were out of sight, he stood up. "Finally, those fuckers were boring as hell." he said, taking a moment to look around for the bugs Nikki had told him to look for near the entrance of the gate. Something about following it to find them. He kinda wished that Nikki wasnt there, just so that way he could score, but oh well. He probably wouldn't be able to find Amanda without Nikki. At least he was getting to hang out with her, even if Nikki was there. Neither were bad company. Despite what many might think Matt did actually like Amanda in more than just a physical way, which surprised even him.

The insects around Matt started acting strange, if he was oh ever so aware of his surroundings. They suddenly went quiet, and many gathered on the trees around him. They all chirped, buzzed, and hissed, in such a way that it mimickied speech, "Oh, you made it?" They all said in perfect unison... It would freak anyone else out. "We're coming out now..." With that, the bugs went right back to normal. The cousins appeared. Nikki dropped down from a tree, not too far away from Matt... "Ow!" She exclaimed, it hurt the hell out of her legs. Okay, maybe doing that wasn't the best idea, but she had to admit that it was pretty cool.

Amanda on the other hand, was behind a tree that obscured her from Matt's line-of-sight. She had a cigarette in hand, and was taking puffs out of it. Her hair was down, the band she had in it was removed. "Well, well, well..." She took a step from behind the tree, and started walking towards Matt. "Looks like you've showed up, boyfriend." She spoke with a grin, as she redid her ponytail. "Indeed I have, girlfriend." He said, wrapping his arm around her waist and kissing her cheek, before letting her go as Nikki was watching. "Where to?"
Wolff's law is in reference to healing, and why our bones simply don't just remain shattered. My arm is an example of that when I broke it several years ago. However when taken into your context, I went to NCBI (Which is a real source, not Wikipedia) for my rebuttal to your argument.

A real source.

Wolff's law explains how at the breaking site, it would be slightly stronger. In order for your entire bone to become stronger, you'd have to break it in area. Then doing that on the entire skeleton? Don't even try. That, and breaking your bones leads to other health problems later on down the road. So if you want your character to be a little old lady at the age of seventeen, be my guest.

Drawing comparison to other people's powers shows your are desperate to be ratified in some odd way. Your argument is incredibly flawed and in essence, limits your character in far more ways than it benefits you. If you want to keep your stronger bones I'm also going to have to ask you to edit your character to have all of these health problems:

Osteogenesis Imperfecta
If it's a proven fact, I'd like to see a source. Because I find it hard to believe you can train your bones to do anything other than provide the framework for your body.
Schradinger said
Traceur's jump from two-story heights all the time and land fine, and they don't have the advantage of healing abilities and energy buffs. With those added, a three story jump (which would actually be closer to 25 feet unless the building has 12 foot ceilings), isn't beyond the realm of possibility without taking debilitating damage. Her coordination is also enhanced, since her brain is getting more energy with which to work faster and better, so while she would definitely not have been able to pull it off without first absorbing the electricity from the outlet, she's around the level of Captain America right now with that energy in her system.


These people are usually 20+ with years upon years of experience and training to do just that. If you think they land just fine then again, you are very sorely mistaken. Many of these elitists injure their knees, hands, feet, ankles, etc. The very most common injury being completely chafing the skin off of your palms and heels. Your character is capable to absorbing energy, but you are not excused from the other laws of physics. Every action has an equal and opposite reaction. If you want to go through this argument with me I can go into intricate detail on why her spine would be mush from falling that high.

I'm giving you the option to not go down that road. Fix the post to have her absorb almost all of the energy from the fall and I'll turn my cheek. If you want to argue with it I'd be happy to obligate and you will most likely regret it.

Your options are laid out. Think, it's not illegal yet.
I apologize for that, I try to be the nice mod, but sometimes outside frustrations leek into my responses. I'm sorry for being harsh.
Schradinger said
Parkour training combined with the mild physical boost of her absorbed energy and redirection of downward momentum into a forward roll. That and the grass. If it was concrete, it would have been a different story.EDIT: Just to be clear, the redirection of momentum wasn't a use of her power, just good parkour technique.


No, you're falling three fucking stories. I am sure you've never jumped three stories ever in your life (I'm also fairly sure you've never done parkour either if you even remotely think that's possible), and I'm also very sure that if you did, the last thing going through your mind would be your own ass. I've fallen a maximum of fifteen feet when I did it, and you know what happened? I performed the roll perfectly, but you still need to LAND. I sprained my left ankle and very nearly broke my foot. And I landed on grass. Mild physical boost or not she wont be coming back from a thirty foot fall without huge amounts of internal damage, if she even survives. Not even someone like Henry could do that without potentially hurting himself.

She would have to absorb just about 75% if not more of the energy in order to not die. Do not do this 'good parkour technique' with me. I know it is. I've done it. That doesnt mean it makes you Superman. And superman at seventeen? I am very doubtful that your character would be able to be a 'master of parkour' at that age. Your post reeks of bullshit. Do not do this with me. Because this is basic logic and physics. I'm fine with her falling, but falling that distance and trying to pull that crap isn't going to fly well with me. The only way you could make it even seem realistic would be is she absorbed most of the energy. Not a little, A LOT.

Fix it.
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