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Current I've returned with a new state of mind. Let's rebuild this world together from the fragments of my conscious.
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Success is a side effect of Mental Superiority
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I am but a tool. Simply point me in the right direction and let me be used.
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Our RP would take place in the southern tribe, many generations later. Our people, stopped speaking to the planet, and she grew angry. So, she commanded the dragons to destroy all other life, for they had forgotten her and her grace. Along with the dragon attacks, the western tribes would begin attacking ALL the other tribes, to retain rescources, and survive. Our goal would be as missionaries, trying to get the ears of all people to listen to the planet once more, so tht peace may return.

We would have wretched monsters, super powered people, warring tribal people, the elements, dragons, and each other trying to hinder our journey. Ultimately, the fate of all people upon the planet rest within our hands. To add spice to the story, We would find ancient libraries of "K," lost cities, underground temples, and entirely new races.

This RP would be heavily focused on character interaction, with a secondary emphasis on the story mentioned above. The Rp would be open, not just in accepting characters, but open for people to input lore, and ideas, from which they can derive interesting and varied characters. The above story is one such example (i just so happen to be basing the first part of our rp on the events following this story. Objections, and better ideas are always welcome however.)

Characters participating would be varied in many ways. They could have powers, of just about any sort, with restrictions in bloodweiving (id post the specificis for that in the actual RP, since its such an overpowered ability, time travel, an a few other small things. Ultimately, everybody would be very powerfull. Characters could also be of any race, so long as they can communicate with humans at least a little bit. Im looking for interest, ideas, and 2 co-gm's whom would be able to accept people to the rp, critique cs's, and help me drive the plot. Upon completing the main story, we would collectively create new ideas to keep the rp going.
Muttcontinued his senscless babbelling for several seconds after Meruin had forgiven him, simply because he did not expect to be so easily forgiven! Before he knew it, the room wa pretty much back to normal, besides the door that was currently inside another classroom. He couldnt fathom how on earth this was possible, but he didnt want to wait to find out.

"Ooooooohhhhkaaaaayy thenn....." Mutt started as he began inching his way towards the damadged remnants of a doorframe. "I guess ill just be going then..." Right as Mutt neared the doorway, a thought struk him.. Suddenly he dashed across the room, and planted his nose against Meruin, and began sniffing the little magician thuroughly. There was no way this could possibly be meruin!
Thats pretty good if you asked me. I gladly give my stamp of aproval.
Daglobster said
But Alduin's dead as a doornkob. The dragonborn nommed on his soul. In other news, I might make a second character depending on how many people there are to roleplay with out of combat.


Dern...
Grnmachine said
Thanks for the criticism notdeadyet. I'll work on my CS when i can, and it would be great it you drew my charecters for me, but lets do it via PM. I dont always trust people with my email.


WHOLLY SHYT! I WAS TALKING OUT MY ASS WHILST EXHAUSTED AND TRYING TO SOUND INTELLIGENT! XD

I reread that now, and i may be exhausted, but besides spelling errors, i feel pretty durn gud about that critique xD. Glad to help man! How bout you pm me more details of the characters, ill draw them to the best of my ability and slap em on my devianart account? (jynxs131312) yes thats a two on the end, that is in fact not a typo, though it was when i originally created the account. You may check out my previous drawings there. Speaking of which, i have drawings that i need to add to there, so you can see some more rescent works.
Soooo i just thought, and this is mostly for Light, though anybody may add critique. What if, for this arena, we added a "requirement." What I mean is, this is a religious RP technically. Our characters fight for a god of sorts right? Most religions have practices that are expected to be followed. What if we had requirements that our characters must meet, in order to apease their gods, or two actually earn them honor? For example, priroda and Sol MUST perform a combo attack in every fight, or Herriman must change weapons at least twice, or something of the nature? These wouldnt necissarily hinder ourcharacters, but would help us more the less stay truthfull to the concepts and gods for which our characters were created.

Also, someone needs to make a champion for Alduin. XD
Grnmachine said
When will light be on? Its been awhile since they last posted... I hope nobody minds if i repost my app.


About your characters lack of pictures, I can hand sketch something up and email it to you if you'd like. Im no artist, but i do okay. Its something fun that I enjoy doing in my spare time. And since i didnt draw my characters i feel a little guilty. XD
My scuicide charge wAs extremely stupid ^_^ thanks for noticing. I was trying to think of something that would be NEARYLY straight scuicide, and would have been laughable had it worked.

On a seperate note, i was expecting LESS powerfull oponents, so i might have to make a different char sheet. Frankly, the teenage girls i entered were the result of 3 days with a total of 2 hours sleep between them. They are totaly useless individually, and together are still only "Eeeehhhhh" compared to other characters. Seriously, my idea for a big attack was refracting Sol's light trough Priroda's crystals for a lazer... That would take several turns to set up, during which time othe people would either destroy them, or lobb off several of their own projectiles. So yeah... Imma get a drawing set up, and a cs going.
Grnmachine said
When will light be on? Its been awhile since they last posted... I hope nobody minds if i repost my app.


I dont know bout light, but im sure that if both us co-gm's accept you you will be able to participate, and upon lights return, make any corrections he ask for. What i recommend you change on your cs sheet is as follows:

  • Organization-
  • The powers are a big bulking paragraph. Its not necissary, and you will likely be accepted either way, but seperating those abilities the way you did the elemental effects of arrows would greatly help the overall flow of your cs.
  • Pritective skin
  • - What will it protect against, and to what degree? Will it make you immune to certain effects? Etc. details especially reguarding defenses are crucial in an arena RP. Especially one so broad. The comparison you made of tempered steel was great to describe physical resistance.
  • The Scythe-
  • I have a few comments reguarding the scythe. You mentione its length. Does that referre to blade length, or handle length? My second comment only exist because Heriman exist. Since heriman can alter things with his magic, would your scythe be suseptible to that?
  • Summoning Weapons
  • - This probably goes without saying, but you should mention that you cant summon a weapon INSIDE someone, and where it CAN be summoned. Dont worry, i often forget this detail as well.
  • The bow-
  • What speed do the projectiles accelerate at, and can you use multiple elements at once?
  • fire-
  • How large and hot is the inferno?
  • Ice
  • How long does the freeze last
  • Earth
  • How much slower, and how long will it last?
  • Sun
  • How long will they be blind for? Are there any variables affecting this?
  • Moon
  • Again, how long will this last. How powerfull are the hallucinations? Are they psycosomatic (so powerfull that what they do ACTUALLY EFFECTS the victim. Getting hit by one is actually getting hit).
  • Other-
  • The ther section is bunched into your history section. I advice hitting enter 1-3x to space that out, or simply removing it.
Im waiting on ANYBODY to post
Daglobster said
wow, that just sucked away any self-confidence I had concerning that fight.


No no no no! DONT TAKE IT LIKE THAT PLEASE! I didnt mean to kill your confidence. I meant to say it was a glass cannon attack. Meaning, high risk for high rewards, and i lost! Thats it!
Daglobster said
Well, the kill on Priroda was mostly because she had opted to hang onto her sickle, for some reason that was beyond me. I was like "Welp, I'm pretty sure you can't get a bigger opening than this."


I was trying to get killed so that other people could fight. Due to complications in my schedule i couldnt post frequently, so i went for an OKO move that would either end in instant victory, or defeat. XD i wasnt too hard set on victory 'cuz :"You win some you loose some," and i didnt wanna argue any technicallities.
XD imagine if i had app'd with this char, modifying the cs to meet Light's criteria. Would eternaly piss everyone off a bit i think. Obviously idd add more detail, since this was originally meant for a superhuman rp not of the arena. But none the less, you get a general idea of how this character works.

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