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    1. NickTrano 8 yrs ago

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I like fantasy and sci-fi. Some of my favorite series include Wheel of Time and the Stormlight Archive. Also, Terry Goodkind sucks. Just read Ayn Rand if you want to read Ayn Rand.

RP's I'm currently involved in:

Blood Debt (Fantasy, rebellion lead by a group of rangers).

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Heh, I wouldn't call Royce a brilliant commander, or particularly intelligent, and it sounds like Kane wants to be a hero of the common folk. Their fighting styles and abilities are very different, as well as their circumstances and backstories. I can elaborate on points of his personality, but I think that taking a lot of those other broad points out would just take the character in a direction I don't want to take him. Making him a terrible commander, or making him not care about his men... I could maybe make the common folk hate him for some reason.

Otherwise, the character might just have to be scrapped and I can do something else. I'd rather not rip the soul out of a character because in some broad ways he's similar to another. The main similarity is that they're both knights (well, kind of in Kane's case) and they're both not assholes.
Is it? I didn't think so, in fact I checked through to make sure they weren't. I'll work on it to change it up if you'd like, but it'll take some time. The only similarity I saw was that they were both not too friendly with the nobility. Kane's an intellectual, Royce is a warrior. Kane's a blonde haired pretty boy, Royce is a boisterous mountain of a dude.

I guess what I'm asking is, what do you want me to change? I don't see very many similarities so I can't really fix a problem I'm blind to.
I need to finish the history of the character and do some polishing. I'm going to do other stuff for a while and I don't want to risk losing the post. I should be finished before the night's end.



Humanity, fuck yeah. I'll either be making a scheming nobleman or a Knight of the Ram. Magic is for nerds. This looks like it's going to be great.
Guess we get to bro it up from the back room, Seuss. We'll have them break in the back as well.
Hooray!
Interesting.
Sounds good! I've been holding off because I figured it'd be simpler for you to drag everyone into the same room.
WIP; this is up primarily to make it easier to edit rather than having to save it separately. I stayed out later than intended tonight.

Just checking in to say I am writing an Ordo Malleus inquisitor ordinary, just taking more time to research and get into the writing style of 40K than I thought it would.
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