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I'm waiting!
I did, but it's kinda incomplete, I'm not exactly sure how should I finish it? Maybe him waking up Dreamtime LTD.?
Another dream... Raphael wasn't even sure whatever it's stress or the drugs, or both. But he was never able to dream lucidly, and for him to get those dreams now. It did not make any sense. Either way, he was rather intrigued, especially with the other people standing before him. They looked real, but then again, so did everything else. "So, you're a part of my dream too? Care to introduce yourselves. Heck, I should know who you are, I am the one dreaming after all." His musings were only met with a confused look. "Look, whatever. This is my dream, and if she can jump that high, so can I. If you have any sort of purpose in the dream, I will find you again anyway." By now, Raphael has started to enjoy those dreams. They were nothing like his drug induced trips in the past, which were quite surreal to begin with. This was fun, and his mind wasn't all cloudy. Of course, nothing made any sense, but it's just a dream, right? So he decided to just enjoy himself. Who knows, maybe this will include the quality of his sleep. And boy will he need all the energy he has in the upcoming tour in a week.
And so, he took a few steps back and started running towards the wall, jumping with all his strength, launching himself over the wall. At that moment of flight, Raphael considered taking up sky diving. On the other side of the wall however, was....
And so, he took a few steps back and started running towards the wall, jumping with all his strength, launching himself over the wall. At that moment of flight, Raphael considered taking up sky diving. On the other side of the wall however, was....
So... Character sheets have their own page? Interesting, though it would be pretty good to have them linked to the RP itself.
A)Your formatting is horribly broken. Get that checked.
B)Should I copy my CS myself or will you do it?
B)Should I copy my CS myself or will you do it?
Tentative example and some questions:
Organization Name: Dawn
Profession: (Uhh, organizations have professions?)
Affiliation:(as in ties with someone else?)
Leader(s): Grace
Persons of Importance: Izanami, Izanagi, Ember, Eva
Military and Civilian Assets: Hi-tech military equipment, eclipsing some nations. As a secret organization, they have very few soldiers and scientists, but only the very best are being recruited.
Brief History: Formed by the one of the richest industrialists in the world, Grace predicted the strife that will engulf the war once Etherium supplies will become strained. Recruiting the best people of every field, she formed Dawn as a neutral power to completely understand Etherium, find a replacement for it or synthesize it, and manipulate nations from the shadows, and if need be, spill some blood to prevent potential wars.
A few other questions/notes:
1.Etherium enables magic, right? If so, so is it like a focus you cast magic through? Does it have to be touched or consumed to unlock magic?
2.Do you want every nation to be player-made? While it does sound quite nice, not having a preset political situation will make the story hard to make and follow.
3.Do you have a clear direction this RP will go? As for now, it feels like there is none. While player-made nations and organizations are nice, (the latter I approve of), this RP currently feels kinda.... empty... without that "hook" that really catches peoples attention.
Organization Name: Dawn
Profession: (Uhh, organizations have professions?)
Affiliation:(as in ties with someone else?)
Leader(s): Grace
Persons of Importance: Izanami, Izanagi, Ember, Eva
Military and Civilian Assets: Hi-tech military equipment, eclipsing some nations. As a secret organization, they have very few soldiers and scientists, but only the very best are being recruited.
Brief History: Formed by the one of the richest industrialists in the world, Grace predicted the strife that will engulf the war once Etherium supplies will become strained. Recruiting the best people of every field, she formed Dawn as a neutral power to completely understand Etherium, find a replacement for it or synthesize it, and manipulate nations from the shadows, and if need be, spill some blood to prevent potential wars.
A few other questions/notes:
1.Etherium enables magic, right? If so, so is it like a focus you cast magic through? Does it have to be touched or consumed to unlock magic?
2.Do you want every nation to be player-made? While it does sound quite nice, not having a preset political situation will make the story hard to make and follow.
3.Do you have a clear direction this RP will go? As for now, it feels like there is none. While player-made nations and organizations are nice, (the latter I approve of), this RP currently feels kinda.... empty... without that "hook" that really catches peoples attention.
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