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I'd like a bit of elaborate on the Kekkei Genaki. Is it like... some super OP shit from the Tailed Beast hunt, or is like a Kage Bushin?
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Palm_Bottom

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Eight_Trigrams_Vacuum_Palm

32 isn't too bad. I suppose it would be fine.

The assassination change is acceptable.

If you change his birth, he would be born during the Second Great Shinobi War. If you change his age, he would be born three years into the Reign of Sai and would be 12-13.
So, Tuuj, before I review it, I'm going to allow the other members (Except for Beta, because I know he's biased as fuck) to do some reviews. Their opinions do not reflect mine, but I want to see what the majority says.

As Innue is your friend, s/he may also not comment.
Yes, Mirth.
Narutopedia said The Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms is a taijutsu that should only be passed down in the main house of the Hyƫga


I'm going to classify it as basically a Hiden. It's use is not common knowledge and it has to be taught. With no examples of someone using gentle fist in Canon aside from the Hyuga, you cannot contest it.

Being Main House is fine, but the character would be 4-10 at the time, especially if his parents were part of the resistance. He's not going to be able to learn the 64, which is a Hiden, and he'd have to be a Neji-level prodigy to do so on his own.

The character's age, conveniently, should only be 11-13, which means that he still would be below Hinata based on the fact she received formal training and still was not on the level of Neji.

That said, Juken is still very powerful without the sixty-four palm. I see no reason he couldn't just do a sixteen palm variant. He could also use palm thrust and a watered-down version of the vacuum jutsu. I'm not saying he can't have the core components of the jutsu, I'm saying it isn't viable for him to have the full extent of their abilities. They were, quite obviously, used to show how Neji was a prodigy.
Marrow, some issues.

There's essentially no way your character could be born a few years into the Reign of Sai and be fifteen. The official Reign of Sai only lasted fifteen years.

Secondly, if you're not being taught the sixty-four strikes, you won't know it. It was basically a Hiden passed down within the main Hyuga branch that Neji only succeeded in mastering because he's a plot-induced badass.

Lastly, there was no 'assassination' attempt on Sai. It was a drawn out, full-scale war inside Amegakure that lead to the destruction of an entire city that was basically a bastion.
I'm legit not reviewing CS's that are posted here. They now have to be done in the CS thread. Just an FYI.
Lilly and Innue, you may go ahead and post your Character Sheets in the IC. They were previously approved.
Lilly, I do not believe you actually posted your CS in the right place. lol
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