Little_ninja

Harmonica - (Fantasy Based RP)

I know yours was directed at me sylver, it was just I wanted to give Gyrin a chance to post first, and then post after that. It felt like I would of ended up skipping him if I didn't.

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Well, I just meant bad if he tried to do that right now.
And yeah, looking back, a number of us were OP. My character is pretty OP. Complete mind control, changing memories, hell, anything to do with the mind, he could alter. He could make you think you are moving your left hand, and you suddenly move your right knee. (I'd like to dub this part of my ability, motor rewire)
Anyway, yeah, buff the ability to the max if you want.

SillyGoy said
Assuming none of you turn Williamson into paste, I would love to have him hunt you down or help you escape the country somehow.

MUHAHAHAHA. Even if you don't want to help us! You will!!! I will force your character into changing his mind with my abilities. Muhahahaha!
Just kidding.
But yeah, would love to see him help us. I think this could easily be accomplished using many different ways. Depends on how you want it to play out.
Simple way would be, my character either mind controls, or shows you memories to invoke sympathy.

I see your tweak to your character. Making doors .... by walking through the wall and creating a door? Lol
I don't quite understand that one.
Also, doesn't quite matter too much if your deflection is OP. I forgot how OP some of us are. The bracelets are gonna restrain you anyway.

Black Bullet : Altered Time

"YAY!!! New recruits! New friends!" Yuki bounced happily while she was being patted. Hearing the news of new recruits. This could be her first Cursed Child friend she would make.
Upon hearing that they were evaluating them, Yuki looked up at Kiri, she was about to speak, but was interrupted as there was an intruder to the building. As they discussed about bringing the unconscious body up, Kiri had laughed about not sending her units to die ... yet.
"So, we are there to test them? Will we not help them?" Yuki finally asked.
When the elevator doors opened, the PMCs brought the unconscious body of the intruder into one of the rooms. From where Yuki was sitting, she could see the face, it was someone she was familiar with.
"Masanori-san?" Yuki softly spoke.
It looked like the father of her old best friend, Midori. Well it was her adoptive father. Yuki had seen him a few times at parent's day at the primary school she went to. When Midori suddenly disappeared, Yuki was shocked to hear of her death. Unknowing to this day that she was an initiator. She had seen her father cry for Midori at the funeral, she was far back during the service and could not see anything that day.

Seeing the body get dragged off into another room, as per the procedure. Yuki looked up at Kiri again.
"Um... is it ok if I spoke to that man just then?" She wanted to make sure it was Masanori-san, and what he was doing here.
She then hopped off Kiri's lap to stand. She didn't leave the room yet. Before Kiri could finish replying, an idea came to Yuki, although Kiri would probably let her, on the off chance she didn't .... Yuki expected that Kiri would start telling Flint off if she were to tell her about Flint's joke to use Yuki as target practice. And at that point go down the hall and have her chance to talk to Masanori-san about Midori and why he was here, if it was him. If it wasn't, she could just leave the room with ease, after playing a trick on him. In fact, even if it were Masanori-san, she would play a trick on him. Super-gluing some conveniently nearby cat ears on his head, and a tail. Either way, once she heard Kiri's reply, she would either bow and leave, or tell her about Flint's joke and leave, entering the room where Masanori-san was, gluing the cat ears and tail and trying to wake him up to talk to him.

Black Bullet : Altered Time

Well that sucks. I can wait for it, not in a rush. So don't worry too much, take your time.

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Well, deflecting all would be bad, but yeah you do see what I mean at least. But your abilities would be suppressed by the bracelet, if shot at, you might be able to deflect for only a short period of time for example. Or not even deflect at first, just reducing the damage, so it only scratches your skin.

By the way, SillyGoy, I like that seen in Nichijou. lol
I would like to give you the green light, and don't see it as too much of a problem if you were to post. But I am not sure if Garrison would like to wait a bit to get more people or not. So, please be a bit more patient.

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Well, I was unaware of the RPing after escape. But, his ability is a little lacking, the guards won't be using weaker guns, I don't think. They will use more firepower, if they were to, or use stun guns and electric batons to suppress us. We already have fighters, and I think plenty. Not that more would be bad. Just a tweak of the character and he will be fine. I do like the character, but, just think a little lacking. Because of the setting, in terms of a human shield, lacking, but buffing it would probably work, and probably another skill set that doesn't really overlap would be good. Well, his underground contacts to keep us hidden is nice and all, but, my character, Xerox, can erase memories of people they pass by, unless they escape quite early, I doubt there will be a problem with erasing memories at that point in the RP. Well, I have had my share to say. I will let Garrison, the GM, not me a Co-GM, decide what to do with your character. Not any major problem in your character, just tweaks would be fine. In my mind the tweaks should be buff the ability and add an unique skill set. Otherwise, his fine.

Drewccap, your new ability, I like it, different and interesting. Don't see any problems with it. I think it will be approved by Garrison.

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Hello drewccap,

I also agree with Garrison's view on your ability/power. It just entails more than it implies.

Most of the rest seems fine but a little bit in your history.

drewccay said
It was at this point she caught the attention of the government as they noticed that it would have taken someone with some extraordinary abilities to hunt down someone that from extensive background checks was a trained assassin.

I believe, especially from her being of a high level family of assassins, she would have a good knowledge in tracking your target and etc. I do not really see this kind of ability to hunt someone down, even though also an assassin, as requiring an ability to track down and warrant government attention in that way. I think the way to warrant the government's attention should be something more evident. Unless, to say, she tracked someone else who had some sort of ability too, and killed them, hence the government's attention.
Most of your CS is good, just a few small things to fix.

Now then Toaw, I don't see anything really wrong with your cs, but, he doesn't bring much to our escape. Also your "skills", I am uncertain about contacts from underground gangs and such. In Purgatory, you wouldn't have access to contact people outside, maybe some of the people from underground gangs and such were also Evols in Purgatory too, but you wouldn't really be able to use that to much of an advantage.

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Hahaha.
I would like to say 100% approved, but I am only a Co-GM. I will wait for Garrison's input on that. But I don't see anything wrong with it.

Final Fantasy: Awakened Souls

Oh, I was planning to make that back story from Fuyuto's grandfather being an ex-wanderer/adventurer and had seen such experiences. lol

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Ah Sorry,
I was unaware of that
Garrison didn't show the recruitment page to me, just let me know, so wasn't sure about it.

Also, you don't need a threat level, since you are not an Evol. You would not need a bracelet nor a level because of that. So remove the "To be assigned" part, since it is technically invalid.

It's a very nice CS, I can see why Garrison approved of it.
Glad to have you aboard!