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    1. OneWayOut 12 yrs ago

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9 yrs ago
Tfw you wear a short skirt and sit down on a cold chair with nothing to protect your butt and you wana die
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9 yrs ago
Do no harm, but take no shit.
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9 yrs ago
Ugh I just wana write x.x
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9 yrs ago
Speaking of Naruto, I really wana do an RP like that again. But do I wana start one? Mehhh.
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9 yrs ago
Writing: That weird place between torture and fun.
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Hello everyone! I'm going to get caught up and update our little roster thingy.

Yes, apologies for the late OOC. As I said it will be done by tonight.
*rolls into the thread*

I'll be back. Data is in charge. Have fun my lovelies. Recruit your friends and I shall.... "reconvene with you... at a later... juncture! At a juncture." (If you know which RWBY character said this, like this post. XD)

Byeee~
@JustAriel I believe he's still working on it
*shuffles in like a zombie* uuuuhhhh


When you guys complete a character, please mention me in it so I can find it.
Yuru Yuri is life.
@Katakon looks good so far.

All of the pink! Its too much!

@Snarfulblast uhh, alright just a few things about you sheet that I'd like to address in order to accept it.

-Kind of missing the color aspect of his image/appearance. I don't know what twilight purple is but I expected to see some of it. (If you can't find a suitable image, please describe his outfit in the appearance section.) Aside from that, is there any particular reason he is 100 lbs heavier and doesn't look like it? I mean... just, why? XD

-In regards to his weapon, I feel like you could do some more with it, you know? Be creative? But... I suppose if you want it to just be an axe, that's fine. Just remember that you won't be able to do much else than hack and slash seeing as you didn't put any details of what it could do. I'm going to have to call you out IC if suddenly it becomes a cannon.

-I need a bit more of an in depth personality.

-The history is also pretty lacking. How did the events in his life shape him into the person he is? How does he view the world now? Why does he fight Grimm? etc.

-Need to explain his combat style a little more, and as well as what his weaknesses are.

-Lastly, his semblance doesn't seem to make sense to me. How can he really gauge when his teammates are hurt? How does he/what causes him get stronger? Does this only work when teammates are nearby or can he tell if his teammate got hurt from some distance away? If he takes more damage, how does this even help the situation at all? Where does being enraged mix in with all of this?

Unfortunately with all these questions, I can't accept your character until more detail is put into the sheet. If you have any questions or feel my critique was unfair, please let me know.
Alright, then I assume Ariel will make a female character. Nice work guys :)
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