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    1. Lord Santa 12 yrs ago

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11 yrs ago
Current Opening a jar of honey didn't go so well. Washed most of it off, but my wrists are still sticky for some reason.
11 yrs ago
Summer is sooooo sheeeeeeeeeeeet
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11 yrs ago
Finally have decent internet. Got connected to the National Broadband Network, see. With this speed, I can finally rule the world.
11 yrs ago
You know that rabbit I mentioned? Turns out there's 3 of them.
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11 yrs ago
So, there's this rabbit outside my house, and I'm not sure what to do with it. It sits there sometimes, eating grass and staring into space. It isn't mine, though, so it runs off when we approach.
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I'm pretty interested in this. Though I only watched up to episode 15 of the first season.
that makes sense
Yeah, that should be it for now. That said, we need more people...
Alright, that clears up a few things.
This is actually more than I expected
Well, Takeru's pretty much already gone so you can count on him to not be there
Alright, it sounds pretty solid so far. I see nothng wrong with the deities and while the stats are a little vague, they're still solid and can be well implemented. A few things I'm wondering, however.

So I've read a little of danmachi before (not much) and I'm kind of wondering if you'll implement the skills system or not (I barely know how it works anyway, I just know it's there and am wondering if you're going to use it). Also, I'm kind of confused about the whole 'create a new world' idea and how the characters would fit into the concept. What are the players doing?

I mean, you said something about the gods sealing their powers in weapons and they only correspond to one other dude, but you haven't given us any context as to why they did that. On the subject of context, you haven't really given us much.

This is all just nit picky stuff but I'm curious. Basically, you need more context before pretty much anything. The ideas are solid, but they lack the context necessary to utilize them. I think.
Jon had been sitting in the tavern mulling over his options over a meal. His objective was to clear the infamous prison-dungeon of the mad king, but he knew he couldn't do it alone. For all of his strength and battle prowess, he didn't know the first thing about dungeons or traps. The obvious solution was to look for companions, and that was what Jon had been doing for the past day.

He'd arrived a few days ago and bought a room at the inn for somewhere to stay. After resting, he got up to look for people to join him in his expedition. Unfortunately for him, pretty much no one would brave the depths of the dungeon for all the treasure in the world. Pity, since there were even deadlier dungeons out there. He'd have a hard time looking for team members if he really wanted to brave the dungeons.

A few hours ago, Jon had decided to give up looking for team members because no one wanted in on it. He'd settled down to eat a meal at the inn when a woman declared her intention to clear the prison castle. Jon would've joined but he sat back and observed to see who was interested. He didn't want to be disappointed after all, and if the dungeon was as deadly as everyone made it out to be, they'd need more than 2 people.

Sure enough, several people of different races rallied to her cause. A surprising amount, in fact. And then the woman declared her motivation, as a paladin of the church. Jon wasn't a religious person, but he felt a certain familiarity with her, a sense of duty. She was serving her order as he used to serve his lord. This was enough for Jon to walk up.

"That sounds like as good a cause as any." Jon cut in, striding over to the group. "My blade is yours to use, if you find it in your favour to accept a vagabond knight like me."
So how exactly are you going to revive this?
I'm pretty interested in this, it sounds pretty good.
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