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Late fall/early winter is one of the worst times to try to run a roleplay. All these holidays make it tough.

About your cards, Scar, I rather like the idea. They're good.

Now to get that blasted IC going and add some more cards. Anyone ever wonder how many people work on cardmaking over at Konami?

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Yeah, my weekend schedule went nothing like I thought it would, and now I have a sick sister to watch over while my mom goes grocery shopping. Regardless, Scar and Eklipse, I'll let these two in and try my best to get the IC going this afternoon.

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Unfortunately, weather has been crummy today and I haven't been able to get online much, and I've got to leave in a few minutes and will be gone until Sunday. I'll talk to you people then.

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Pulling out Legend of Zelda Majora's Mask. Alright. Who else agrees with Star?

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Totally going to make a "Star Dustroyer" to go with "Exploding Star Dust" XD

In all seriousness, I rather like these cards. Just some minor OGG stuff, and I mean really minor. Like spelling out numbers rather than putting the numeral and a couple of capitalization issues ("Spell card" instead of "Spell Card" for example).

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Just worry about getting your character(s) made before finishing all the cards.

By the way, Scar: If you keep sappin' Mahz's server, we may have some problems lol j/k

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So I might have to push back the IC starting date if everyone else is in the same boat.

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Eklipse

Alondite:
This would seem to be in need of either an activation cost or a maintenance cost, more likely the former than the latter. There are also a few OGG mistakes in this.

Sample Correction:
Discard 1 card; equip this card to a "Swordsman" monster. The equipped monster may attack all monsters your opponent controls, once each.

Devouring Sword:
There are a number of OGG mistakes here as well as a need to limit of some sort. This is more powerful than "Axe of Despair" in the way that rather than returning to the top of your Deck when it is destroyed, thus limiting your next turn's draw, it activates directly from the Graveyard, making this a very powerful recycle ability.

Sample Correction:
Equip only to a Warrior-Type monster. The equipped monster gains 700 ATK; also, it must attack, if able. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard and you control a "Swordsman" monster, you can: Equip this card to 1 "Swordsman" monster you control. You may only control 1 "Devouring Sword".

Masamura:
Surprisingly, I have no complaints here for limits. Only OGG.

Sample Correction:
Equip only to a "Swordsman" monster. Once per turn, if the equipped monster would be destroyed by your opponent's card effect, you can: Banish 1 "Swordsman" monster from your Graveyard, and if you do, negate the activation and destroy it.

Sharpened Blades:
I'm just going to offer an alternative to this.

Sample Correction:
Monsters you control gain 500 ATK for each Equip Spell equipped to them.

Swordsman's Resolve:
Get rid of the quotation marks around the effect. Maybe specify Level 5 or higher Warrior-Type monster to make it more relevant to the deck. If not, this becomes a really good splashable card. Which, don't get me wrong, that's fine if you want it that way, but if you want it more relevant, you can add Warrior-Type.

Tyrfing:
Make it specific to Warrior-Types or "Swordsman" monsters. Otherwise, good.

Silent Cape:
MUAHAHAHAHA! Screw MSTing my "Call of the Haunted" now! I've got this Equip Spell that keeps it from destroying my monster! MUAHAHAHA! *Ahem* Sorry. I shall just . . . post this minor correction here and move on my way.

Sample Correction:
Equip only to a Warrior-Type monster. It is unaffected by Trap Cards.

I'll post my review of your other cards later. The most noticeable problems I could find was in your Equip Spells, so I went for them first.

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I'm going to go through today and decide which ones are good and which ones need work. You may not be alone.

EDIT: Actually, Valin and Yuko are the only finished CS's thus far. 0.0

Time to add them to the OP and edit some cards. Whoo!

Yu-Gi-Oh! Summon Masters [REBOOT]

Been a little busier than expected today, and I'll have to leave before long. I'll open one up tomorrow.