You don't really see those unless you're handling biological research, so definitely not if you're character's a meteorologist.
Coincidentally, my old character Milloon Hall in the original DA was a virologist. And managed to go blob free for a bit, until he started to transform the hard way (via intense explosions and security measures).
So anyway, that's still kinda burden to bear. Being the founding member means that even if he was potentially thrown in a coup/stepped down from power, he would still at least have a few supporters.
I'm sorry, but I'm afraid I'll have to reject the app. I mean, if the Black Knights grow to the size I perceive them to (as in, enough to put them on the US map), then I'll have to say that's pretty 'OP,' because your character holds a bit of influence over it. His appearance implies he's still a part of it as well.
Speaking of OP, my decision can be superseded by Lugia. You can speak to him in case you don't agree to this; heck, I'm telling you this because I kinda want the group to come to fruition, but just can't see a proper future at the moment.
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Thing is, there would be many, many vigilante groups formed after the event. I would suggest saying the Black Knights are in fact a combination of most of these groups, rather than somehow trumping every other vigilante group. It could however be that it trumps or combines with most of the other groups in West Metropolis, but even then you would have to deal with other groups developing in West Metropolis itself.
Plus, if you character's the founder and leader, how would he interact freely with other characters? Your character's position in hierarchy would limit him to being in a building for his own safety, planning with others to make coordinated attacks on bandits and such. (Assuming it becomes all-mighty and powerful. If it doesn't, then it brings the issue of... joining other groups of characters with a whole bunch of vigilantes under your watch.)
Another problem I found is that your biography doesn't seem to acknowledge the destruction of the planetoid, instead just skipping ahead with transformation when your character decides to die in his favoured place. Like... there no real difference in time, between the planetoid being destroyed and the mist appearing, which was presumably next morning.
(I used the word 'presumably' because I don't remember the plot very well.)
Plus, if you character's the founder and leader, how would he interact freely with other characters? Your character's position in hierarchy would limit him to being in a building for his own safety, planning with others to make coordinated attacks on bandits and such. (Assuming it becomes all-mighty and powerful. If it doesn't, then it brings the issue of... joining other groups of characters with a whole bunch of vigilantes under your watch.)
Another problem I found is that your biography doesn't seem to acknowledge the destruction of the planetoid, instead just skipping ahead with transformation when your character decides to die in his favoured place. Like... there no real difference in time, between the planetoid being destroyed and the mist appearing, which was presumably next morning.
(I used the word 'presumably' because I don't remember the plot very well.)
We don't mind. First to third, or even the fourth is fine (fourth being 'breaking the fourth wall,' although don't spam this).
Wait, do they seriously pick on this in other RPs in RP Guild?
Wait, do they seriously pick on this in other RPs in RP Guild?
Well, you're gonna have to do some editing then.
Need to add this for all Ponymon Pokemon fanatics: "No, you may not LOOK like a Pokemon. Unless in special cases."
...I need to retcon this quote with Luigi Lugia.
No, no, n-no-
...I need to retcon this quote with Luigi Lugia.
No, no, n-no-
EXAMS OVER
REJOICE MY SLAVES
REJOICE MY SLAVES
I was talking about the 'Canadian' in (French) Canadian.
Ah, screw that. It's already too confusing for me. It's evident from me not understanding this for a while:
Addendum 2: Special Emergency Order As misidentification of her species tends to violently agitate SCP-953, all personnel are to be hereby ordered to refer to her as a "Kumiho," and not a "Kitsune." Personnel asking what the difference is are to be reminded of the difference between a Cherokee Indian and a New Delhi Indian. - O5-██
(Phew. Fixed the quote.)
Ah, screw that. It's already too confusing for me. It's evident from me not understanding this for a while:
Addendum 2: Special Emergency Order As misidentification of her species tends to violently agitate SCP-953, all personnel are to be hereby ordered to refer to her as a "Kumiho," and not a "Kitsune." Personnel asking what the difference is are to be reminded of the difference between a Cherokee Indian and a New Delhi Indian. - O5-██
(Phew. Fixed the quote.)
Not you. I'm talking about fawcettp and myself.
Although, now you can get closer with Evanist.
Although, now you can get closer with Evanist.
Nom.
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You Americans and your damn imperial systems in yer appearances. FOR GOD'S SAKE, USE METRIC TO HELP OUT THE AUSSIE AND KIWI.
noooo
i havent even brought over my app yet
Anyway... I'm not sure whether or not to accept Ridlin's app, 'cause the biography seems rather short.
Because I won't be here for an hour after this hour, I'm just gonna go with accepted.
i havent even brought over my app yet
Anyway... I'm not sure whether or not to accept Ridlin's app, 'cause the biography seems rather short.
Because I won't be here for an hour after this hour, I'm just gonna go with accepted.
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