@Sage
Over the character Kisheto :
1.) He is extremely tanky in that he can take a lot of damage before he is knocked out or incapacitated. In other words, pain isn't a concern for him. He can take hard hits and scratch 'em off with sheer willpower.
My review : A genin that is tanky? I think that combined with the other traits its too much for a genin. They just came out of the Academy and with the other traits its too much for a genin. I prefer that its removed and only trained later.
2.) Traits and KG
Lots of chakra? That is a no from me. It's not a real definiton of how much chakra he has. I'm not eager to give somebody a big amount of chakra at the rank of genin. Even with poor chakra control, it is too powerful for that rank. The KG is also more or less a way to obtain chakra levels that look dangerously close to how a Jinchuriki gets a larger chakra reserve (with bonding the beast over time). So I say no against the KG. Though you have explained it well, I am not really seeing the need for a character to have such a load of chakra reserve. I want that to be toned down.
3.) Though clone techniques are allowed to everybody, they are dangerous. You cut down your chakra levels and clones are usually easy to defeat (to keep it not from a person spamming a whole army of strong characters in a fight). Even so far Jinchuriki's are careful of using shadow clones (as are high ranked characters) as the chakra gets cut down. Something you want to avoid in many battles, as the reserve of chakra can mean you can or can't do the technique that requires the amount of chakra. I would highly advise to take another road before you end up killing yourself. (Will happen if he will like say make a whole group of shadow clones and even attempt to that with poor chakra control)
That is my review for now.
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@Jinkai Yuko
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@Wukong
Accepted. I am however also for to imply that chuunins have a much slower learning rate than Genin. And main or not, I will be needed to say that if you freeze a team or such with your character, I'll be taken away your main. I don't want to sound hostile or negative, but each character should be of equal importance. In my opinion.
Hope that it makes a bit of sense. ^^;
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@Wukong
Accepted. I am however also for to imply that chuunins have a much slower learning rate than Genin. And main or not, I will be needed to say that if you freeze a team or such with your character, I'll be taken away your main. I don't want to sound hostile or negative, but each character should be of equal importance. In my opinion.
Hope that it makes a bit of sense. ^^;
Konoha ANBU Operative, Team 4
Yumi had donned on her ANBU gear. Everything except the mask. In fact, she had been assigned to a team, instead of needing to report herself. It felt a bit strange. For the past years she had been in the ANBU corps. It was really strange. But not unknown. She had been part of Team 2, under the leadership of a jounin-sensei. A totally different than the current one. A less capable if she would compare Kiyomi with Kanajiro. Once she had everything donned on, Yumi went outside.
Once she was in the streets, she thought about where the team meeting was. Due old habits, she had went straight to the Hokage Office. Only after several hundred meters, she changed her course and direction. Heading towards the meeting point, Yumi wondered about her team. She knew them already, but was only really a friend of Tsubasa Kokoro. The one that would lead the team from now on. Entering the place, Yumi looked around and soon noticed Tsubasa. Seemed that Ryo and Katsuko hadn't arrive yet. Walking towards Tsubasa, Yumi smiled. ''Reporting in, captain.'' Yumi told Tsubasa with an amused voice. Taking a seat, she frowned and looked around. ''I do have to say that I expected to be a bit late. But seems I am the first to arrive, eh?''
Hokage Assistant.
Rallying three ANBU.
The reports were ready. Three of them. After a quick inspection, Meisa was sure. Everything was done and ready. Hopefully the three ANBU would be soon ready for their mission. Each of them had a different one, but each was important for the Leaf and Fire Union. After all, they were all ranked as A ranked missions. Not really the kind of missions that were given to low ranked shinobi, as they were either too important or having too many risks. In other words, Meisa and Hisoka were counting on these three ANBU to be ready to succeed in the missions.
''Probably should let a messenger scramble them up.'' The woman mumbled to herself. In five minutes she had sent out the messengers. Suzuka Uzumaki, Harumi Uchiha and Sakamoto Senju. Each would be told or given a note that they should come as soon as possible towards the Hokage Office for their mission. Meanwhile, Meisa was preparing something else. While Hisoka should get himself ready, Meisa would also need a word with Zakito Hon, the Jounin commander. Sending a messenger to the man, who was actually Meisa's former senpai, the woman would head back to the Hokage Office. On her while, an amused thought came up in her mind. Because of that, a smile grew on her lips.
Team 8 Sensei
Aiko had heard somebody coming into the rather quiet dango shop and noticed Mamoru. Smiling a direction into his direction, he seemed to be excited. Apparently her being his sensei, even if it was unsure in the past was something that made him happy. He then spoke, to which she listened. ''" Aiko-sama! I am so glad you could remain my sensei ... I am super excited for our team to start training and doing missions and meet each other and ... excuse me, I am just ... excited."
He was clearly excited. No doubt about that. Aiko flashed a warm smile as she thought about what was the best to respond to that. Of course she was also very eager to see how the team would work together. Growing and sharing experience together. Hopefully Aiko wouldn't need to be harsh on them. Even while she could that without any problem, she would rather stay friendly. ''I'm glad that you're excited. Hopefully the others will soon arrive so that we can do a short introduction and then already head out. I got ourselves a mission, that we need to do as soon as possible.'' She told, already thinking it would likely get him more worked up. As she briefly looked at the door of the dango shop, like she was expecting another student, Aiko thought about something. They could easily do a kind of introduction while they would head on their mission. Multitasking with such things wouldn't be that hard. At least she hoped not. ''Want some tea? I am not sure how long we're going to wait.'' She asked Mamoru. Maybe they could drink tea together as introduction. That was actually an idea that was to her liking.
No problem. Now, go and have some fun in the IC. Hup hup. Fly little birds.~
@Nicias Askani
Accepted. To the char bin with your character.
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@MasterJay (Finally saw what you did with your name. Clever,)
Kumori Yotsuki accepted. To the char bin with him.
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Aaww, the databook. Happy memories of that.
Would everybody that needs a CS to be reviewed sent it to the GM's?
That would help a lot and speed up the reviewing.
Thans.
That would help a lot and speed up the reviewing.
Thans.
Little Alice said
That and think my reference might be a bit too clear (title of the flashback I made for Kiyomi) for some people. Even an idiot or worse might recognize my reference. x3(Not anybody that is new. It's something of the past. ;3 )
Little Alice said
an idiot or worse
I saw what you did there.
(Loved it.)
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