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Naruto: Of Compassion and Tyranny

I apologize if my quoting you, Savato, has given you (or anyone else) the feeling that I simply want to disagree with you. But I do not, only to provide enlightenment and understanding to an idea I seem to have misinterpreted that you had. My apologies. Oh and I wasn't directing anything at Savato personally, I only needed his quote so that the readers knew whom I was talking to, hopefully, in order to refuse confusion which I seem to have added to. My apologies, I'll try not to give any further insight till the actual rp begins.

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Savato said
It may have been a widespread belief in the roleplays in order to limit the powers of some people and prevent them from gaining too much. It could also be that Kurama hated the Uchiha due to Madara's manipulation technique as well as Obito's, making people think it would be the same for every other KG.

Ummmm no. People with KG could become Jinchuuriki in the same manner a person without KG could become one. KG has nothing to do with a chakra monster being sealed within someone. However some other factors come into play when selecting a Jinchuuriki, such as the person's family life and their attitude, except Naruto since he was a baby when it happened. KB, Gaara, are the ones we got to directly see and read about. They also are usually looked after by Kage too. CanonWise: The reason why a Uchiha wouldn't ever be selected as a Jinchuuriki, or even really considered, is the same reason why a Uchiha wouldn't be accepted as a Kage (Something people like to do in Rps lol). The Uchiha are looked at as blood thirsty greedy mongrels who kill each over in order to advance in power. The Second Hokage especially knows how it works. Revenge and what not. Destined for Darkness. People wouldn't be able to sleep at night worrying whether or not their country would be attacked in the dead of night and overran with crimson eyed assassins with more battle experience than you can imagine. Natural gifts that give them a large advantage in a fight. Countries would wage war if an Uchiha became a Kage or a Jinchuuriki.

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I, honestly, still don't see what the problem was but I'm perfectly fine having Akira run into one less empire lackey in the rp. Especially if they tried to give me a headache before Akira was even accepted. ._. I'll be on the chat, if I'm needed, just ask for Lawless.

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Okay, so I took out Akira having a large chakra reserve >.> And him being able to use (Swordsmanship) and have a sword (Katana) V.V

As for the bit regarding chakra consumption in order to produce battle ready offspring, I have concluded that it makes sense for Akira to fill the queen to the brim with chakra to produce 60 eggs. The amount of chakra in the best form of measurement I can think of that you can relate to is based on the rank of normal jutsu. This technique would require the amount of chakra one might deem suitable for that of a C ranked jutsu.

And AeronFarron, I begin to wonder if it is you that hasn't read my profile.
For the most part, they share a hive mind with the queen which as I've stated Akira has a connection with. I don't truly feel the need to explain the connection to you. Not to mention, it is Akira who can directly influence the actions of even Red Chimeran Hornets you summon due to his connection to the Queen. ._. So summoning them while fighting him wouldn't be particularly useful and would turn against you. I don't quite feel obliged to answer your other questions because I'm unsure if you're attempting to be sarcastic, but I am quite comfortable keeping them as hornets. I prefer them as this, and will not change them simply for your pleasure. You have all hornets at your command, except these Red Chimeran Hornets which I've created. I don't see how this should affect your character in any negative manner unless of course she so attempts to 'use' them against Akira.

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AeronFarron said
Pheromones are incredibly important to hornets as a species. Natural hornets donr speak and really communicate with motions or verbal cues. They communicate via pheromones. So if my character can simulate and manipulate the very thing all hornets use as communication, that is a lot more control than you think. She can easily simulate a "friendly" pheromone, which given the aggressive nature of the hornets you've created would be incredibly powerful. Aggression in insects and animals (humans included) typically means that they don't have cognitive responses, they don't stop and analyze, they follow their basic nature. Couple a horde mindset (which they seem to have) with a base nature, add in extreme aggression, amd the fact that they are not summons: they probably identify friend or foe as well as attack commands by pheromones.Now, I'll forgive you not reading my temp before you formulated your response. Had you done so, you'd have seen that the largest species of hornets (that I've made and was accepted) for Hornet summons had chosen to become her signature summons and to basically raise her. Her kekkei genkai evolved, over time, to allow her to understand them in their natural form of communication, as they lack the type of mouth that allows them to speak as a human does. Since the hornets communicated just as natural hornets do, she can understand them via pheromones, flight patterns, as well as behaviors and the seasons. Her summon is not restricted to one species, but all hornets. Now, when I made this, I wasn't expecting anyone else to choose to control hornets(what a coincidence), so I made the summon a blanket summon (much like most summons) So yes, she can summon your hornets.

You my friend are jumping to conclusions. I read your character's abilities, as well as the pheromone bit after you initially responded. I'm not asking you how natural hornets act or move, Red Chimeran Hornets are a creation of my own. Hardly natural. They move based on Akira's directions, not pheromones. I dunno if you read any of my attacks revolving around the Red Chimeran Hornets, but pheromones weren't stated to be a factor at all. To say your character understands a hypothetical hornets based on a trait I never stated they used is simply ludicrous. So unless you can simply read the mind of these hornets, then no, you can't understand them nor control them.

"Summoning contracts do not give one control over the thing summoned at all, usually it is an understanding between the summoner and the thing summoned. Not to mention it doesn't give one control over something that someone else summoned, even if it is the same species."
As I said before, it makes my hornets no difference if you summon your own, simply because you want to show that you. You will not be directing any of the Red Chimeran Hornets that Akira has, births, or controls. Good day. I have things to be editing. If you so choose to respond immediately I'll get back to you either in PMs or here if the GMs allow it. I'd rather not continue bickering about a simple issue regarding Hornets that I created that you want to stress the possibility of you controlling.

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SoleAccord said
I'm not going to debate with you the measure of a canon characters abilities at 17 with your OC, I'm asking you to erase some 'skills' you've created because you have a lot for the age group you're in. I misinterpreted the strength bit. You simply have too much going for your character, and we're asking you nicely to remove some things to help balance him out. I'm asking you how much chakra it would take to spur the queen, with your limit already there on how many she can create at a time. And you seem pretty dead set on arguing this, so me and Pierce decided that removing Swordsmanship and Large Chakra Reserve are more than fair considering your wide range of skills. Can you at least compromise there ...because if not I guess we've got a problem.

You were the one that brought up both Kakashi and Itachi. I wasn't trying to debate you, but you are most certainly wrong about each of them not having that many or more perks. Most certainly. Otherwise you just generally didn't watch the show, which would make your argument understandable. It seems to me that you are more so dead set on limiting my character unreasonably. Large chakra reserve is a bit much but to restrict my character from wielding a sword? What? That makes little to no sense. My character would strictly become a hornet using Shino which is not what my character is. Oh and my character doesn't have a wide range of skills. Earth Release, Carnivorous hornets, and wielding a sword. ._. And you're trying to restrict me from doing that. Makes no sense. You say I have a lot for my age group, yet you didn't suggest changing my age at all. *sighs* And this other guy thinks they are going to just up and control my hornets simply cause she can summon her own. ._. Friggin just posted my CS.

But we won't have any problems. Ugh, Just gotta edit. I'll see if I can think of a way to explain how much chakra is used more thoroughly in some sort of measurement system.

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SoleAccord said
Please tell us how much chakra the queen demands to mass produce that fast, the pros outweigh the cons but I just want to know how much it takes to make this technique happen. As far as skills go, you have way too much. Not even Itachi or Kakashi could have all those perks and they were geniuses in their own right. Going to ask you to remove at least a couple of those, perhaps the 'master strategist' bit and maybe the 'physically more powerful than appears' bit. People like filling in a lot of holes in their characters arsenal, but I ask that you not make your character a master of just about everything at 17 years old. No matter how hard he was beaten, you can't excel in every category.

Itachi and Kakashi would easily have far more perks. Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu, Kenjutsu, Excellent accuracy, Stealth. That is just to name a few. Both were extremely skilled in almost all forms of combat, period. Being 'physically more power than one appears to be' is not the equivalent of being super humanly strong, it simply means you look weaker than you are which is a matter of general perception and labeling. Oh and he was only a master at strategy, but you want me to change that. O.o The amount of chakra the queen requires is proportionate to how many eggs she births. If you're looking for me to say it takes a tremendous amount of chakra, I won't. Wouldn't make much sense if I did. I've edited the 'master strategist' part to be 'exceptional strategist' if it makes you more comfortable.

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AeronFarron said
Not wanting to step on your toes, but just giving you a heads up: My character can understand hornets and has a summon contract with hornets.

Actually AeronFarron, your character's ability to understand hornets makes no difference. Understanding them means nothing, nor does your summoning contract with said hornets. As long as you're not summoning Red Chimeran Hornets, we should be on the same page. Summoning contracts do not give one control over the thing summoned at all, usually it is an understanding between the summoner and the thing summoned. Not to mention it doesn't give one control over something that someone else summoned, even if it is the same species. Ex. Aoda & Sasuke and Gamakichi & Jiraiya. Compare and contrast to Sasuke & Manda. And simulating their pheremones doesn't give you any level of control over them. FYI.

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Name: Akira Gengai
Title: Akira of The Red Mist
Age: 17
Gender:
Male
Appearance:

Image & stuff

Akira

Personality:
Like any other child, Akira was born nice, sweet and lazy, but that has been beat out of him at a young age. He was taught the harshness of the world firsthand through various forms of mental conditioning. He has been conditioned by his clansmen to be intelligent, powerful and trustworthy. Taught to think of the well-being of others as having equivalent value to his own. Taught that in order to succeed he would require the full cooperation from others and give his own. Akira however is a rebel at heart and doesn't give two shits about what traits his clansmen think best he had. He chooses to believe what he wants to believe and thus second guesses himself much more often than anyone else does. He finds comfort in those that look down on him, believing that one day they'll realize how awfully wrong they were and wish to apologize.

Those who have high standards of Akira make him sick to his stomach as he thinks that they are attempting to pressure him into something they think he normally wouldn't do. He hates to think that he is being manipulated or used only as a tool. It is for this reason that he takes enjoyment in saying as few words as possible, believing that the less information a person has, the less likely he can be manipulated. Akira however is not your average Joe, he has been hardened for war. He is cold, relentless and unmerciful to all who dare bare their fangs at him. As a child introduced to violence, Akira doesn't mind killing someone who has done him or another wrong. While he might publicly deny it, it is the first thing that comes to his mind when he feels one should be punished.

Akira typically hides how he truly feels about something or someone and only speaks up when he foresees a problem in the near future. He has more of a black & white attitude towards people and only few things fall into the area described only as being 'gray'. He prefers to battle quickly and make moves in constant succession in order to force opponents to move faster. This high speed game of chess forces opponents to move or wait as he makes his own. He believes that by moving faster it increases he chance of error. He also enjoys taunting and talking down to his enemies in order to get them to make their 'move' faster.

Recent History:
Akira is a member of the Gengai, a side branch of the Kagewari clan which is a sister clan to the once famed Kamizuru clan. The Gengai have been long since been outlawed by the Kagewari after a failed attempt to forcefully reunite the Kagewari and Kamizuru despite clan differences and public opinion. Every member who participated or voiced an opinion with this motion in favor were called Uragirimono and were exiled from the village. This is known as the First Swarm to both Iwagakure and the Kamizuru clan.

The uragirimono later calling themselves the Gengai still had powerful ties to the village, and used these ties to bring about peace through destruction. Fearing that an attack on the village would jeapordize the lives of all the clans, rogue members of the Gengai surrendered to the village using information as leverage to secure their safety. The Gengai easily crippled the opposition using its resources and led an unsuccessful siege on the village. The village's opposition was utterly obliterated and the only remaining Gengai were those that had back-stabbed their brethren.

While the Tsuchikage agreed to pardon their crimes the Gengai were still looked at as the black sheep of the village, especially by the Kamizuru and Kagewari who disowned them. This however was until the Kamizuru's defeat by the Aburame after attempting to claim Konoha and most of its members were lost. The Gengai acted as a means to replenish the village's lost military force and later established itself as a re-owned clan of its own.

Specializing in militarizing insects(particularly hornets and bees) similar to the Aburame, the Gengai made a name for itself when Akira was born. While his skills as a ninja weren't the most impressive among his peers, Akira takes the spot light from his kin due to his ability to host the red chimeran hornets. A dangerous parasitic insect by nature that ravages the body of most organisms it is allowed to infest. Known as the red mist to many other countries, the red chimeran hornets are native to Iwagakure as dangerous pests that devour all who cross them.

The only other ninja said to have successfully hosted the cruel insects was the First Tsuchikage. Akira however is in no way regarded by the clan as a curse as a jinchuuriki is regarded by their village. Instead the clan looks at him as a Messiah, as does the Kagewari and Kamizuru clans. Someone who will save them from their past failures and bring the clans out of obscurity. In order to ensure his success as a ninja all the clan members came together in order to vote upon how Akira's future would unfold.

Allegiance: Rebels

Chakra Nature: Earth

Rank: Chuunin

Jutsu:

Crimson Chimera Swarm: Honeysuckle
Akira directs the Red Chimeran Hornets to spit at the target, Their extra thick saliva is highly toxic due to its high pH balance but is particulaly useful in quelling insect outbreaks, and fires. Their highly acidic saliva quickly breaks down organic and non organic material and thus prolonged contact with the saliva can lead to acid burns and eventual death if one remains covered in the acidic saliva for too long.

Crimson Chimera Swarm: Underground Land Trap
Akira directs the Red Chimeran Hornets to dig tunnels under the earth for approaching victims to fall within once the loose ground is stepped on. These particular tunnels can be quite fragile and collapse upon the hornets if even so much as even a small animal walks upon them.

Earth Release: Antlion Technique
Earth Release - Earth Spear
Earth Release - Rock Pillar Spears
Earth Release - Earth and Stone Bamboo Shoot

Crimson Chimera Swarm: Heat Seeker - Red chimeran hornets gather upon the foe and while stinging, the hornets vibrate their bodies to create large amounts of friction. This friction produces a ton of heat in order to kill the target by cooking them from inside their own skin. Occasionally some red chimeran hornets may explode due to their vulnerability to intense heat.

Earth Release: Termite Mound
After performing several hand-seals, by placing both hands on the ground Akira summons several mounds of earth surrounding the opponent(s). These mounds are entirely hollow but act as a means of safely transporting small lifeforms from one area to another easily. Large mounds can be created as well in order to camouflage the user during espionage missions.

Crimson Chimera Swarm: Mass Production Technique
By compensating the queen chimeran hornet with chakra, she mass produces eggs that skip the larvae stage and hatch directly into nymph chimera, ready for battle. The queen chimera can produce about sixty eggs per minute and the eggs take less than five minutes to hatch. These nymph hornets are underdeveloped and were not made to last and eventually drop dead in approximately 10 minutes after hatching.

Unlike their adult brethren, their bodies are soft and extremely flammable due to containing a protein mix similar to that of gun powder. The small nymphs possess six hairy legs and an abdomen that can spew water resistant webs of fine silk to ensnare prey. They possess mandibles that inject a powerful neurotoxin into their victims, and are considered great swimmers capable of swimming easily through powerful currents of water due to their relatively thin bodies.

Nymph hornets exit the body through Akira's pores and fully mature into adult hornets upon contact with the nitrogen and oxygen in the atmosphere. While they lose the neurotoxin contained in their mandibles, they trade it off for three pairs of strong wings and a dangerous stinger capable of inducing drowsiness and intense slumber. Their mandibles while no longer toxic are extremely powerful enough to tear and consume the flesh of an adult human as well as crush rock betwen them.

Adult chimeran hornets gain an additional four legs for a grand total of ten hairy legs which give them the flexibility, speed and appearance of being spiders when they land or are viewed properly scurrying across the ground or skin. Adult chimeran hornets possess extremely durable exoskeletons making them extremely resistant to physical injury enough that senbon won't harm them by shuriken and kunai will due to their weight. They are very capable diggers capable of unearthing hidden prey or digging making tunnel traps for larger would be predators to fall in.

Red chimeran hornets are particularly effective at dismembering other insects with their scythe like legs but usually do not in favor of implanting their parasitic offspring inside the prey. Chimeran larvae feast upon their host's blood, chakra and flesh in an attempt to quickly obtain the mass of their parents which makes them pretty voracious. Worm like in appearance, larvae can quickly quickly evolve into the nymph stage within just two days, and nymph who have successfully completed the larvae stage can produce up to ten eggs inside its victim before its imminent departure.

Skills:
Akira possesses the ability to communicate with insects of all kinds but can directly influence the actions of the Red Chimeran Hornets directly due to his connection to the queen red chimeran hornet. Exceptional strategist. Impressive pain tolerance. Adaptability. Photographic memory and vivid recollection. Espionage & Tracking. Recognizing and dispelling Genjutsu. He is more physically powerful than he looks. Excellent hunter and stealth expert.

Tools:
Not sure if I would list the Red Chimeran Hornets here or not, so I am. Red Chimeran Hornets, poison bombs, explosive tags, tripwire, kunai and shuriken

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