notdeadyet

Academy for the Gifted - A darker school for magical studies

"PROFESORE ALLORE!" Headmistress issabella said with a start. "You simply must learn how to walk." She gave a small laugh, than turned, signaling for the teacher to follow her. "Let me show you to where your room shall be. Your office will be behind the classroom, and your bedroom above the office. After i show you to your class, id like to introduce you to a few other teachers, whom i expect you will work quite closely with." The headmistress took control of the conversation like she usually did. She gave the professor Allure verry little time to speak before they got to the class.

"Whatever you wish to teach, you may do so here. If you need supplies, or remodeling, simply inform myself or another headmaster."

The Everlasting Arena: Character Deposit

This will be my derp until further notice. Ill use this whilst i correct jynxs, and the two will give me plenty of practice before i introduce kent.

Raiu

Name
Raiu

Age
24

Race
Human

Gender
Male

Appearance
(Will draw later.) 5'11 Weighing in at 175 lbs. Raiu has a slender yet muscular build, covered by his long white, silver, and red trench coat. He wears silver forearm bracers, and a small silver plate over the chest of his jacket, and sturdy, insulated white boots, but otherwise apears not to wear armour. He has long blonde hair, and bright blue eyes.

Personality
Raiu is a loving determined man. He values his friends and family above himself, and religion above that. Well at least since he became the champion of Mara he has. He does not mock foes, and will support an ally. The general summary if his personality would be "What a nice young man."

Tier
4
Physicalities
Strength- Raiu isnt the strongest person. His lifting ability is roughly 400 lbs.
Speed- Raiu is extremely fast, capable of just barely breaking the sound barrier.
Defensive ability- Nothing grand. Raiu can resist small arms fires, but any reasonable ammount of force will potentially cripple or kill him

Abilities
-Can shoot lightning from his fingertips. Roughly the strength of a small bolt of lightning
-Can call real lightning to strike up ti two points. If he touches one bolt with his weapon he may travel through it to the other bolt. Otherwise this is a simple 1 turn charge 1 turn strike attack
-Enhanced reflexes and precision. Allows him to keep up with movement as fast as a bullet
-shock pulse- pushes nearby objects away, whilst also giving them electrical charge, that he can keep track of
-Can charge an item magnetically by touching it.
-Can charge his cell phone without a charger

Weapons
1 shortsword called "Maras Blade" or the blade of light. Its made of gold and geisteel
1 twinblade that can channel lightning

Bio
Ambulance crew: "WERE LOOSING HIM!"
Female Voice: "Raiu!"
Doctor: "His pulse is rising to high! Somebody get the defribilator!"
Female Voice: "Open your eyes Raiu!"

Moments prior, this young man was running during the worst storm of the year. But, what was he running from? He had just felt a calling and had to go meet it.

Doctor: "CLEAR!"
Female Voice: "Come Raiu. Do not fear the light. For you did not fear the storm."
Crew: "Negative sir, Second charge ready!"
Doctor: "Clear!"

There was a jolt in his body, and when Raiu opened his eyes, he was laying on his back, above thestormclouds, looking into the sun. "What the..." He said as a beautiful woman, garbed in clouds aproached.
Female Voice: "Your awake Raiu. Ive been waiting."
What is this? Where am I? he thought to himself. He rose realizing he was naked.
Female Voice: "Raiu, this is heaven. Unfortunately i cannot let you go further."
"WHAT?!?!" Raiu Jolted.

"CLEAR!"

"HOW COULD I BE IN HEAVEN?!?! IM NOT DEAD YET!"
Female Voice: "Thats not why you are here Raiu. You are here because your heart is true, and because i need you."
"But..." The information was confusing and made no sense.

"Thats it boys, im calling it. Time of death, 6:05. Cause, struck by lightning."

Female: "I need you Raiu. You are a champion, and i have chosen you amungst mortal men to bear my name across the universe."
"What do you mean champion? Im just a paper boy."
Female: "You will see Raiu. You shall represent me amungst your world and the next. Now go, before your family gets too worried. I shall explain in due time."
"Wait! I have so many questions!"

Crew: "Doctor his pulse is back up!"
Female: "Goodbye my mortal love. I shall see you in the dinming halls of eternity. When you have conquered the storm within you."
Doctor: "HURRY! Get me an IV!"

"Huh? What? Wh-- woah... WOAH! AAAAAAAGGGGHHH!"

There was a blindig flash of light and the feelin of falling through the clouds. Then, everything went black. When Raiu opened his eyes, he was at the 4th ad Pine hospital, with a full crew hoverin over him in astonishment. "Whats going on? Who are you? Where am I?" He said.

"RAIU!" Suddenly his sister flung her arms over him and cried tears of joy onto his shoulder. "You had me so worried! Rai--- what happened to your eyes?" Raiu looked into a mirror and saw his light blue eyes were now a light grey, with blue streaks flickering through them. He aprached the mirror for a second look, and in his reflection, saw white robes and 2 bladed weapons on the far wall.

A moment of realization hit him, and he wherled around to face everyone. The burn mark from the lightning bolt was still fresh on his chest. He walked across the room, kissed his sister on the forehead, grabbed the clothes an weapons and left."im a champion" he told his sister before leaving. Then, he left the hospital, into the storm.

Misc
Champion of Mara, the godess of the sky and weather.

Mana-script Academy for the gifted (Magical School RP)

"WOULD I!?!" Mutt's face lit up. Turns out, he had a tad bit of a sweet tooth. Soon, his entire face was burried inside of the bag, eating candies, wrappeds and all. After a moment he paused, and pulled his head back with a sucked in facial expression. Moments later, he was darting around in circles, dragging his tounge along th floor, crashing into walls and people, and making a scene. He rolled straight through Meruin and Liz holding his tounge and howling.

My cs+ for personal reference--- feel free to poke around, an critique

Raiu

Name
Raiu

Age
24

Race
Human

Gender
Male

Appearance
(Will draw later.) 5'11 Weighing in at 175 lbs. Raiu has a slender yet muscular build, covered by his long white, silver, and red trench coat. He wears silver forearm bracers, and a small silver plate over the chest of his jacket, and sturdy, insulated white boots, but otherwise apears not to wear armour. He has long blonde hair, and bright blue eyes.

Personality
Raiu is a loving determined man. He values his friends and family above himself, and religion above that. Well at least since he became the champion of Mara he has. He does not mock foes, and will support an ally. The general summary if his personality would be "What a nice young man."

Tier
4
Physicalities
Strength- Raiu isnt the strongest person. His lifting ability is roughly 400 lbs.
Speed- Raiu is extremely fast, capable of just barely breaking the sound barrier.
Defensive ability- Nothing grand. Raiu can resist small arms fires, but any reasonable ammount of force will potentially cripple or kill him

Abilities
-Can shoot lightning from his fingertips. Roughly the strength of a small bolt of lightning
-Can call real lightning to strike up ti two points. If he touches one bolt with his weapon he may travel through it to the other bolt. Otherwise this is a simple 1 turn charge 1 turn strike attack
-Enhanced reflexes and precision. Allows him to keep up with movement as fast as a bolt of lightning
-shock pulse- pushes nearby objects away, whilst also giving them electrical charge, that he can keep track of
-Can charge an item magnetically by touching it.
-Can charge his cell phone without a charger

Weapons
1 shortsword called "Maras Blade" or the blade of light. Its made of gold and geisteel
1 twinblade that can channel lightning

Bio
Ambulance crew: "WERE LOOSING HIM!"
Female Voice: "Raiu!"
Doctor: "His pulse is rising to high! Somebody get the defribilator!"
Female Voice: "Open your eyes Raiu!"

Moments prior, this young man was running during the worst storm of the year. But, what was he running from? He had just felt a calling and had to go meet it.

Doctor: "CLEAR!"
Female Voice: "Come Raiu. Do not fear the light. For you did not fear the storm."
Crew: "Negative sir, Second charge ready!"
Doctor: "Clear!"

There was a jolt in his body, and when Raiu opened his eyes, he was laying on his back, above thestormclouds, looking into the sun. "What the..." He said as a beautiful woman, garbed in clouds aproached.
Female Voice: "Your awake Raiu. Ive been waiting."
What is this? Where am I? he thought to himself. He rose realizing he was naked.
Female Voice: "Raiu, this is heaven. Unfortunately i cannot let you go further."
"WHAT?!?!" Raiu Jolted.

"CLEAR!"

"HOW COULD I BE IN HEAVEN?!?! IM NOT DEAD YET!"
Female Voice: "Thats not why you are here Raiu. You are here because your heart is true, and because i need you."
"But..." The information was confusing and made no sense.

"Thats it boys, im calling it. Time of death, 6:05. Cause, struck by lightning."

Female: "I need you Raiu. You are a champion, and i have chosen you amungst mortal men to bear my name across the universe."
"What do you mean champion? Im just a paper boy."
Female: "You will see Raiu. You shall represent me amungst your world and the next. Now go, before your family gets too worried. I shall explain in due time."
"Wait! I have so many questions!"

Crew: "Doctor his pulse is back up!"
Female: "Goodbye my mortal love. I shall see you in the dinming halls of eternity. When you have conquered the storm within you."
Doctor: "HURRY! Get me an IV!"

"Huh? What? Wh-- woah... WOAH! AAAAAAAGGGGHHH!"

There was a blindig flash of light and the feelin of falling through the clouds. Then, everything went black. When Raiu opened his eyes, he was at the 4th ad Pine hospital, with a full crew hoverin over him in astonishment. "Whats going on? Who are you? Where am I?" He said.

"RAIU!" Suddenly his sister flung her arms over him and cried tears of joy onto his shoulder. "You had me so worried! Rai--- what happened to your eyes?" Raiu looked into a mirror and saw his light blue eyes were now a light grey, with blue streaks flickering through them. He aprached the mirror for a second look, and in his reflection, saw white robes and 2 bladed weapons on the far wall.

A moment of realization hit him, and he wherled around to face everyone. The burn mark from the lightning bolt was still fresh on his chest. He walked across the room, kissed his sister on the forehead, grabbed the clothes an weapons and left."im a champion" he told his sister before leaving. Then, he left the hospital, into the storm.

Misc
Champion of Mara, the godess of the sky and weather.

My cs+ for personal reference--- feel free to poke around, an critique

Raiu

Name
Raiu

Age
24

Race
Human

Gender
Male

Appearance
(Will draw later.) 5'11 Weighing in at 175 lbs. Raiu has a slender yet muscular build, covered by his long white, silver, and red trench coat. He wears silver forearm bracers, and a small silver plate over the chest of his jacket, and sturdy, insulated white boots, but otherwise apears not to wear armour. He has long blonde hair, and bright blue eyes.

Physicalities
Strength- Raiu isnt the strongest person. His lifting ability is roughly 400 lbs.
Speed- Raiu is extremely fast, capable of just barely breaking the sound barrier.
Defensive ability- Nothing grand. Raiu can resist small arms fires, but any reasonable ammount of force will potentially cripple or kill him

Abilities
-Can shoot lightning from his fingertips. Roughly the strength of a small bolt of lightning
-Can call real lightning to strike up ti two points. If he touches one bolt with his weapon he may travel through it to the other bolt. Otherwise this is a simple 1 turn charge 1 turn strike attack
-Enhanced reflexes and precision. Allows him to keep up with movement as fast as a bullet
-shock pulse- pushes nearby objects away, whilst also giving them electrical charge, that he can keep track of
-Can charge an item magnetically by touching it.
-Can charge his cell phone without a charger

Weapons
1 shortsword called "Maras Blade" or the blade of light. Its made of gold and geisteel
1 twinblade that can channel lightning

Bio
Ambulance crew: "WERE LOOSING HIM!"
Female Voice: "Raiu!"
Doctor: "His pulse is rising to high! Somebody get the defribilator!"
Female Voice: "Open your eyes Raiu!"

Moments prior, this young man was running during the worst storm of the year. But, what was he running from? He had just felt a calling and had to go meet it.

Doctor: "CLEAR!"
Female Voice: "Come Raiu. Do not fear the light. For you did not fear the storm."
Crew: "Negative sir, Second charge ready!"
Doctor: "Clear!"

There was a jolt in his body, and when Raiu opened his eyes, he was laying on his back, above thestormclouds, looking into the sun. "What the..." He said as a beautiful woman, garbed in clouds aproached.
Female Voice: "Your awake Raiu. Ive been waiting."
What is this? Where am I? he thought to himself. He rose realizing he was naked.
Female Voice: "Raiu, this is heaven. Unfortunately i cannot let you go further."
"WHAT?!?!" Raiu Jolted.

"CLEAR!"

"HOW COULD I BE IN HEAVEN?!?! IM NOT DEAD YET!"
Female Voice: "Thats not why you are here Raiu. You are here because your heart is true, and because i need you."
"But..." The information was confusing and made no sense.

"Thats it boys, im calling it. Time of death, 6:05. Cause, struck by lightning."

Female: "I need you Raiu. You are a champion, and i have chosen you amungst mortal men to bear my name across the universe."
"What do you mean champion? Im just a paper boy."
Female: "You will see Raiu. You shall represent me amungst your world and the next. Now go, before your family gets too worried. I shall explain in due time."
"Wait! I have so many questions!"

Crew: "Doctor his pulse is back up!"
Female: "Goodbye my mortal love. I shall see you in the dinming halls of eternity. When you have conquered the storm within you."
Doctor: "HURRY! Get me an IV!"

"Huh? What? Wh-- woah... WOAH! AAAAAAAGGGGHHH!"

There was a blindig flash of light and the feelin of falling through the clouds. Then, everything went black. When Raiu opened his eyes, he was at the 4th ad Pine hospital, with a full crew hoverin over him in astonishment. "Whats going on? Who are you? Where am I?" He said.

"RAIU!" Suddenly his sister flung her arms over him and cried tears of joy onto his shoulder. "You had me so worried! Rai--- what happened to your eyes?" Raiu looked into a mirror and saw his light blue eyes were now a light grey, with blue streaks flickering through them. He aprached the mirror for a second look, and in his reflection, saw white robes and 2 bladed weapons on the far wall.

A moment of realization hit him, and he wherled around to face everyone. The burn mark from the lightning bolt was still fresh on his chest. He walked across the room, kissed his sister on the forehead, grabbed the clothes an weapons and left."im a champion" he told his sister before leaving. Then, he left the hospital, into the storm.

Misc
Champion of Mara, the godess of the sky and weather.

T-1 PC Multi challenge (me vs 2-4)

Alright than, if you feel i should get in more challenge, would you like to spar?

As for the multi v 1, i understand you thoughts, but ive built this char specifically to specialize in these multi v 1 situations.

Mana-script Academy for the gifted (Magical School RP)

Dash375 said
Liz walked onto the island off the boat that she had boarded and took a deep breath as she observed the surroundings for a minute before sighing out her breath and muttering "This place looks dull, 3 years here as well." She put her bag onto her back and started to head through the town on her way to the school taking note of the important shops on her way before she arrived at the school grounds impressed by the size of it. As Liz entered the schools ground she noticed 3 people, 2 boys and a girl who appeared to be half naked, chuckling a bit she walked over to the group "Hey, this is the academy right?" she asked but Liz already knew this but she struggled to think of any other way to open a conversation with the group.

Mutt was going to ask Meruin if he could walk with her. After all, he did very much enjoy a morning walk. Instead, a new student aproached, and Slick passed. Mutt decided to engage in conversation with the new student. "Haha i wouldnt exactly know." He said. "I just got here"

The Everlasting Arena: Main Thread

Skallagrim said
Notdeadyet,I read your revised character and it seems like you are trying to make him a high-end power character. That's fine if that is your intent, but the entirety of your powers are not cohesive. It feels like you have taken bits and pieces to make an overpowered amalgam. Your history as written doesn't account for any of those powers, your ability to apparently summon things nor does it explain how you have a mud-based body with energy eyes.I am 'old school' T1, and I understand powerful characters, but every character I have fought or allied with has a cohesion in their powers. You label Psi as the essence of your characters existence, in your characters world, that's fine you are in effect saying you can create and destroy things with a thought. In effect you are giving yourself a shade below god-like power. Again that';s fine for a high tier power character, But because you have a scattered approach too powers and instead of focusing on one or two aspects of your powers you can do everything and apparently exceptionally well. While I don't find your character overly powered in terms of high tier characters he is far too much for anyone to fight because you are all over the place with your powers,. IMHO you should focus on the psi and terror arts, develop those into a structured and cohesive whole and get rid of the sue. Then your character will have a much more organic feel and be far more challenging over all.Skall

Understood. This character is suppose to be extremely strong as you mentioned. Perhaps seeing the character in use will also help. The sites ive come from, nobody has complained about a distancship between Jynxs and his powers. None the less, i apreciate the criticism, and shal continue working on the character. When i get a chance, im eager to post "Kent" as well. I just want my op'd screw around character to be done well, so i have experience and examples when i make my main.

Ill add to his bio section. You gotta figure, everything in the first box was written hastedly as i tried to get him into a different rp as a teacher role. I only included info relevant to the job.

The Everlasting Arena: Main Thread

Lalliman said
Looks like we posted at the same time. Please read the post above yours.

Ty. Ill edit immediately

Though, in reguards to his weight, he is supposed to be extremely thin, to the point where he is disgusting to look at.

The Everlasting Arena: Main Thread

Lalliman said
That explains the saliva and psi powers. The saliva is still questionable to have available in a fight though. Maybe it needs to be administered in a specific way that's not convenient in combat?Before i reread the whole thing, how much of it did you edit? All tabs or just the two new ones that you added?

I added 2 tabs, and some detail to the moves requested (iron maiden, terror claw, mass manipulation.) the summoning list has one more summon that i didnt list earlier because he needs to transform first. I didnt see it as relivant, until you al mentioned how specific it must be. I did some light editing to defense ad weakenesses to add clarity.