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Dusk said


I think Elize's magic is my personal favorite so far, and I look forward to seeing how it'll develop. Only thing I see wrong is "The debt collectors were there, armed with powerful magic" part, 9 years ago there wouldn't be many wizards powerful enough to destroy a town quickly enough before the authorities (Armed with anti-magic weapons) got there. Even if they happened to be some of the few wizards powerful enough back then, they definitely wouldn't be debt collectors.
dirkinz said
First up, Angelo looks fine now, thanks for changing it up.


I don't think dirkinz addressed this but Lightning Molding Magic wouldn't really be possible as Lightning can't maintain a shape.... Also would you mind changing your character to 3rd person as this is a 3rd person roleplay.
Ok, so I'll address some things that keep coming up.

  1. WE ARE STILL ACCEPTING CHARACTERS AND WILL PROBABLY BE ALWAYS ACCEPTING CHARACTERS!

  2. WE ARE NOT ACCEPTING S CLASS WIZARDS (OR HIGHER) AT THIS TIME!

  3. Magic has only recently reappeared about 10 years ago people started practicing it publicly again, and 5 years ago was when the first guilds (including Phoenix Wing) were founded!

dirkinz said
Next up is Eren looks good save for a couple things.

I'm really liking the magic on Eren. What Dirkinz said plus I need to know why his Old Man and brother shoved in a pit, either via PM or on this thread.
dirkinz said
Oh man, there are a whole bunch of CSs to review, ill get right on that, sorry about the delay guys


You! Get on the thing. (Everyone Else Ignore This)
Dusk said
Question! Is it required to create new members of Phoenix Wing, or is it possible to have one that's been around for a while? OR did I completely misinterpret something and Phoenix Wing is a new guild?Figured I should ask these things xD

The guild is 5 years old so it is possible to have been around for that long.
Phobos said
Making a CS now, is it okay if he's S-classed with a Take Over magic?o.o

You can make an A class mage who has the potential to eventually develop into an S class wizard. But currently we're only accepting A class wizards, the guild master will probably be the only S class wizard and might not even qualify as "Master" class magic.
Panda-Man said
Actually..great idea, with Requip magic I can turn Masquerade into a Holder type which makes sense instead of Caster type.


Requip is a caster magic.
Jangel13 said
is mine better now?


Ok so I've been reading through yours and talked to dirkinz and I think I know what the problems are.

1. You need to explain your magic, more then just titling it. Yes you have lightning magic but what kind of magic, give examples! Does lightning form around your body? Do you shoot lightning out of your fingers? Do you call lightning down from the sky? Or do you do something else?
2. In your history, you state that you performed magic in a small town but that wouldn't get you any money, people don't really like magic.
3. In general write more! Describe your characters actions with more details. How did your character do the action? What was your character feeling when he did it?
Panda-Man said
Caster Magic: Circle of Scorn

The Circle of Scorn allows its user to create a spherical space or "room", where the user has complete control over the placement and orientation of everything inside. He uses his ability in combination with his sword which is vital for his offensive and defensive repertoire regarding his opponents as he can freely dismember them without causing any harm for that is the only taboo that he dares not break since any actual pain that he causes will be inflicted three fold upon him.

Inside the sphere, he can manipulate anything such as the terrain or gravity in what he describes as a "surgical" manner. Through this ability, Prince can also lift or displace objects of any size, attach separated body parts in any manner he sees fit (such as sticking someone's head to a barrel) and even switch peoples' "hearts", which is shown to effectively switch minds. After switching people's minds or messing with someone's body parts, only Prince himself can reverse it, but the recipient(s) must be present in order for him to restore them. People separated by this ability are not killed nor harmed and can still feel their separated parts, regardless of the distance.

I'm thinking this is too overpowered and classifies as at least S class, so I'm going to reject your application. I'll get to Masaki's character later, as I am short on time at the moment.
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