Little_ninja

Living in Aincrad: a SAO RP

Starting to get up, Umichi spoke, "Well, since we are waiting, I guess we are doing our own things, I am going to walk out for a moment." Looking over to Suki, he glanced at her, with a smile, indicating that he would be waiting. He noticed her equip a rapier and started to think about an idea. But his thoughts were interrupted hearing Yui suggest to do the quest Sasamaru's Daughter. "Um... not to ruin your fun, but that quest is a bit far from here. Unless you are willing to use a few crystals, it will take at least an hour and half to get to Horunka, due to the path you have to take being a bit winded. I mean, we've been here for a few hours already. It's already 1245. I wouldn't be surprised if Fujiwara woke up any moment now. If you want to go, I won't stop you, just recommending you to do it later, unless you use a few crystals. But they aren't exactly cheap crystals, you know. I hear they get more scarce in the later levels. Anyway, just letting you know, it will take you a while if you travel by foot. Okay, laters." he walked out waving.

Stepping outside, he went around the corner. He wasn't trying to stop Yui and Timi or anything, it was just that he wasn't sure if they knew how much time it would take just to travel, let alone possibly do the quest. Looking over the details of the message he got earlier about another quest from a friend, Umichi tried to figure out how long it would take. Probably about an hour and a half by foot as well. I mean, a few hours should be enough to get Fujiwara some rest and get up for a while before going to bed tonight. Well, if it takes too long for him to wake, then let's see what Suki says. I would probably say, that everyone was free to do as they needed for the day, and that the Labyrinth exploration would be tomorrow. Anyway, if Fujiwara wakes up late, he will probably go off on his own again. I guess I will need to keep an eye on him. Umichi decided to take some responsibility to oversee his teammate depending on the circumstances. He stood around the corner, waiting for Suki.

Living in Aincrad: a SAO RP

Yeah that's fine
In fact I didn't even need that much more lol
I just thought a sentence or two more would of been enough rather than a whole paragraph

Go ahead and chuck it into the CS bin
I've got a lecture now, so I won't be on for a while till I get home

Living in Aincrad: a SAO RP

It's fine if the personality changes, I mean, people change as life goes on, that's kind of what happens
So, the personality changing would be treated as a character development
It's just for a good idea of how they are right now. I am not asking for like a paragraph lol
Just a little more, because there's no clear personality there yet

Living in Aincrad: a SAO RP

Well, about the exp per monster kill... I don't know ... it would mean that someone high level will get the same exp regardless of killing high level monsters to low level monsters, meaning easy leveling by just killing low level monsters

Anyway, CS's look good, but, maybe expand the personality a little.
He has a somewhat cocky bravado, but what is he truly? Shy? Sneaky? Happy-go-lucky?
Doesn't have to be too much, just a little bit more.
This applies to both lightbox and hailfire
It's all good, just the personality is lacking on both. Not enough insight into the character.
All I get from hailfire is his competitive with his brother, but what else?

Edit:
At uni at the moment and no time to do a post in the IC, will do that when I get home

Final Fantasy VIII: Tempus Veneficarum [7/10 Slots]

What's this about Xerox genderbending?
How come I wasn't informed of this!?
NO!!!!
Someone is trying to take over my character T.T

Living in Aincrad: a SAO RP

Lol
One thing I would like to request .... change of IGN chukkle
Reason being is ... yet to have been posted, but it's a character Caits and myself have agreed upon to show up later
Actually they have appeared, but the name wasn't revealed yet ....
Well if you don't want to change it, I can always make a change

Anyway, if you don't mind character background clashes, then it looks fine
If you want you can change it

Looks pretty much fine to me
You do not need to have the explanation next to the night vision

Living in Aincrad: a SAO RP

Yeah, there's room, go ahead and read the guide book info here
If you need more help, feel free to ask myself or Caits.

those of silver cross academy (blue exorcist themed)

Um... Invariant

Ren went to the bathroom on the train
Not the motel room

Living in Aincrad: a SAO RP

I did say you can't be higher than level 10 at this stage
Anything between 1 and 10 is fine
Anyway, I didn't get to see your CS before or now
So please post it so either myself or Caits (preferably both, but both of us seem pretty lenient and quite accepting, and agree on most points so far) can accept it

Living in Aincrad: a SAO RP

That refers to passives, combat and non-combat skills
Sword skills are a subset of skills to your weapon skill that is equipped in a skill slot
So, you equip, for example, one-handed straight sword
That is one skill slot used
and you have one more for light armor expertise or whatever it is called
With the one-handed straight sword equipped, you can use the one-handed straight sword Sword Skills, such as <<Vertical>>, <<Horizontal>> and <<Serration Wave>>. As the skill gets higher (which can be rough leveling, no need to explain it going up levels, just be reasonable somehow) then you can use stronger sword skills.