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Wonderful OOC. I am working on a noble woman character from Melfic. A follower of Kartoll, she is quite proficient in Water weaving and Healing.
Bumping this to let people know that the RP hasn't started and I am looking for more players. Head over to the OOC.
@Joos Will do, captain.

Glad to see that this is still going!


Better believe it! :) We need more people though.
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@babbysama as Tai Enle



@Joos as General Akura Geerathan

Name: General Akura Geerathan
Age: 45
Gender: Male

Physical description: For a man of his age, Akura is a fit man. Age has been creeping up on him though, evidenced by a slight widening around the hips and a silvering of his hair. He still is a man in his prime, with wide shoulders and a towering frame. Unlike the other generals, he refuses to grow a beard - preferring a thin, curled moustache after the fashion of the Emperor. Among the younger lot, it is all the rage.

Background: The best thing that can be said about Akura is that he is loyal. He is loyal to his Emperor. He is loyal to men he considers his superiors. He is loyal to his dead father whose dying wish he is still carrying out.

Akura comes from a family of faithful soldiers to His Divine Majesty. His great-grandfather had fought alongside Emperor Kumoto himself during the siege of Al Eban deep in Tarrmen lands. He had been raised to nobility for his valour that day. Since those days, the Geerathan Family has grown in strength and stature. Akura's father, Okanori Geerathan, had earned his salt by quelling the Sanghuk Rebellion fifty years ago - the last big dissension against the Emperor, may he live for eternity.

And when his father lay dying on his massive bed in the family mansion, the great general had looked at his only son with eyes brimming with sadness, and said "I wish you were not such a disappointment."

Akura had always had things easy in his life. By very nature of his blood, he was accepted into the Imperial Academy. He was not surprised to find out that, despite his poor performance and his constant flouting of authority, he was passed with flying colors. His first posting was one most Academy graduates would die for - in the scenic Balenian prefecture of Wardin. The Balenians had taken to Imperial culture quicker than the headstrong Tarrmen and almost never rebelled. The few independent principalities were quite content to pay tribute to the Emperor with their tails firmly tucked. Akura spent four glorious years inspecting his soldiers, filing reports, carousing with thick bodied Balenian girls, hunting bears and fathering two bastards.

From there, he was transferred to the coastal Gungyang prefecture deep in the heart of the Empire. It was here he met his future wife Rumiki. The Lady Rumiki Mori came from a very ancient and proud Family with numerous marriage ties to the Emperor. There were at least three Moris who were governors, and many more prefects. The hands of fate and the machinations of his father brought them together. It was supposed to be a political marriage, meant to strengthen the Geerathan legitimacy. But Akura was smitten. No lady had ever deigned to lie with him and he had only known the uncouth barmaids and peasant girls. But Rumiki was a student of the arts of seduction and lovemaking. She studied the Jendai Book of Love religiously and constantly tried her tricks on Akura, binding him to her like a puppy on a leash.

His father's health progressively declined in the following years, and the old man used all his influence to get Akura promoted to Captain. But the Geerathan name only went so far. His father had always wanted to see the golden stars of a general pinned on his son's shoulders. And the dying man knew he was never going to live long enough to see it, if it ever happened.

With the passing of the great general, the Family name steadily lost value. Akura was just a captain in a minor province. He was content to remain so, but not Rumiki. She wanted to be the wife of a general. She got them posted to the restive prefecture of Al Kudan. Akura initially baulked at the posting, but she convinced him that a year's service in Al Kudan would earn him bigger repute than serving ten years in Wardin. Akura earned his first battle scar in Al Kudan when ambushed by separatists in the narrow streets.

Yet, somehow, he had survived. Perhaps it was his wife's constant chiding; perhaps it was the ghost of his dead father echoing his dying words; or perhaps Akura did have hitherto undiscovered martial skills. But he survived three gruelling years in the scorching heat and the constant hatred. He returned to Candorin assured of his golden stars.

But he hadn't counted on the Tongun. The Tongun is the High Commander of the army - a man who acts as the Emperor's right hand. The current Tongun was Lord Goran Ishiwara - a ruthless man who jealously guarded his position and who actively pursued power. Lord Goran had no patience for men like Akura - borderline soldiers who were just lucky to have been born in a noble family. He flatly declined to entertain any notions of promotion. Akura assumed he had reached the limit of his career.

But Rumiki would not give up so easily. No one was sure quite how she did it. Many whispered within Akura's earshot that she had performed the Jendai arts on Tongun Ishiwara. Akura refused to believe his loving wife would betray his trust like that. He assumed she had used her family's connections to get the Tongun to agree. In the end, Akura joined his illustrious ancestors in becoming the fourth general in the Geerathan family.

But whatever influences his wife may have exerted over the Tongun, it ended with the promotion. Almost as if in vengeance, the Tongun had him posted to Kuma. Rumiki was shattered, of course. She couldn't bear moving a thousand leagues across seas to some flea-ridden jungle. She offered to manage the family estates while he was off earning honour as she put it. Akura had no illusions about the posting. The Crisis was two years old now and already there were murmurs of it being a lost cause. All those involved in the crisis would be quickly renounced in that scenario lest failure be laid at the Emperor's feet. Even the Tongun might be asked to fall on his sword. Akura did not fancy his chances. And yet...

And yet, should he be successful in turning the tide, should he manage to snatch even a tiny semblance of victory, anything to save his and the Emperor's face, he would be rewarded beyond his wildest dreams. He could even be granted a prefecture or, he dared not hope, a governorship. But all that depended on how he performed in these thick forests. Or how he seemed to perform.

Strengths:
- Akura is a bootlicker, pure and simple. That is an advantage in certain political scenarios.
- Akura, despite his less-than-stellar reputation, commands the respect of his soldiers by being nice to them. He is more forgiving than most when it comes to discipline.
- Akura is a military theoretician. He understands the science of warfare better than the actual fighting of it. This does help in the planning stages.
- Akura is a decent cavalryman.

Weaknesses:
- He is very trusting, sometimes at the expense of people's real failings.
- He is quite a liability when it comes to actual fighting. He prefers to hang back and delegate.
- He can be quickly intimidated by show of authority.
- He considers himself quite the ladies man. In reality, he is easily beguiled by sensual charms.
- He drinks quite heavily at times.
@Sypherkhode822 - I'm afraid you'll have to make huge changes to your character beyond just terminology. Firstly, the Imperial culture is rather patriarchal. They may accept the occasional queen or dowager empress, but they won't stand for women in the army. I am sorry if that wasn't apparent from my OOC. The tribals, on the other hand, will gladly let women fight if they have to. So you might want to become a tribal if you want to play a combat-oriented female character.

Second - it is quite quite difficult for a potential magic user to stay undiscovered in the Empire for as long as Kat has. The Sendars have regular recruiting parties and it will be an exceptionally rare occurrence to miss one. Again, if you want to be a magic user unbound by the purity vows, go tribal.

And I also find one of your strengths and one of your weaknesses to be paradoxical. She has no conscience and can be ruthless. That is her strength. And yet she has a conscience and can be guilt-ridden. Her weakness. You might want to take a look at that.
Updates on this?


I thoroughly enjoyed your character. It almost makes the Strengths & Weaknesses section redundant as you have painted quite a clear picture. You are accepted, but I encourage you to at least summarise in bullet points under the missing two sections for quick reference.

And I think top-knots for male Sendars can be made official.

I hope there are others who want to apply as well. In the meantime, I will put up my primary character.
@babbysama - So glad that you like it so far. I like both your character ideas. I shall wait and see how you interpret this world and how your characters turn out.
Some notes on the setting

As you may have guessed, the Empire has a distinctive east asian flavor. This should guide you in any names you might want to come up with. The setting of the Empire is largely like medieval China or feudal Japan - with similar advancements in science and technology. Water wheels and mills have long been in operation. Gunpowder is used in cannons, though no handheld firearms have been invented.

The tribes, on the other hand, have a very obvious American flavor. They are an amalgamation of the republics of the native americans, the religious beliefs of the Mayans, and the pride of the Incans. Their names tend to be shorter, with more natural sounds. Since they live in the forest, they do not have access to a lot of metal. As such, their weapons are largely wood and stone. They are extremely proficient in the use of bows and spears.

Throughout the Empire, it is punishable by death to speak the name of the Emperor. And when anyone refers to the Emperor, they always follow it with "May he live for eternity." They address him as "Your Divine Majesty". People call nobles as lords and ladies. This includes governors and prefects. The Sendars are called Holy Ones or Teachers and addressed as "Your Excellency".
Wonderful.

The OOC is up.
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