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Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation

You, Ekirei, will not be roleplaying here. Find a different RP.

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation

Ekirei said Don't even try to say my actions are immature, I am not the one insulting the other

You just spelled leave backwards solely in an attempt to get the last word on a thread in which you know you have no hope of redeeming yourself on. You are gravely immature, and I am quite glad that you did not make it further in this roleplay. In addition to that, I find you just pathetic enough to finally ignore. The last word doesn't matter when things have reached such a low.

Good-bye. Enjoy whatever other Naruto-themed roleplay you intend to troll.

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation

Leave.

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation

You are both entertaining and annoying, and I will explain why. I am entertained in the sense that I enjoy debate. It's as simple as that. I am annoyed by the fact you are so defensive when you don't even need to be.

Let's begin with your assertion of my superiority complex. You base it off of two things: my statements and the model you have made of how my mind works. Your primary resources for this are that I stated I took years of art class; you believe that makes me feel like I am better. You also use my psychoanalysis and tone of writing, but neither of those are truly indicative of a superiority complex. You simply assumed that I believe I am superior. I will clarify.

I took four years of art classes, a year of general art, art studies, performance art and art appreciation. All of that is completely useless for me. I'm presently a registered EMT and Medical coder in the soon-to-be outdated ICD-9. I'm a nursing student presently and I specialize in psychology to become a PMHNP. I have 7 semesters of college under me.

Guess what? That is all fucking irrelevant. Every last bit of it doesn't matter. Why?

BECAUSE MY FUCKING POINT WAS THAT I WAS GIVING A SIMPLE CRITIQUE.

I learned to give formal critiques in not just my art classes, but my writing classes. That's all I'm doing.

I'm not insulting you. I'm not immediately denying you. I am telling you the mother fucking criteria of which I want based on the fucking material that I was presented. It's that fucking simple. You have more criteria that you think will completely alter my opinion of your character? Fan-fucking-tastic. You either ignore or take into minor account my opinions on your unfinished CS, then finish it. It's real simple. You don't get butthurt and delete it like a fourteen year old freshie.

Now, let me go off listing several reasons you're indicative of an inferiority complex: You dislike being compared and you immediately negated the one thing that would functionally rank me higher than you (me being GM) then claimed we're all equals. But those are the obvious ones. Let me go in deeper. In your verbal assaults on me, you don't demean the content of my statements, just me in general. You don't care about being right or wrong, as you obviously stated you are wrong, you just care about your image in the conversation. You boldly stated you don't want things done for you, meaning that you want to feel independent to the sheer degree you will get defensive over a critique. But probably most of all is this: your major combat to my claim of your inferiority complex is that I simply feel I'm superior.

So, here's my simple rebuttal to you. Leave. You had the opportunity to simply work with a minor critique or prove your character logically acceptable, but instead you decided to argue with the GM. I would've gladly accepted a character that made sense for their abilities. I've done it before. It actually tends to be how many of my personal characters work. But, instead of taking some minor criticism which was understandable, you had to get defensive and argued arbitrary facts.

So, let me end with this. You will not be part of this RP. You have no purpose replying to this thread. You are wasting both of our time. I do not want you here. I do not forgive you. Leave.

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Let me reiterate. Leave.

Your attitude is of no use here. You could not handle a simple critique of information presented. You have a distinct inferiority complex, which I find more annoying than anything. You are hypocritical in your views on assumptions. Overall, you have proven to be a pest. Actually, let me break it down:

- I saw information, and I graded it based on what I saw. It was fair. I did the same for Krieg, whom did something very similar in his posting before formatting. He simply said 'wait a second', did it, and there was no problem. You couldn't even follow that example.

- You stated you had a bad mood, as if I'm entitled to care. Such activity is egocentric. You claimed you were insulted at what you believe is my assumption you could not do something. That is not only egocentric, it's indicative of an inferiority complex as you outwardly are attempting to prove something. This is only rectified by the fact you are trying to create a character whom you have to justify certain aspects of because they are normally above or beyond his placement.

- You hypocritically made an assumption that you literally admitted to after attempting to insult me for making what you believed to be assumptions.

- You were insulted at my comment of years of art classes, meaning something hit a nerve with your inferiority complex. You assumed I meant I had more sense than you when I was explaining my actions.

You are not the type of roleplayer or person I am looking for. I do not care what mood you are in, I do not care that I lost a single roleplayer and I do not care about your opinion of me or my roleplay. I do not even care if every roleplayer who wanted to be here reads this, finds it in poor taste and decides not to roleplay because of it. You have no influence here. You will not ever. Good bye.

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation

You stated his personality and his jutsu. Alone, I can make assertions from that. I did state that your history had not been made, but I still am greatly capable of drawing conclusions from the information given and present you with my input. You do not just tell someone to 'not assume' and then complain about not getting a 'chance to explain' when I simply gave input on the material presented. If anything, you consider it an opportunity to build off more input and see the insight of the GM during the creation process.

Roleplay is art. I came from years of art classes. You cannot get defensive over a critique, elsewise you might as well just leave now.

Edit: It is not just a waste of your time, it is a waste of mine. I saw information, and I graded it. It was simply input. If you cannot handle input, then I don't want you here. I do not care if you are in a bad mood. Your actions and attitude have determined this is not the place for you. Good bye. Please resist the urge to comment back.

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I have some issues with Kokai.

First and foremost, I don't really feel like he's a "Better Generations" character as much as he's just fit to the Naruto theme in general. I know his history is not made, but I really don't see any plot elements or aspects of Birth of a Better Generation inside the character design. He also feels slightly like the Gary Sue type of Loyal Clansmen archetype, which would be fine, but that entire archetype has been influenced by the mass genocide of every clan, very notably Konohagakure. On that note, even though there is pride in being a clan member, you have to realize this is only a set few years after every clan member was in hiding from Sai, who was selectively killing them. I would say that because of that alone, his training would be stunted greatly. Lastly, I do not personally mind using elemental jutsu on a Hyuuga, but there are four jutsu, some used by Jounin and S-Class ninja. Even if they scaled up, you have to realize that genin don't even learn most elemental jutsu at their stage. Sasuke was a prodigy and knew a handful of fire jutsu, and he was from one of the most prodigious clans of the series. I feel like you should reduce the jutsu to maybe one or two. I said six was the limit for genin; I did not say that having less would be less.

Overall, I want the character more cemented into the setting and I want the Wind Release scaled back greatly. If you still want jutsu for Wind Release, make some custom ones that are relatively weak, but useful in terms of utility. Don't limit yourself to the pre-existing pool.

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation

You may, of course. :D

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation

Approved, Krieg. Admittedly, I would've preferred more BBCode and possibly a picture reference, but ultimately it appears fine.

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PM'd it instead.