Shadowcatcher

The Next Avengers

Tori turned to a girl who spoke to her. "My tower is...perfection. Top 50 floors are all us baby. But actually now that i think about it, the tower is big, but it could be bigger. Though i'll need to build a new arc reactor if i want to scale up the size. I actually dont remember reading any of my fathers work on how to build a new one. ...Ah how hard can it be? ...by the way, who are you?" she asked as they walked to towards the top of the carrier. The thing couldn't land on her tower so they'd need to pile into a helicopter to bring them down.

The Shadows of Aeios

@Lucius

can i take a moment to admire your icon? its a freaking bunneh! *mind blown*

thanks for the feedback! i'm one who accepts criticism and i do see what you mean by the armor being a bit out of place and too form fitting. though i guess i just overlooked the fact that this is a different time period with different styles of armor. i suppose i'll look for other pictures tomorrow when i'm fully awake. i wish i could provide you with an essay like you've written me but, im actually struggling to see straight.

anyway as for the sword and shield, i suppose i was not paying too much attention to wether it looked too nice to use (if thats basically what you were saying. if not please clarify.) i guess i was looking for something pretty and not realistic. Um, but really will it affect the rp at all? i dont see how something like that would be a problem. she knows people. ^^

so yeah thanks for the feedback! i would like to hear a GM's opinion on the matter and i'll gladly change anything that desperately needs to change. ^^

well would you look at that. i've written a small essay!

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@chrome

thanks ^^ i shall wait and see about the armor and sword then. ...what seems wrong about it? is there a particular requirement?

speaking of Roran i dont think i've ever had a conversation with him....is he as mean as everyone says? cuz i cry easily you know... ...and is he a guy? really, honestly i dont even know >.<

@Roran

hello! i dont think we've spoken before. if we have im sorry for not remembering. its not you its me. ^^;

why does Alice call you tummy cat? Are you secretly a really nice person? how many toes do you have? whats your favorite color? do you like one direction? how come our new gen characters havent met yet? do you eat grapes? ...have i asked to many questions? dont yell at me, i'm cute! *runs away*

The Next Avengers

Tori looked skeptical that the two's fight was ending, but she didn't care as long as they didn't break anything irreplacable. "Okay, if anyone doesn't want to come, i wont force you." she paused. "Well lets go! Team bonding time!"

She skipped out of the room and looked behind her to see who was coming. "C'mon Fury, you gotta take us over the tower." she said pulling his trench coat lightly before walking away. After a moment her compacted suit beeped twice before light boosters allowed it to hover and fly after her slowly.

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"I swear...that my loyalty lies only to the High King of the Empire. Everyone else I will crush beneath my feet."

Name :
Melisa Rynir
Nicknames :
Mel
Gender :
Female
Age and birthday :
Age 26, Born in the year 1276 on the 14th of March
Origin :
The High House of Rynir

Length and build :
5'8. Toned, not too muscular.
Weight :
144 lbs
Sexuality :
Hetero. Widowed.

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Appearances :

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Occupation :
Three year graduate from the Deliar Academy. Currently an Optio in the Rehonian Legion. She has been told in the past that her rage and vengeful attitude keep her from becoming a Tribune or Legate.

Favorite phrase/saying :
"Don't stick to any one thing, you'll find when tested that you can no longer fly."

Tagline: "Move it. Else I will squash you like an ant."

Favorite Food :
Apple Pie

Favorite Weather and Season :
Summer. When it is so hot your skin blisters.

Patron God/Goddess :

Rolor

Skelatia

Brafald

Araos

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Personality :
Melisa can often be described as cold, uncaring, harsh...all of which would be true. She hates alot of things, likes few things, and often points out one's flaws. She is a strict leader but does her job well. A woman of few words who only speaks when barking out orders or complaining...she has no interest in getting anyone to like her. Her goal is to prepare her soldiers to protect the land, not grovel at a man's feet in hopes for friendship. Getting close to her is...unlikely.

History :
The second oldest in family with Patricia. She was not always the bitter woman she is at present. Her life was nice growing up. She was spoiled until her younger siblings came around and then she was expected to fend for herself. At a young age she dreamed of serving in the Legion, but neglected to join the Academy in Deliar because she fell in love. To a man she wed, she bore a son. Married two years before they were ripped from existence in a tragic bandit attack in a small villiage outside Hials. Her son and husband were both killed, but they spared her for a reason unknown. She was forever changed into someone viewed as cold and heartless. But really...her withdraw is the only way she's found to deal with the pain.

That same tragic year she joined the Academy. She passed with flying colors, quickly surpassing her peers and finishing ahead of her time. Now as an Optio of three years, Melisa is known for her iron fist as she leads her Tessari's. Any soldier she deems unworthy she will squash the spirits of and send packing, without even a blink of sleep lost. Many stay away from her, and soldiers tease anyone unfortunate enough to be under her command. She now rarely speaks to anyone, let alone anyone in her family.

Theme song :
Evanescence: ~Made of Stone~

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Clothing and/or armor :
Armor used in battle:


'Casual' Armor worn around:


Tools and weapons :
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Name :
Sword
Description :
Melisa's Sword. Made of the strongest, most expensive metal.
Appearance :

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Name :
Shield
Description :
Melisa's shield. A gift from her Grandfather
Appearance :

shield

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Name :
Melisa's Ring Necklace
Description :
A simple necklace that holds her deceased husbands ring.
Appearance :

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Skill/Abilities :

Skilled Sword Fighter

Good at Horse Riding

Can read and write

Quite the tactician

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Traits

Manipulative

Agressive

Perceptive of others feelings/emotions

A bit unorthadox...in everything

Expirenced Optio

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i'll be posting my second CS here soon for review.

Edit: And geez Alice, i didnt think i had to teach Alicia not to talk to strangers. What the heck? Next time a man approaches you and your under the age of 12 STAB HIM AND RUN HOME!!!!

The Next Avengers

Tori looked a bit nervous. "My mom said you guys can chill at Stark Tower if you wanted. I for one dont want to fly around in a tin can-"

"Miss, you already do that." Jarvis spoke into her ear piece.

Rolling her eyes she ignored him and looked at the two Asgardians. "I'd like everyone to come by. If you can stand my larger than life ego, you might actually enjoy yourselves. However... my mom nor my tower are Asgardian proof. I'd like you to settle your arguments here first." she said with a smile. The rivalry was funny considering the story behind it. In the end, neither of them was right or wrong. "Though i'm putting ten mil on the chick, she seems scary. No offense Thor Mark II, you look nice too."

She paused. "Oh speaking of, Jarvis...how are the blueprints for Mark III of Stark Tower?" she tuned out the bickering to listen to his answer.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

@Gero

why do you center everything....?

@J8cob and Alice

that collab was beautiful. so sad...

The Next Avengers

Tori felt the clink of paper that hit her helmet while she was listening to her mothers message. Tori had rolled her eyes at him but he wouldn't be able to see. "Yeah i wouldn't mind if we all crashed at the tower. Floors 50 and up are mine so, we should be good. The downstairs are my moms buisness so we dont really need to go down there. ...Jarvis call mom please."
"Calling Pepper Stark."

It rang for quite a while until she heard her mom's voice on the other side.

"Tori is that you?"
"Yeah. Hey mom, um i was-"
"Oh good. How do i work this washing machine. I pushed the wrong buttons and i dont know how to change it."
"Oh, well you just initiate the override squence which will activate a reverse-"
"English honey. Please."
Sighing she said "Push reset then put in what you want it to do."
"Oh. Thats it?"
"Yeah. So would you mind if i bring some friends by?"
"Do they break things?"
"Maybe."
"Build things?"
"Possibly."
"Have crazy powers?"
"Well one breathes fire and another has a god's hammer. A couple of trained killers."
"Do i need to feed them."
"I believe their famished."
"Can they snap me in two if they wanted?"
"Uh...im sure they can come up with more creative ways to end you."

There was a long silence. "You are so much like your dad...and well dont they sound charming? Fine...bring 'em by."

"Thanks! Byeeeee!" she said before terminating the call and removing the helmet.

"We got a yes!" she said excitedly before pushing a button on one of her bracelets. The suit compacted down to about suitcase size and she stood on the bed. "Director Fury can you fly us over Stark Tower?"

The Next Avengers

Tori followed the others into the room as she fiddled with her bracelet. "Calibration is a bit off Jarvis...and i still need to fix your speech. Here, sit on the bed." she said, talking to the suit Jarvis controlled. She removed the helmet and sat next to it as she saw everyone piling up in the room. "What? No chips, dip, cocktails?" she asked absently as she fiddled with the back of the helmet. A zap of electricity shocked her hand and she squealed. "Careful miss." was Jarvis's apologetic reply.

When she heard someone mention her tower, she looked up and pointed to the speaker. "Yes. Captain America Mark II is right. I had the room for everyone but nooo. I was ripped away from my beautiful tower." she mumbled that last part to herself as she realigned a few cables before putting the helmet back on the suit.

"Okay lets hear you."

"It seems to be working fine Miss. ....you have a new message from your mom."

"Why didn't you tell me she called?"

"You were too busy talking, as usual."

"Really?...nice. Buy a Stark phone guys. You get signal 40,000 feet above the ground. Only for the very low price of 10,000 dollars." she looked excited before putting the helmet on and listening to the message.